2016年外教托??谡Z訓(xùn)練:Advertisements influence consumers

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    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: advertisements have too much influence on consumers’ choices?
    學(xué)生托??谡Z內(nèi)容 Student
    Well, I agree with the statement. We know that advertising is a way for company to attarct more consumers to buy their products. To some extent, some companies will just show good things of their products on advertising, but they didn't show bad things. Besides, I think the advertising spokeperson will influence consumers. For example, just for me, if i see my idol on the advertising, i will immediately to buy their product. So i couldn't agree with the statement that advertising will influence consumers.
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    發(fā)音 Pronunciation
    1 spokeperson spokesperson
    2 product
    3 their
    4 consumers
    5 will
    6 example
    語法 Grammar
    1 show good things of products show the good things about
    2 on the advertising on the advertisement
    表達 Expression
    1 I will immediately to buy I will immediately want to buy/ immediately buy
    2 I couldn't agree with the statement I couldn't agree more with the statement
    3 we no let the advertisement is away not sure
    外教托??谡Z示范 Teacher
    I agree that companies use advertisements to make people buy their products. Some companies only show the good things about their products,but they did not show the bad things. Another example is that the spokesperson will influence consumers to buy their products. For example, whenever i see my idol in an advertisement, i immediately want to buy the product. So i couldn't agree more that companies use advertisements to make people buy their products.