2016年12月英語六級(jí)寫作常見錯(cuò)誤分析(11)

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Exercise W2
    The following topic sentences are only examples. Your sentences may be different.
    1. This is a strong topic sentence.
    2. This is a weak topic sentence because the rest of the paragraph
    describes what the writer does when he or she goes to the beach. A better topic sentence would be: “Whenever I have the opportunity to go to the beach, I always follow the same routine.”
    3. This is a weak topic sentence because the rest of the paragraph describes the various ways students can get to class. A better topic sentence would be: “For the many students who cannot afford a car, there are several alternative ways of getting to class.”
    Exercise W3
    These are only examples. Your topic sentences may be different.
    1. A dormitory room is cold and impersonal until several changes have been made to make it more inviting.
    2. American telephone books are divided into several sections.
    3. The fast-food restaurant has become popular for various reasons.