第一易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)：
Government claims that teacher should teach student some self-protection skills.
錯(cuò)誤分析：可數(shù)名詞不可“*用”。
在正式英文寫(xiě)作里，凡是常規(guī)的可數(shù)名詞，必須在前面有限定詞，比如冠詞a/an/the，物主代詞my/their/your等等，指示代詞this/that等等。否則，這個(gè)可數(shù)名詞就必須用復(fù)數(shù)。而在這個(gè)句子中g(shù)overnment要么用the government，要么用government，后面的teacher和student都一樣要加上復(fù)數(shù)。
因此，這個(gè)句子要改成：The government claims that teachers should teach students some self-protection skills.
第二易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)：
Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.
錯(cuò)誤分析：英語(yǔ)中動(dòng)詞原形是不能作主語(yǔ)的，而且在這個(gè)句子中如果work做了動(dòng)詞，后面can enhance也是動(dòng)詞，就出現(xiàn)雙謂語(yǔ)的情況，因此把work改成working.
因此，這個(gè)句子要改成：Working at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.
第三易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)：
Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers.
錯(cuò)誤分析：詞性使用錯(cuò)誤。
different的詞性為形容詞，而修飾形容詞或者動(dòng)詞的時(shí)候應(yīng)該用副詞。
因此，這個(gè)句子要改成：Intelligent students should not be treated differently by their teachers.
第四易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)：
A lot of houses were collapsedin the earthquake.
錯(cuò)誤分析：句中出現(xiàn)雙謂語(yǔ)。
句中collapse已經(jīng)為動(dòng)詞，再加be動(dòng)詞之后就變成了被動(dòng)結(jié)構(gòu)，此處be純屬多余。
因此，這個(gè)句子要改成：A lot of housescollapsedin the earthquake.
第五易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)：
Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself.
錯(cuò)誤分析：當(dāng)我們用到代詞的時(shí)候，就一定要看所指代的名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)，根據(jù)名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)來(lái)使用相應(yīng)的代詞。
因此，這個(gè)句子要改成：Some parents do not obey traffic rules themselves.
第六易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)：
Letters were the most important way of communication in the past , e-mail becomes its biggest rival now.
錯(cuò)誤分析：這個(gè)句子的句型并不屬于簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句、或者復(fù)合句中的任何一種的定義。因?yàn)槌霈F(xiàn)了兩套動(dòng)詞，因此我們可以將這個(gè)句子變成并列句，而前后兩句之間是對(duì)比關(guān)系，所以我們可以在中間加對(duì)比連詞或副詞，比如while。
因此，這個(gè)句子要改成：Letters were the most important way of communication in the past while now e-mail becomes its biggest rival now.
第七易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)：
There are a great deal of people go abroad every year.
錯(cuò)誤分析：當(dāng)我們用到there be句型的時(shí)候，后面不能再出現(xiàn)動(dòng)詞原形。因此要將go變換形式，改為going，或者將句子轉(zhuǎn)換為定語(yǔ)從句，在people后面加上who。
因此，這個(gè)句子要改成：There are a great deal of people going abroad every year. 或There are a great deal of people who go abroad every year.