1.由港澳國際投資公司投資的海口電站工程因其建設(shè)速度和質(zhì)量得到高度評價。
原譯文：The Haikou Power Station Project invested by the Hongkong-Macau International Investment Co,Ltd. was highly appraised for its construction speed and quality.
注：投資某項工程應(yīng)為invest in a project，在被動語態(tài)中不能漏去前置詞in。
應(yīng)譯為：The Haikou Power Station Project invested in(在某些情況下可用financed or funded) by the Hongkong-Macau International Investment Co., Ltd. was highly appraised for its construction speed and quality.
2.上海SFECO擁有5個控股子公司。
原譯文：Shanghai SFECO Group has 5 share-holding companies.
注：share-holding company指控制或持有某公司股權(quán)的股東公司。上述譯文意思是5個公司持有Shanghai SFECO Group的股份，換句話說，這5個公司是“老子”公司，因此顯然不符合中文原意。
應(yīng)譯為：Shanghai SFECO Group is a holding company of 5 subsidiary companies. 或Shanghai SFECO Group holds shares of 5 subsidiary companies.
3.中國民生銀行有限公司
原譯文：China Minsheng Banking Corporation, Ltd.
注：corporation本身即為有限公司，相當(dāng)于limited company，英譯中無需再加“Ltd”。
應(yīng)譯為：China Minsheng Banking Corporation
4.項目中標(biāo)之后，我們將立即開始前期準(zhǔn)備工作。
原譯文：After the bid is awarded, we shall immediately start our advance-phase preparation.
注：項目中標(biāo)應(yīng)為accept a bid or award the contract。顯然上述譯文把兩種表達(dá)法相混淆了。
應(yīng)譯為：After the bid is accepted (or the contract is awarded), we shall immediately start our advance-phase preparation.
5.歡迎您參觀我們交易會
原譯文：Welcome you to visit our fair!
注：譯文中welcome是動詞，因此此句是祈使句形式，省略的主語為第二人稱你(你們)，而不是中文所含的我(我們)之意。
應(yīng)譯為：We welcome you to visit our trade fair!
更簡潔而地道的譯法是：Welcome to our trade fair!