我們給大家看一些模板,說到模板想必很多思維懶惰的學生會很興奮,但是Tammy老師建議寫作文還是要寫出自己的風格,模板永遠是別人的,只是起參考作用,不要太依賴模板哦~
我們都是到寫作文開頭段寫的精彩不只會增加作文的亮點,寫的行云流水也會減輕前期寫作構(gòu)思的壓力,總之好處大大的,開頭段我們都知道無非就是改寫題目,改寫就是針對題目進行相應(yīng)的增加或刪減或替換單詞。下面我們就來看看2中開頭段的模板:
第一種是需要編一句名言的,適用于前期積累了一些名言或者比較正式的話題。
Sample
one(適用于有一些背景or有一個中心詞而且編得出來那個quotation的所有情況(二選一,agree
or disagree,除了個別);
要做的:想一句簡單的背景+編一句名言+改寫兩次題目
On
contemporary society(一般的背景)/
With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information
explosive era(與科技有關(guān)的背景),XX(中心詞)serves as a catalyst for our future
success/XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important
role in…/XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./很簡單的一句背景 ,However,people(universities,
government, citizen, society,) are/is invariably faced with such a question/
can’t help wondering:改寫題目1.Confucian
(Yu Qiuyu,
Mark Twain, William Shakespeare), (one of) the greatest and most influentialChinesephilosophers (scholars, educators, writers, thinkers, statesmen), has
insightfully commented, “___編____”I
cling to an unshakeable belief that his comment gives the answer to this
question:改寫題目2. Among countless factors which contribute to
my position are following conspicuous ones(最后一定排比結(jié)尾,且如果字數(shù)夠了這一句就不要)
第二種是不需要編名言,或者適用于比較非正式的話題。
Sample
two:(如果sample
one的名言編不出來或者不適合編如leisure
time,就用下面的)
要做的:想一句簡單的背景+改寫兩次題目+總起(最后寫)
On
contemporary society(一般的背景)/
With the advent of the technologically advanced society / On account of …,XX(中心詞)serves as a catalyst for our future
success/XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important
role in…/XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./ 很簡單的一句背景( 如so…that…/not only…but also).However,when it comes to the choice between
AA and BB/When asked about whether改寫題目1, people get into a dilemma.
According to my personality and experiences/As far as I am concerned/From my
perspective, I cling to an unshakeable belief that改寫題目2.以下最后決定怎樣寫:Among
countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous
ones(最后一定排比結(jié)尾)/AA not only…but also(2)/There are various merits
AA brings about, first of all, to…; secondly, to…;and lastly….
開頭段之后就是中間段落的論述:
2、分點一:分層論證 Basic to any understanding of the
benefits we can get from _______ is that__________/ First and foremost, On one
hand_________, On the other hand_________ Besides/ What’s more/ In
addition. 這一段主要說理,在分論點里可以加一些小的例子細節(jié),重點是要用一些精華句子!
3、分點二:舉例論證 Further leading credence to my
position is that____________ (簡單闡述/例子字不夠就多講點廢話)I can
think of no better illustration than the example of(典型例子) / A
case in point is that(不是很典型)________,一句話總結(jié)例子:As a
result,強調(diào)句/倒裝句/表利弊的句型/反面論證如果沒有會怎樣
我們都是到寫作文開頭段寫的精彩不只會增加作文的亮點,寫的行云流水也會減輕前期寫作構(gòu)思的壓力,總之好處大大的,開頭段我們都知道無非就是改寫題目,改寫就是針對題目進行相應(yīng)的增加或刪減或替換單詞。下面我們就來看看2中開頭段的模板:
第一種是需要編一句名言的,適用于前期積累了一些名言或者比較正式的話題。
Sample
one(適用于有一些背景or有一個中心詞而且編得出來那個quotation的所有情況(二選一,agree
or disagree,除了個別);
要做的:想一句簡單的背景+編一句名言+改寫兩次題目
On
contemporary society(一般的背景)/
With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information
explosive era(與科技有關(guān)的背景),XX(中心詞)serves as a catalyst for our future
success/XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important
role in…/XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./很簡單的一句背景 ,However,people(universities,
government, citizen, society,) are/is invariably faced with such a question/
can’t help wondering:改寫題目1.Confucian
(Yu Qiuyu,
Mark Twain, William Shakespeare), (one of) the greatest and most influentialChinesephilosophers (scholars, educators, writers, thinkers, statesmen), has
insightfully commented, “___編____”I
cling to an unshakeable belief that his comment gives the answer to this
question:改寫題目2. Among countless factors which contribute to
my position are following conspicuous ones(最后一定排比結(jié)尾,且如果字數(shù)夠了這一句就不要)
第二種是不需要編名言,或者適用于比較非正式的話題。
Sample
two:(如果sample
one的名言編不出來或者不適合編如leisure
time,就用下面的)
要做的:想一句簡單的背景+改寫兩次題目+總起(最后寫)
On
contemporary society(一般的背景)/
With the advent of the technologically advanced society / On account of …,XX(中心詞)serves as a catalyst for our future
success/XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important
role in…/XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./ 很簡單的一句背景( 如so…that…/not only…but also).However,when it comes to the choice between
AA and BB/When asked about whether改寫題目1, people get into a dilemma.
According to my personality and experiences/As far as I am concerned/From my
perspective, I cling to an unshakeable belief that改寫題目2.以下最后決定怎樣寫:Among
countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous
ones(最后一定排比結(jié)尾)/AA not only…but also(2)/There are various merits
AA brings about, first of all, to…; secondly, to…;and lastly….
開頭段之后就是中間段落的論述:
2、分點一:分層論證 Basic to any understanding of the
benefits we can get from _______ is that__________/ First and foremost, On one
hand_________, On the other hand_________ Besides/ What’s more/ In
addition. 這一段主要說理,在分論點里可以加一些小的例子細節(jié),重點是要用一些精華句子!
3、分點二:舉例論證 Further leading credence to my
position is that____________ (簡單闡述/例子字不夠就多講點廢話)I can
think of no better illustration than the example of(典型例子) / A
case in point is that(不是很典型)________,一句話總結(jié)例子:As a
result,強調(diào)句/倒裝句/表利弊的句型/反面論證如果沒有會怎樣