雅思口語(yǔ)8分范文分析

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下面以社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)類話題social networking為例,為大家仔細(xì)講解考官提供的范文。當(dāng)然,此范文的評(píng)價(jià)是除去語(yǔ)音和現(xiàn)場(chǎng)發(fā)揮狀況的分?jǐn)?shù)考量,而從詞匯,句式,連貫度以及思維方式幾個(gè)方面進(jìn)行評(píng)判,僅供參考。
    1. What kinds of social networking websites do you like to use?
    Um…I suppose the main one I use is weibo, which is basically the equivalent of Twitter in the West. And um… as well as that, I occasionally use a website called renrenwang, which is essentially a Chinese version of Facebook, although I don’t really use it as much as I used to, because I think weibo’s a bit better.
    “你喜歡使用哪種社交網(wǎng)站?”這里的回答是微博,考生可以注意一下,開(kāi)始的“Um…I suppose……”似乎是有停頓的,但是為什么還能夠得高分呢?其實(shí)雅思口語(yǔ)適當(dāng)?shù)耐nD并不是壞事,有時(shí)候還能夠給大家思考答案的時(shí)間,上述的I suppose其實(shí)就表明了回答者在思考。再來(lái)看which is……非限定性定語(yǔ)從句,對(duì)微博的解釋,相當(dāng)于西方的Twitter。And um… as well as that連接詞,順承到人人網(wǎng)的介紹,中文版的臉書(shū),及其優(yōu)勢(shì)。整個(gè)回答十分完整,定語(yǔ)從句和讓步狀語(yǔ)從句使句式避免單一,詞匯顯然是合格的。有明顯的連接詞和交流標(biāo)記詞,雖然有停頓但是能夠給人一種在思考,與人交流的感覺(jué),所以整個(gè)回答不管是從詞匯,句式還是連貫度上都是非常優(yōu)秀的范文,而且能夠讓人感受到交流的氛圍是十分難能可貴的。
    考生還可以參考積累下面提煉出來(lái)的一些短語(yǔ)和詞匯:
    the equivalent of – 相等于
    Essentially -大體上;基本上
    Chinese version – 中國(guó)版
    2. Is it easy to find real friends on a social networking site?
    I’m honestly not that sure because I’ve never really made a big effort to find friends on the Internet, but thinking about it, I’d say it’s probably not that easy, although it’s definitely possible, because um… I think you never quite know someone properly until you’ve met them in the flesh. At least that’s been my experience anyway!
    “在社交網(wǎng)站上交到真正的朋友簡(jiǎn)單嗎?”——首先,坦白的說(shuō),是不確定的,因?yàn)闆](méi)有試圖在社交網(wǎng)站上交過(guò)朋友。但是but thinking about it, I’d say it’s probably not that easy, although it’s definitely possible, because轉(zhuǎn)折連詞和交流標(biāo)記詞同時(shí)使用,陳述自己的看法……整個(gè)銜接是非常緊密的。而且在句式詞匯上的運(yùn)用也是沒(méi)有問(wèn)題的。同時(shí)也能夠給人以英式思維思考交流的感覺(jué)。所以綜合起來(lái)此答案也在8分的水平。
    下面是一些比較地道的詞匯、短語(yǔ),考生可以參考使用:
    Properly - thoroughly, completely; 徹底地
    In the flesh - 本人
    At least that’s been my experience anyway! - 至少按照我的經(jīng)驗(yàn)是這樣的!
    綜上所述,一篇優(yōu)秀的范文,考生必須作到詞匯句式符合高分要求,內(nèi)容的銜接和連貫必須緊湊,且能夠給人一種交流的感覺(jué)和信號(hào),讓人感覺(jué)到地道且是考場(chǎng)上的交流感,此外,運(yùn)用一些比較地道的詞匯和句式,也會(huì)為你的答案加分不少。