2016年11月5日托福獨立寫作預測及思路解析

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1. In order to help high school students learn the sense of responsibility, it is necessary for them to do household work after school.   波波點睛:   題目大意:為了幫助中學生獲得責任感,有必要要求他們在放學后做家務。此題內(nèi)部暗含因果關系,考生千萬不要忽略此邏輯關系,否則會出現(xiàn)偏題。波波思路如下:   選擇同意: 即認為做家務可以培養(yǎng)責任感(對自己負責、對家庭負責)   1) 做家務--> 會學會生活技能à能夠獨立生活,照顧好自己-->對自己負責   2) 做家務-->分擔家庭負擔 --> 體會到父母的辛苦-->學會關心家人-->增強家庭的歸屬感à對家庭負責   選擇不同意: 即認為做家務不能夠培養(yǎng)責任感   做家務會占用孩子寶貴的學習時間à孩子不能及時完成作業(yè)à養(yǎng)成一種對自己不負責任的習慣   Firstly, requiring high school students to do house chores can squeeze their time spent on studying. As we know, the main duty and obligation for high schoolers is to have a good command of knowledge imparted by teachers. In order to successfully fulfill the obligation, students have to devote large amounts of time and energy to their study. In other words, it is an irresponsible behavior that students fail to finish assignments and tasks in the process of learning whatever excuse they have. However, the fact is that the trivial housework such as sweeping the floors and doing laundry will occupy a large proportion of time on the part of students, thus further tightening their already busy schedule. In this case, those students doing house chores are unlikely to assume the responsibility of finishing their schoolwork in time due to the limited time left.   2. 中學生年紀尚小會把家務看作負擔而不是責任,所以強求孩子做家務會引起孩子的反感甚至反抗   Besides, high schoolers are too young to understand the good intention of requiring them to do housework. As we all know, given the immature psychology and limited life experience on the part of people in their puberty, the concept of responsibility is far beyond their ability of understanding. Meanwhile, the defining character of those young people is the degree to which they are have an inclination to say “no” to any instruction which they are forced to follow. In this case, the request of making household chores mandatory for high school students may make them go against their parents. As a result, students will not gain a sense of obligation from the above request but have a terrible bond with their family members. What’s worse, some rebellious high schoolers may even harbor hatred towards their family.   2. Governments have done enough to educate people the importance of a balanced lifestyle and healthy eating.   波波點睛:此題目含義為“政府是否在向人們倡導健康生活方式和均衡飲食方面做得足夠好了”。稍加思考就會發(fā)現(xiàn),這個題目暗含著兩個方面即:健康的生活方式和均衡的飲食。波波老師建議,觀點選擇不同意,理由就從以上這兩個方面分別展開,具體如下:   理由一:政府在教育人們健康生活方式上面做得工作遠遠不夠,尤其是在宣傳工作和公共設施上。一方面政府在宣傳上力度不夠,以致于現(xiàn)代人們有各種各樣的不利于健康的生活習慣,比如說熬夜,吸煙,酗酒甚至吸毒。另一方面公共體育設施嚴重缺乏,導致人們無處健身。比如說我們小區(qū)周圍只有一個操場,體育設施也非常的有限,每次去鍛煉的時候,人都很多,而且有的設備已經(jīng)老化甚至根本無法正常使用。(Governments need to do more work on educating people the importance of healthy lifestyle, especially on publicity and the construction of public sports facilities. For one thing, due to lack of programs about healthy lifestyle, many people in the modern society pick up various bad habits, such as staying up late, smoking, drinking excessively and even taking drugs. For another, owing to the desperate shortage of public sports facilities, people can do exercises nowhere. For example, in my community, there is only a small play court with less sports equipment, which is full of people. Even worse, some equipment is out of use due to lack of regular maintenance. )   理由二:政府在飲食健康教育上做得也不好,尤其是在食品安全衛(wèi)生的監(jiān)管和規(guī)律飲食習慣的宣傳上。首先,食品安全在我國一直以來都是熱議話題。但是由于政府監(jiān)管不力,有很多商家在食品上以次充好。比如說三鹿。另外,政府沒有很好地強調均衡飲食的重要性,所以很多人會有非常不健康的飲食習慣。比如說,人們由于快節(jié)奏的生活大都會吃一些垃圾食品,以致于他們會患上高血壓,肥胖得疾病。同時,有些人甚至不吃早飯,這些習慣多對身體危害極大。 (In addition, the education of balanced eating habits requires more efforts from government, especially in the inspection of food hygiene and safety as well as publicity of regular eating habits. On one hand, food safety has always been one of the hottest topic in our country. Due to the limited inspection of government, many business owners use many illegal food addictives or chemicals in their products. On the other hand, many people formed bad eating habits without gaining sufficient guides from government. For example, many white-collars choose to eat junk foods due to the rapid pace of life. Other young people even do not have breakfast, all that do great harm to their health. )   3. Technology designed to make people’s lives simpler in fact make people’s lives more complicated.   波波點睛:   題目大意: 原先想要讓生活變得簡單的科技實際上讓生活變得復雜了。此題無論同意與否,分論點都很難想到原因,所以建議使用拆分,拆分題目中的technology 或life。 具體思路如下:主觀點選擇不同意,分論點分別證明科技讓通訊和交通變得方便了。   科技的進步讓人們之間的交流變得更加方便。通訊手段的多樣化讓人們隨時隨地都可以進行交流。比如手機VS 信件   Firstly, the advances in technology make the communication between people more convenient. There is no doubt that modern high technique has not only diversified the means of communication but also improved the efficiency of transferring information. In other words, thanks to the high-end electronic devices, people can talk with anyone regardless of the long distance between each other. For example, it has become a common phenomenon that nearly every individual, whether young or old, owns a cell phone, a portable electronic product. With the aid of Apps such as wechat, Skype and Facetime installed in the phone, it is possible to videochat with friends living abroad. We can hear their voice as well as see their facial expression and body language. However, in the past, writing letters, as the main way of conveying information, was much more time-consuming and unreliable.   2.科技的發(fā)展讓交通變得更高效。隨著交通技術的進步,更加先進安全的交通方式隨之出現(xiàn),這大大縮減了人們花在路上的時間。比如汽車、高鐵、飛機   The development of technology has made traffic more efficient. With the progress in technology of transport, the advent of more advanced means of transportation is the inevitable result, which greatly shortens the time spent in commuting or travelling. To be specific, the popularization of automobiles makes it possible for drivers to reach the destination on time. The high-speed rail in China carry millions of people across the nation every day in a shorter time. The well-developed aviation industry enables people arrive in any place on earth in 20 hours. All the above in the past was totally impossible.