【教育類】
Nowadays，most people learn academic study in university, but others think
we should encourage to learn vocational skills more, do you agree or disagree?
如今，多數(shù)人在大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)，但是，有人以為我們應(yīng)該學(xué)習(xí)更多的職業(yè)技藝，能否同意?(2015年11月21日B卷考題)
【標(biāo)題解析】本題為經(jīng)典教育話題改寫：能夠了解為職業(yè)教育比照綜合教育，或者專才教育比照通才教育。
【相關(guān)話題】
【教育類】
In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education
across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of
subjects related to a particular career. which is appropriate in today's world.
在一些國度，中學(xué)生會(huì)學(xué)習(xí)普遍的課程，在一些國度，學(xué)生們會(huì)學(xué)習(xí)一些和將來擇業(yè)相關(guān)的課程，哪一種教育方式愈加適宜?
【謀篇規(guī)劃】(退讓反駁)
首段：背景引見+爭議焦點(diǎn)+作家立場
二段：退讓原題觀念的合理性
三段：反駁原題觀念的不合理
尾段：再次亮明觀念+總結(jié)理由
【思緒拓展】
【職業(yè)教育的利好】
1. 人們的精神和時(shí)間有限，普遍涉獵，難免走馬觀花。相反，集中精神學(xué)習(xí)一門課技藝，可使人成為一個(gè)范疇的專家。
人生的斗爭的過程就是追求稀缺的過程，你要成為那個(gè)不可替代者。
2. 職業(yè)培訓(xùn)學(xué)校培育的學(xué)生， 擇業(yè)更有競爭力，由于他們能夠合適特殊企業(yè)的需求。
【大學(xué)教育的利好】
1. 通才教育協(xié)助人完成全面開展，培育多元的興味和才氣，能夠使受教育者順應(yīng)將來不同范疇的工作，因而，能夠減少單一職業(yè)選擇帶來的失業(yè)風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。
2.
職業(yè)教育通常傳授的是以擇業(yè)為導(dǎo)向的學(xué)問，和就業(yè)相關(guān)聯(lián)的技藝，僅是一種生存技藝的培育，相反，通才教育不只是傳授學(xué)問，還觸及到人的道德教育、性格培育、心靈生長，因而，專才教育更能表現(xiàn)圓滿教育的真理。
【范文賞析】
【首段】背景引見 + 爭議焦點(diǎn) + 作家立場
Education is one of the key words of our time. A man without education,
many of us believe is the victim of adversity. However，people’s views differ
greatly as to whether or not specialist is superior to generalist. To voice my
opinion, focusing on academic study in university enjoys more benefits.
【二段】 學(xué)習(xí)職業(yè)技藝的利好
Granted，those who advocate vocational training are, to some extent, never
without their reasons. First，zeroing in on vocational skills can help learners
secure well-paid jobs quickly, therefore, the family’s financial burden can be
greatly reduced. From our life, we can find some examples to prove that job
candidates from vocational training schools are very popular because what they
have learnt are career-oriented and job-related. Also，Jack-of-all-trades is
master of none. In comparison with studying a wide range of
subjects，specializing in specific field can make one stand out in a crowd
considering that one’s time and energy is limited
【三段】承受大學(xué)教育的利好：
What I want to rebut, however, is that we can never ignore the immense
value of academic study at university. The most glaring merit is that those who
receive university education have plenty of room for career development because
they have access to manifold knowledge and techniques. In addition to tapping
one’s unlimited potentials in various aspects and helping one realize overall
development, experiencing university life can bring more wonderful memories of
colorful campus life. Last, this can benefit a nation, all-round education can
train more comprehensive talents for a country，which will inject new life into
the further development of a nation.
【尾段】亮明立場
Overall，my stand is that compared with attending vocational training
schools，receiving university education is more feasible and rational because it
helps students realize comprehensive development and cultivate more personal
talents. Likewise, our society need talents with a wealth of knowledge.
【全文點(diǎn)評(píng)】
本篇主題明白、行文順暢、邏輯明晰、文風(fēng)樸素、偶以亮點(diǎn)詞匯裝點(diǎn)，可為考生賞析之佳作。小鵬哥原創(chuàng)范文只是雅思寫作之一種，文無定法，倡議童鞋打造屬于本人的個(gè)性范文。2016年雅思有可能開端機(jī)考，很多童鞋報(bào)考學(xué)校的寫作分?jǐn)?shù)也有請求進(jìn)步的趨向，唯有增強(qiáng)練筆，考試才干才高自現(xiàn)。
【經(jīng)典語料】
1. generalist n通才
2. specialist n專才
3. specialized education n專才教育
4. comprehensive education n通才教育
5. vocational training school n 職業(yè)培訓(xùn)學(xué)校
6. higher education = high education n 高等教育
7. acquire a range of subjects v 學(xué)習(xí)普遍的課程
8. travel in the ocean of the knowledge v 暢游學(xué)問的海洋
9. avoid the possible risk of unemployment 防止?jié)撛诘氖I(yè)的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)
10. Knowledge is not a burden 藝多不要身
11. be well-prepared for the future career challenges v為將來事業(yè)的應(yīng)戰(zhàn)做好充沛準(zhǔn)備
12. a wide range of subjects will help one be well-prepared for to work in
different fields in the future 學(xué)習(xí)普遍的課程能夠協(xié)助一個(gè)人為將來不同范疇的工作做好準(zhǔn)備
13. secure a decent job with promising future v找到面子的有出路的工作
14. excel in one specific field v 通曉于一個(gè)特殊的范疇
15. realize his or her all-round development. v完成全面的開展
16. have to face more risks of unemployment triggered by a single career
choice v面對單一職業(yè)選擇帶來的失業(yè)的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)
17. …… is more feasible and rational …… 愈加可行和理性
18. enhance one’s competitiveness in the future job-seeking v
進(jìn)步將來擇業(yè)的競爭力
19. Jack-of-all-trades is master of none. 樣樣通曉，就是一無所精。
20. inject new life into the further development of a nation
v給一個(gè)國度的開展注入新穎生機(jī)
作者介紹：
新東方網(wǎng)專欄作家：薛鵬(@雅思小鵬哥)，吉林大學(xué)外國語言學(xué)及應(yīng)用語言學(xué)碩士。17年英語教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn) (7年新東方雅思托福SAT教學(xué)經(jīng)歷)，前長春新東方功勛教師，多次培訓(xùn)出雅思和托福高分學(xué)員(雅思7.5分，托福29分)。
愛生活，愛運(yùn)動(dòng)，愛音樂電影，愛旅行美食，愛讀書攝影，更愛英語教學(xué)。20歲登上英語講臺(tái)，主講英語萬詞速記課程。熟悉GRE、TOEFL、SAT、TEM、CET等各級(jí)別詞匯教學(xué)。
大一時(shí)即在報(bào)刊雜志上主持“英語學(xué)習(xí)系列談”以及“薛鵬教你學(xué)單詞”等專欄。2006年獲得“外研社/朗文杯”新概念背誦大賽吉林省賽區(qū)大學(xué)成人組冠軍，全國總決賽大學(xué)成人組二等獎(jiǎng)。
對于各類寫作課程有精深研究，授課方式行云流水，妙語連珠，知識(shí)底蘊(yùn)深厚，對學(xué)員極具有啟迪性和激勵(lì)性。
教學(xué)理念：Education is not the filling of a pail but the lighting of a fire.(教育不是注滿一桶水，而是點(diǎn)燃一把火)
Nowadays，most people learn academic study in university, but others think
we should encourage to learn vocational skills more, do you agree or disagree?
如今，多數(shù)人在大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)，但是，有人以為我們應(yīng)該學(xué)習(xí)更多的職業(yè)技藝，能否同意?(2015年11月21日B卷考題)
【標(biāo)題解析】本題為經(jīng)典教育話題改寫：能夠了解為職業(yè)教育比照綜合教育，或者專才教育比照通才教育。
【相關(guān)話題】
【教育類】
In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education
across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of
subjects related to a particular career. which is appropriate in today's world.
在一些國度，中學(xué)生會(huì)學(xué)習(xí)普遍的課程，在一些國度，學(xué)生們會(huì)學(xué)習(xí)一些和將來擇業(yè)相關(guān)的課程，哪一種教育方式愈加適宜?
【謀篇規(guī)劃】(退讓反駁)
首段：背景引見+爭議焦點(diǎn)+作家立場
二段：退讓原題觀念的合理性
三段：反駁原題觀念的不合理
尾段：再次亮明觀念+總結(jié)理由
【思緒拓展】
【職業(yè)教育的利好】
1. 人們的精神和時(shí)間有限，普遍涉獵，難免走馬觀花。相反，集中精神學(xué)習(xí)一門課技藝，可使人成為一個(gè)范疇的專家。
人生的斗爭的過程就是追求稀缺的過程，你要成為那個(gè)不可替代者。
2. 職業(yè)培訓(xùn)學(xué)校培育的學(xué)生， 擇業(yè)更有競爭力，由于他們能夠合適特殊企業(yè)的需求。
【大學(xué)教育的利好】
1. 通才教育協(xié)助人完成全面開展，培育多元的興味和才氣，能夠使受教育者順應(yīng)將來不同范疇的工作，因而，能夠減少單一職業(yè)選擇帶來的失業(yè)風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。
2.
職業(yè)教育通常傳授的是以擇業(yè)為導(dǎo)向的學(xué)問，和就業(yè)相關(guān)聯(lián)的技藝，僅是一種生存技藝的培育，相反，通才教育不只是傳授學(xué)問，還觸及到人的道德教育、性格培育、心靈生長，因而，專才教育更能表現(xiàn)圓滿教育的真理。
【范文賞析】
【首段】背景引見 + 爭議焦點(diǎn) + 作家立場
Education is one of the key words of our time. A man without education,
many of us believe is the victim of adversity. However，people’s views differ
greatly as to whether or not specialist is superior to generalist. To voice my
opinion, focusing on academic study in university enjoys more benefits.
【二段】 學(xué)習(xí)職業(yè)技藝的利好
Granted，those who advocate vocational training are, to some extent, never
without their reasons. First，zeroing in on vocational skills can help learners
secure well-paid jobs quickly, therefore, the family’s financial burden can be
greatly reduced. From our life, we can find some examples to prove that job
candidates from vocational training schools are very popular because what they
have learnt are career-oriented and job-related. Also，Jack-of-all-trades is
master of none. In comparison with studying a wide range of
subjects，specializing in specific field can make one stand out in a crowd
considering that one’s time and energy is limited
【三段】承受大學(xué)教育的利好：
What I want to rebut, however, is that we can never ignore the immense
value of academic study at university. The most glaring merit is that those who
receive university education have plenty of room for career development because
they have access to manifold knowledge and techniques. In addition to tapping
one’s unlimited potentials in various aspects and helping one realize overall
development, experiencing university life can bring more wonderful memories of
colorful campus life. Last, this can benefit a nation, all-round education can
train more comprehensive talents for a country，which will inject new life into
the further development of a nation.
【尾段】亮明立場
Overall，my stand is that compared with attending vocational training
schools，receiving university education is more feasible and rational because it
helps students realize comprehensive development and cultivate more personal
talents. Likewise, our society need talents with a wealth of knowledge.
【全文點(diǎn)評(píng)】
本篇主題明白、行文順暢、邏輯明晰、文風(fēng)樸素、偶以亮點(diǎn)詞匯裝點(diǎn)，可為考生賞析之佳作。小鵬哥原創(chuàng)范文只是雅思寫作之一種，文無定法，倡議童鞋打造屬于本人的個(gè)性范文。2016年雅思有可能開端機(jī)考，很多童鞋報(bào)考學(xué)校的寫作分?jǐn)?shù)也有請求進(jìn)步的趨向，唯有增強(qiáng)練筆，考試才干才高自現(xiàn)。
【經(jīng)典語料】
1. generalist n通才
2. specialist n專才
3. specialized education n專才教育
4. comprehensive education n通才教育
5. vocational training school n 職業(yè)培訓(xùn)學(xué)校
6. higher education = high education n 高等教育
7. acquire a range of subjects v 學(xué)習(xí)普遍的課程
8. travel in the ocean of the knowledge v 暢游學(xué)問的海洋
9. avoid the possible risk of unemployment 防止?jié)撛诘氖I(yè)的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)
10. Knowledge is not a burden 藝多不要身
11. be well-prepared for the future career challenges v為將來事業(yè)的應(yīng)戰(zhàn)做好充沛準(zhǔn)備
12. a wide range of subjects will help one be well-prepared for to work in
different fields in the future 學(xué)習(xí)普遍的課程能夠協(xié)助一個(gè)人為將來不同范疇的工作做好準(zhǔn)備
13. secure a decent job with promising future v找到面子的有出路的工作
14. excel in one specific field v 通曉于一個(gè)特殊的范疇
15. realize his or her all-round development. v完成全面的開展
16. have to face more risks of unemployment triggered by a single career
choice v面對單一職業(yè)選擇帶來的失業(yè)的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)
17. …… is more feasible and rational …… 愈加可行和理性
18. enhance one’s competitiveness in the future job-seeking v
進(jìn)步將來擇業(yè)的競爭力
19. Jack-of-all-trades is master of none. 樣樣通曉，就是一無所精。
20. inject new life into the further development of a nation
v給一個(gè)國度的開展注入新穎生機(jī)
作者介紹：
新東方網(wǎng)專欄作家：薛鵬(@雅思小鵬哥)，吉林大學(xué)外國語言學(xué)及應(yīng)用語言學(xué)碩士。17年英語教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn) (7年新東方雅思托福SAT教學(xué)經(jīng)歷)，前長春新東方功勛教師，多次培訓(xùn)出雅思和托福高分學(xué)員(雅思7.5分，托福29分)。
愛生活，愛運(yùn)動(dòng)，愛音樂電影，愛旅行美食，愛讀書攝影，更愛英語教學(xué)。20歲登上英語講臺(tái)，主講英語萬詞速記課程。熟悉GRE、TOEFL、SAT、TEM、CET等各級(jí)別詞匯教學(xué)。
大一時(shí)即在報(bào)刊雜志上主持“英語學(xué)習(xí)系列談”以及“薛鵬教你學(xué)單詞”等專欄。2006年獲得“外研社/朗文杯”新概念背誦大賽吉林省賽區(qū)大學(xué)成人組冠軍，全國總決賽大學(xué)成人組二等獎(jiǎng)。
對于各類寫作課程有精深研究，授課方式行云流水，妙語連珠，知識(shí)底蘊(yùn)深厚，對學(xué)員極具有啟迪性和激勵(lì)性。
教學(xué)理念：Education is not the filling of a pail but the lighting of a fire.(教育不是注滿一桶水，而是點(diǎn)燃一把火)