1.翻譯第2句“……女性群體在社會(huì)各個(gè)領(lǐng)域產(chǎn)生了不可忽視的力量”時(shí),先譯出主干(females have the power),再插入其他成分。“不可忽視的”處理為后置定語(yǔ),既可用定語(yǔ)從句that cannot be ignored,也可用不定式短語(yǔ)not to beignored來(lái)表達(dá)。狀語(yǔ)“在社會(huì)各個(gè)領(lǐng)域”譯作in every/eachfield of society,置于句末。
2.第3句中的“越來(lái)越多的女性……任職,參與的......活動(dòng)也明顯增多”可用并列結(jié)構(gòu)譯出a growing numberof females take office... and participate in...。但不如把后半句“參與的......”處理成前半句的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ),用現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)participating in...來(lái)表達(dá),使譯文更具有邏輯性。
3.第4句中的“最近的一份調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)顯示”可表達(dá)為according to statistics from a recent survey,也可表達(dá)為 statistics form a recent survey showed that...?!懊?位”可表達(dá)為 one in three,也可表達(dá)為one out of three,還可延伸譯作one third of。
4.最后一句中的“越來(lái)越重要的”有多種譯法:more and more important; increasingly important;growingly important,狀語(yǔ)“在家庭決策中”表達(dá)為 in the family decision-making,置于句末。
參考譯文:
After the founding of New China, the Chinesegovernment has been devoted to improving thesocial status of females. After years of efforts,females have the power not to be ignored in everyfield of society. In recent years, a growing number offemales take office in government departments,participating in more state affairs. According to statistics from a recent survey, about one inthree of mid to high-level enterprise managers are female. In addition, females are alsoplaying an increasingly important role in the family decision-making.
2.第3句中的“越來(lái)越多的女性……任職,參與的......活動(dòng)也明顯增多”可用并列結(jié)構(gòu)譯出a growing numberof females take office... and participate in...。但不如把后半句“參與的......”處理成前半句的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ),用現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)participating in...來(lái)表達(dá),使譯文更具有邏輯性。
3.第4句中的“最近的一份調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)顯示”可表達(dá)為according to statistics from a recent survey,也可表達(dá)為 statistics form a recent survey showed that...?!懊?位”可表達(dá)為 one in three,也可表達(dá)為one out of three,還可延伸譯作one third of。
4.最后一句中的“越來(lái)越重要的”有多種譯法:more and more important; increasingly important;growingly important,狀語(yǔ)“在家庭決策中”表達(dá)為 in the family decision-making,置于句末。
參考譯文:
After the founding of New China, the Chinesegovernment has been devoted to improving thesocial status of females. After years of efforts,females have the power not to be ignored in everyfield of society. In recent years, a growing number offemales take office in government departments,participating in more state affairs. According to statistics from a recent survey, about one inthree of mid to high-level enterprise managers are female. In addition, females are alsoplaying an increasingly important role in the family decision-making.

