2016年雅思寫作:Essay Writing Coherence(2)

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    雅思考試中,寫作經(jīng)常是讓許多考生頭疼的部分。譬如,有的學(xué)生因?qū)ψ魑牡膖opic不熟悉而無(wú)話可說(shuō);有的學(xué)生因詞匯量不夠而限制了自己的獨(dú)特見(jiàn)地等等。于是,許多學(xué)生將背范文當(dāng)成了自己的“救命稻草”。 其實(shí),多背幾篇范文對(duì)自己寫作水平的提高確有幫助,比如,它可以幫助考生熟悉topic,從而不至于看到題目無(wú)話可說(shuō);還可以幫助考生擴(kuò)大詞匯量等。但單純依賴于背范文并不是一個(gè)萬(wàn)全之策,有許多考生,辛辛苦苦地背了許多篇范文,擁有了豐富的詞匯量,同時(shí)還擁有了自己獨(dú)到的見(jiàn)解,而寫的作文卻未必能拿高分。
    原因何在?
    也許你應(yīng)該思索一下你的文章是否像那些范文一樣條理清晰,結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn),邏輯嚴(yán)密.而這與一篇文章的組織結(jié)構(gòu)有很大關(guān)系。所以說(shuō),要想在雅思作文中拿高分,考生一定要熟悉作文的結(jié)構(gòu),在背范文時(shí)也要注意范文是怎么安排段落的,段落之間以及句子之間是怎么連接在一起的,運(yùn)用了哪些銜接手段等等。 一篇文章的組織結(jié)構(gòu)是很重要的。由于思維方式的差異,我們會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn),外國(guó)人的文章都是簡(jiǎn)單明了的,一般是讓你看了它的第一段就知道他要說(shuō)什么,甚至就知道了文章的組織結(jié)構(gòu)。所以,一定要在文章的組織結(jié)構(gòu)上下點(diǎn)工夫。
    Introduction
    例一:
    Question:
    Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed. Blood sports should be banned.
    To what extent to you agree or disagree?
    Answer:
    Despite the fact that killing animals for sport is popular in modern society, it remains a contentious issue. I believe that blood sports are cruel and uncivilized and so should be banned as soon as possible.
    Paraphrasing
    注意:不要抄襲問(wèn)題中的句子!
    Further Examples
    例二:
    Question:
    Science and technology have helped the world make many advances. The Arts, such as painting, theatre and dance, to name just three examples, however, are also valuable.
    What things do the Arts provide to the world that Science and Technology do not?
    Answer:
    Societies have developed rapidly over time due to the many advances in science and technology. However, the arts are also very important and provide our world with many things that science and technology cannot.
    例三:
    Question:
    According to a recent study, the more time people use the Internet, the less time they spend with real human beings. Some people say that instead of seeing the Internet as a way of opening up new communication possibilities world wide, we should be concerned about the effect this is having on social interaction.
    How far do you agree with this opinion?
    Answer:
    A recent study has shown that as people use the Internet more, they are spending less time with human beings. I believe that although this has increased the communication around the world in positive ways, it has also led to negative effects on the day-to-day social interaction of human beings.
    例四:
    Question:
    Unemployment has become an increasing problem in the recent past.
    What factors contribute to an increase in unemployment and what steps can be taken to solve the problem?
    Answer:
    Over recent years, the level of unemployment has been increasing at an alarming rate in many countries around the world. This essay will discuss the reasons for this increase and consider what practical solutions are available.
    例五:
    Question:
    Some people think children in secondary school should study international news as part of the curriculum. Others think that this would be a waste of time as there are already too many subjects for children to concentrate on.
    Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
    Answer:
    While some people are of the opinion that it would be useful to include international news as a subject in the school curriculum, others believe that this is a waste of students time because they are already overloaded with subjects to study. This essay will examine both sides of the issue.