2016年9月3日托福獨(dú)立寫作預(yù)測及答案解析

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1.agree or disagree: universities and colleges must do a better job of preparing students for the workplace.
     agree:
     1.論點(diǎn):就業(yè)變的越來越難了,學(xué)生應(yīng)該在盡量在大學(xué)里培養(yǎng)工作技能方便畢業(yè)好更好的就業(yè)。論證過程:先描述現(xiàn)在就業(yè)的高難度,在中國每年有幾百萬的大學(xué)畢業(yè)生,但真正能夠找到令自己滿意工作的的卻占很小的部分。然后分析大學(xué)生在大學(xué)期間可以培養(yǎng)的能力有哪些。給細(xì)節(jié):例如學(xué)設(shè)計專業(yè)的學(xué)生可以通過實(shí)習(xí),去更好的學(xué)會應(yīng)用他們所需要的軟件如dreamwaver,PS。
     2.論點(diǎn):大學(xué)也可以通過這種方式吸收更優(yōu)質(zhì)的學(xué)生,從而創(chuàng)造一個更好的學(xué)習(xí)氛圍。論證中心:描述現(xiàn)在的大學(xué)氛圍被社會普通批評。主要原因還是中國的大學(xué)缺乏職業(yè)培訓(xùn),而且管理的不夠科學(xué),使得很多大學(xué)生在大學(xué)期間荒廢了學(xué)業(yè)。因此,越來越多的家長送孩子去美國學(xué)習(xí),而美國的學(xué)校卻非常重視孩子的能力提升,尤其重視學(xué)生的社會實(shí)踐。甚至很多大學(xué)的課程是直接為世界五百強(qiáng)輸送人才。例如普渡大學(xué)計算機(jī)專業(yè)會開設(shè)CS課程,而教授就是來自蘋果公司的高級工程師。因此可以從美國大學(xué)能夠吸引世界的精英學(xué)生前往求學(xué)以及對比國內(nèi)大學(xué)的現(xiàn)在尷尬狀態(tài)的對比,不難發(fā)現(xiàn)。學(xué)校更應(yīng)該重視學(xué)生就業(yè)能力的培養(yǎng)。
     3.讓步段:也有很多人支持,大學(xué)生階段,學(xué)生的主要精力還是放在學(xué)習(xí)專業(yè)課上面。反駁:大部分的專業(yè)課也是為了將來就業(yè)做準(zhǔn)備的,因此學(xué)習(xí)專業(yè)課的同時,學(xué)校也應(yīng)該重視讓學(xué)生學(xué)會應(yīng)該這些知識。例如學(xué)習(xí)計算機(jī)專業(yè)的學(xué)生,可以嘗試著去設(shè)計一些新潮的App軟件。例如Ins的創(chuàng)始人就是大學(xué)期間開始嘗試設(shè)計發(fā)明的,終成為世界名人。
     2.The car has had greater effect on the society than the airplane has.
     choose cars.
     1.with the widespread use of cars, our time schedule can be much more flexible.
     2.cars are more affordable as opposed to those airplanes that could cost us millions dollars to purchase.
     3.admittedly, airplanes can help us realize the dream of flying. However, when it comes to the frequency of taking airplane, it cannot be compared with the chances of driving a private car.
     3.Technology has made our life more complicated rather than simpler.
     choose: life is more complicated
     1.Technological development has exposed us to various threats such as environmental deterioration, information explosion and privacy intrusion.
     2.The use of many electronic devices has estranged us from our families and friends.
     3.Admittedly, technology has improved our work efficiency. However, it also intensified the employment issue that many countries including America and China are facing.
     4. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to maintain a small circle of close friends over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make new friends easily.
     選維持老朋友關(guān)系:
     1
     論點(diǎn):現(xiàn)在人們太忙,沒有時間結(jié)交新朋友city employees are too devoted to their career to make new friends.
     解釋:忙于工作,承受巨大的工作壓力(suffer tremendous workloads). 甚至周末都在工作(The weekends are occupied by endless job assignments).
     例子: 拿朋友舉例(The personal experience of Daniel, one of my close friends, can prove why it is impossible for current citizens to make new friends) 從事計算機(jī)領(lǐng)域( works in the area of computer programming) 幾乎每天熬夜(burn the midnight oil night after night). 去年為了完成一個公司要求完成的App,連續(xù)工作了兩個月。因此可以看出他根本沒有時間去認(rèn)識新的朋友(In order to accomplish the task assigned by the company, he worked with his teammates for two months in a row. Therefore, there was no time for him to be acquainted with strangers)。
     2
     論點(diǎn):老朋友更值得信任(old friends are more trustworthy)
     解釋:人們更愿意和老朋友分享他們的秘密(People are more willing to share their secrets with their old friends because trust is built on a long term relationship)
     例子 :拿自己舉例,我只會和我的好朋友分享我的一些秘密以及一些快樂的時光,在我中學(xué)畢業(yè)后,和家里發(fā)生了一些矛盾(had a quarrel with my parents)。然后和幾個好朋友一起約著出去旅行,在旅途中和朋友們一起欣賞沿途風(fēng)景(enjoy the beautiful sceneries along the journey),爬山過程中融入自然(be involved in the nature while climbing the mountain),終由中學(xué)階段的長期學(xué)習(xí)所積累的壓力全部釋放了(on the journey, the huge pressure caused by the long-term study in high school was released and I recognized the mistake I made after talking with my friends. Ultimately, I took an apology to my parents )。
     5. Government have done enough to educate the people the importance of a balanced lifestyle and healthy eating.
     政府已經(jīng)在人們均衡的生活方式以及健康的飲食習(xí)慣方面教育上做的足夠好了
     不同意:
     1.政府過度的關(guān)注經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展,而忽略了人們的飲食健康。 雖然經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展提升了綜合國力,也為市民們了建立并且完善了更多的基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施,但是普通人的生活節(jié)奏卻逐漸的變快了。 人們作為社會大家庭中的一員必須投入投入到工作當(dāng)中,而經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展必然導(dǎo)致各個行業(yè)的快速發(fā)展,而行業(yè)的快速發(fā)展又必將導(dǎo)致該行業(yè)的企業(yè)有更大的目標(biāo),從而導(dǎo)致處于這些企業(yè)的員工承擔(dān)更多的職業(yè)和任務(wù),因此也承擔(dān)了巨大壓力,健康的飲食習(xí)慣也就無從談起了。
     2.政府過度的關(guān)注科技發(fā)展,而科技發(fā)展有給人們的健康帶來了負(fù)面印象。雖然科技發(fā)展確實(shí)改變了人們的生活,但同時也使得人們的生活方式變的不均衡,飲食習(xí)慣變的不健康。具體例子可以說人們過度依賴科技產(chǎn)品,且快餐的出現(xiàn),飽受爭議的轉(zhuǎn)基因食品的出現(xiàn)都使得
     人們的飲食習(xí)慣出現(xiàn)很大的弊病。
     3.讓步段:確實(shí)政府已經(jīng)開始提倡健康飲食,但是力度依然不夠
     6. some students prefer to have their final grades determined by numerous small assignments, whereas others prefer to have their final grades determined by only a few large ones. Which do you prefer?
     終成績?nèi)Q于很多小的學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù) vs 有限的幾次大的任務(wù)
     選有限的幾次大的任務(wù):
     1.對于學(xué)生有好處:學(xué)生可以被解放出來,會有更多的時間精力投入自己想做的事情(因?yàn)椴恍枰恢比?zhǔn)備各種測試)。舉例子,可以說大學(xué)生更應(yīng)該注重能力的培養(yǎng),而不是書本上的知識,如學(xué)市場的學(xué)生,除了課本知識,社會實(shí)踐與公司實(shí)習(xí)更重要。如果時間被花費(fèi)在很多的小的任務(wù)上,那么久沒有時間積累社會經(jīng)驗(yàn)和培養(yǎng)職業(yè)技能。
     2.對于老師有好處: 老師可以被解放出來,因?yàn)椴挥迷谡n堂一直講與考試或者作業(yè)相關(guān)的內(nèi)容。舉例:大學(xué)老師因此會有更多的精力投入研究,老師也可以在課堂中不用只講解考試的內(nèi)容,可以多分享一些補(bǔ)充知識,對于學(xué)生未來的就業(yè)更有幫助
     3.讓步段
     7. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? If people are on vacation (holiday), they should leave their mobile phones at home.
     同意:
     1.
     論點(diǎn):人們能夠更好的陪家人or放松
     解釋:現(xiàn)代社會人們對于電子設(shè)備的過度依賴往往會使得人們不知不覺中忽略了和朋友還有家人的溝通,因此在假期的時候,人們應(yīng)該選擇不要懈怠手機(jī)電話,將更多的經(jīng)歷放在家人朋友身上。
     例子:在過去,沒有這些移動電子設(shè)備,人們之間的關(guān)系反而更加緊密,因?yàn)樗麄儠r常在一起去參加社交活動等。而現(xiàn)在雖然電子設(shè)備方便了人們的溝通,但是人們在一起活動的時間卻變的少了,漸漸地,人們之間的關(guān)系都會漸漸疏遠(yuǎn)了。因此在過節(jié)的時候,將手機(jī)放在家里無疑是一個不錯的選擇,人們可以避免突然的電話騷擾,也可以杜絕一直玩手機(jī)的壞習(xí)慣。人們能夠更加投入的去和彼此交流活動。如人們可以選擇一起去遠(yuǎn)足,野營,爬山等等。結(jié)論:過節(jié)期間選擇不帶手機(jī)有助于人們之間的關(guān)系更加緊密。
     2.
     論點(diǎn):人們能改掉過度依賴手機(jī)的不好習(xí)慣
     解釋:隨著社會快速發(fā)展,人們不得不每天使用移動電子設(shè)備,然而很多人除了溝通以外,還會花很多時間去在電子設(shè)備上看電影or玩游戲,這無疑對人們的身體健康和行為習(xí)慣帶來負(fù)面的影響。
     例子:現(xiàn)在社會,帶著眼鏡的孩子隨處可見。很大一部分原因是因?yàn)楹⒆踊颂嗟臅r間去玩手機(jī)。甚至在地鐵里,也會經(jīng)??匆姾⒆幽弥謾C(jī)看著電子競技的視頻,也有些孩子拿著手機(jī)玩優(yōu)秀,如部落沖突。除了孩子,很多的成年人也過度的依賴手機(jī),如我自己就是一個例子,會在手機(jī)上下載小說去打發(fā)平時在上下班路上的時間,然而這卻是對于我的視力帶來了很大的影響。另外我會漸漸感覺到很不習(xí)慣,當(dāng)我不看不到我手機(jī)的時候。如果人們選擇在假期的時候不帶手機(jī)在身邊,人們就能漸漸的改掉對于手機(jī)依賴的習(xí)慣。
     結(jié)論:假期不帶手機(jī)可以幫助人們戒掉過度依賴手機(jī)的壞習(xí)慣,對于人們的身體也能來帶來好處。
     8. Parents should not express their disagreement to their teachers if parents find the teaching method is not right.
     采用不同意寫法:當(dāng)家長發(fā)現(xiàn)教學(xué)方法不當(dāng),應(yīng)該表達(dá)出和老師的不同
     1.從老師角度出發(fā):能夠監(jiān)督老師的教學(xué)行為,因?yàn)楝F(xiàn)在有很多的老師缺乏責(zé)任心,并沒有投入太多的精力投入到教學(xué)中,而家長通過這種方式能夠起到監(jiān)督的作用。
     2.從學(xué)生角度出發(fā):教學(xué)方法的改進(jìn)能夠使得給學(xué)生帶來直接的好處。如學(xué)習(xí)外語很多老師的教學(xué)方法是完全的灌輸語法結(jié)構(gòu)或者詞匯。而因?yàn)榧议L曾經(jīng)扮演過學(xué)生的角色,所以能夠體會到語言環(huán)境以及課堂趣味性的重要性,從而給老師提出建議,從而給學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)帶來好處。
     3.讓步段: 讓步部分:指出教師方法不當(dāng)使得教師失去威信或者有人認(rèn)為會傷害老師和家長的感情。 反駁:可以通過私下溝通的方式,且家長注意溝通時候的態(tài)度。
     9. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way for people to relax is to spend time alone.
     Disagree:
     1.admittedly, spending time alone can avoid unexpected disruption. However, our normal days have been occupied by either job assignments or academic tasks and it would be impossible for us to communicate with others. Weekends and holidays are worthier to be used as a chance to stay with others.
     2.spending time with friends can be a better chance for us to relax and strengthen our friendship.
     3.Staying with families is another greater choice for us to relieve pressure since we can learn many life lessons from our families while exchanging wha we’ve been through with them.
     10. It is as important for older people to learn new things as it is for younger people.
     Disagree
     1.when it comes to job requirements, young people are supposed to be more skilled in learning new things to maintain competitiveness.
     2.speaking of academic career, students have to be versed in learning new things or they can hardly graduate from schools.
     3.Admittedly, learning new things can help old people avoid solitude. For instance,with the popularity of computers, old people can learn how to use them as an effective to kill some time.however, there will be better ways for old people to relax like doing morning exercises and traveling.
     11. Which is the best way for students to make friends? a. participating in sport teams, b. volunteering for community service, c. traveling.
     sports teams
     1.sports will make them better aware of cooperation, competition as well as team spirit among teammates.
     2.With the same goal, fighting for a success, teammates’ relations will be tightened.
     3.Admittedly, volunteering for community service and traveling can offer us more chances to meet a number of people. However, most of those temporary friends will be forgotten easily.
     12. The most important thing for a big company is to improve the efficiency and proficiency of its employees.
     disagree:
     1.increase the salaries (in the money-oriented society, the most urging factor for an employe would be how much they can earn through their efforts)
     2.pay attention to maintaining the relationship with clients. (the bigger a company is, the more urgently it needs to maintain the constantly growing number of customers. Meanwhile, there will always be some problems occurring between a company and its clients)
     13. Do you agree or disagree :The government must make choices about how to spend its money in amusing the people. Given the choice between spending tax dollars on the arts or sports, it should choose to spend those dollars on the arts.
     choose to invest to sports
     1.investing to sporting facilities can help to improve citizens’ physical and mental health.
     2.the investment to sports can provide citizens with more chances to enlarge social circles. Children, city employees and the elder can all benefit a lot from sporting facilities.
     14. It was easier to be successful in the past than it is today.
     disagree:
     1.people can receive the education of higher quality. With far more advanced facilities and more prestigious professors than before, more elites can be cultivated
     2.there have been more job vacancies than before.
     15. Do you agree or disagree with the statement: The people in the past were friendlier than people today.
     不同意:
     1.
     論點(diǎn):科技發(fā)展疏遠(yuǎn)人們關(guān)系,因此,人們顯然不如從前友好了。
     解釋:人們過度依賴電子產(chǎn)品,減少了人際活動的次數(shù)
     例子:多例,吃飯的時候,人們玩手機(jī)的現(xiàn)象更多了。坐公交時候,更多的人玩手機(jī)而忽略幫助需要幫助的人。在學(xué)校的時候,人們通過微信郵件溝通的方式也變的更多,面對面溝通的頻率也大大下降。
     結(jié)論:現(xiàn)在社會上越來越多的人變的冷漠,很大部分歸咎于科技發(fā)展
     2.
     論點(diǎn):社會壓力的增加使得人們有著更多負(fù)面情緒
     解釋:社會發(fā)展的必然趨勢導(dǎo)致市民承受更多的壓力,有意無意之間,人們內(nèi)心就會積累著大量負(fù)面情緒。
     例子:多例,一個軟件工程師每天需要工作遠(yuǎn)超9小時,而且超負(fù)荷的腦力工作讓他們變得精疲力盡,長時間的投入工作也使得他們承擔(dān)過多壓力。再例如證券公司的理財經(jīng)理每天要分析大量數(shù)據(jù)更他們的客戶帶來收益的保障,這種枯燥的工作方式讓他們會變的脾氣更暴躁。結(jié)論:很明顯,快節(jié)奏的生活以及工作方式是另外一個人們變的不像過去那么友好的因素。
     3.
     讓步段:誠然,教育的提升使得人們變的比過去更加有文化。然而,教育水平的發(fā)展過度重視的是生產(chǎn)力的提升而忽視了素質(zhì)教育。
     16. In the past, people were more interested in improving their neighborhoods than they are now.(可以借鑒第14題)
     Agree:
     1.people become increasingly reliant on those high-tech products, leading to the estrangement among friends and neighbors.
     2.People are too devoted to their career to care about their neighborhood.
     17. Workers would be more satisfied if they have various kinds of work to do during work day instead of doing the same job all day long.
     1.with various tasks to accomplish, the job appears to be more interesting and challenging.
     2.Worker’s capabilities can experience a huge development.
     18. People nowadays spend much more time than they should using text messages and new technologies such as social media to communicate with each other.
     同意:現(xiàn)在的人太依賴新科技
     1. 對于學(xué)生而言-現(xiàn)在的學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)比較依賴網(wǎng)路和高科技產(chǎn)品,如學(xué)語言的時候電子詞典充當(dāng)一個很好的角色,網(wǎng)絡(luò)能夠提供大量的資源供學(xué)生參考,此外網(wǎng)上也有很多的公開課讓學(xué)生能夠在國內(nèi)也能接觸到世界上頂尖大學(xué)教授的課程。而且也有一些網(wǎng)上培訓(xùn)課程去幫助學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)。
     2. 對于工作的人而言-現(xiàn)在的商人不需要再像過去那樣頻繁的出差了,可以通過視頻會議或者電話會議的方式,這樣也使得這種跨國的企業(yè)能夠更加有效率地運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)。除此之外,郵件也被廣泛的應(yīng)用到工作當(dāng)作,領(lǐng)導(dǎo)去傳達(dá)和安排任務(wù),以及下屬對于工作的總結(jié)都能夠及時的發(fā)送。而且,現(xiàn)在很多公司的銷售和客服團(tuán)隊也會通過微信的方式與客戶保持良好的溝通。
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