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I like animals very much. Ilike. pandas, tigers and koalas.I like pandas, tigers and koalas.
I like pandas. Because,because they are cute,and they are only from China. So, I like them .I just can't help loving them.
I like tigers. Beause ,because they are scary, but strong SoIlike them, too.the king of the forest.Their strength and speed are really impressive.
And I like koalas, they aren't from China, but, I also like them, because they are very smart and interesting and it bring us a lot of laughter.
I think(am sure) everyone(many other people) also like them. So animals are very valuable.They are our best friends and we should cherish them.
文章結(jié)構(gòu)較為清晰，但是內(nèi)容不夠充實(shí)，對于邏輯連詞的使用還有待提高。一方面要增加日常的閱讀量，豐富自己的表達(dá)方式；另一方面多寫多練，不斷提高。
I like animals very much. Ilike. pandas, tigers and koalas.I like pandas, tigers and koalas.
I like pandas. Because,because they are cute,and they are only from China. So, I like them .I just can't help loving them.
I like tigers. Beause ,because they are scary, but strong SoIlike them, too.the king of the forest.Their strength and speed are really impressive.
And I like koalas, they aren't from China, but, I also like them, because they are very smart and interesting and it bring us a lot of laughter.
I think(am sure) everyone(many other people) also like them. So animals are very valuable.They are our best friends and we should cherish them.
文章結(jié)構(gòu)較為清晰，但是內(nèi)容不夠充實(shí)，對于邏輯連詞的使用還有待提高。一方面要增加日常的閱讀量，豐富自己的表達(dá)方式；另一方面多寫多練，不斷提高。