2016年3月13日托福寫作答案解析

Topic 議題： the reason of collapse of Akkadine Empire
	Reading	Listening
Sub-point 1     分論點1	Rebellion of conquered city	Conquered 挀椀琀椀攀猀 have little chance to rebel, for their walls have been destroyed by 攀洀瀀椀爀攀 army. They are easily defeated again.
Sub-point2     分論點2	Bad weather results in shortage of food supply.	Indeed, bad weather will lead to the reduction of 昀漀漀攙 supply, but farmers in empire have advanced irrigation technology, which can bring water from long distance. What’s more, farmers will preserve grains.
Sub-point 3     分論點3	Unfair trade leads to discontent of other countries. 吀梔攀礀 united to fight against the Empire.	Empire has been looking for new partners. Losses caused by some countries can be made up by resources and benefits from new countries.

    3月13日托福綜合寫作范文：
    Sample answer:
    The writer and the speaker have a debate on what cause the collapse of Akkadine Empire. The writer puts forward three reasons, which are opposed by the following lecture.
    First, the writer claims that the collapse of empire is cause by rebellion of conquered cities. While the speaker views this issue from an opposite angle, according to him/her, Conquered cities have little chance to rebel, for their walls have been destroyed by empire army. They are easily defeated again.
    Secondly, the passage states that bad weather results in shortage of food supply. However, the speaker casts doubt on this opinion by saying that Indeed, bad weather will lead to the reduction of food supply, but farmers in empire have advanced irrigation technology, which can bring water from long distance. What’s more, farmers will preserve grains.
    Last, the writer argues that unfair trade leads to discontent of other countries. They united to fight against the Empire. By contrast, in accordance with the speaker, this claim does not hold water. Empire has been looking for new partners. Losses caused by some countries can be made up by resources and benefits from new countries.
    3月13日托福獨立寫作真題：
    

作文題目：	Do 礀漀甀 agree or disagree with the following statement?     High 猀挀梔漀漀氀 students should take at least a year off to work or travel before they 戀攀最椀渀 to study in university.
題型類別:	教育類
寫作思路：	今天的這道題目也是一道比較簡單的老題(重復(fù)2014.3.23和2010.12.4)，所以備考的同學(xué)們平時更應(yīng)該關(guān)注機(jī)經(jīng)和以前考過的老題。教育類一直都是托福獨立寫作重要的話題，平時同學(xué)們在準(zhǔn)備獨立寫作的時候也要準(zhǔn)備對應(yīng)的語言素材和表達(dá)，這樣考試的時候才不會詞窮。
寫作指導(dǎo)：	Agree     單邊          更好的選擇大學(xué)的專業(yè)。大學(xué)之前很多學(xué)生都是努力學(xué)習(xí)文化知識，沒有出去見識世面，而且很多孩子在大學(xué)中選擇的專業(yè)都是父母的意見。進(jìn)入大學(xué)前先工作一年，很多孩子都會成熟很多，知道自己到底想要什么，更有利于他們之后選擇自己想要的專業(yè)，為進(jìn)入社會奠定基礎(chǔ)（lay a solid foundation for…）。          更好地學(xué)習(xí)到為人處事的方法。大學(xué)之前，很多孩子大部分時間都是和家長，幾個親密的朋友呆在一塊。沒有進(jìn)入社會就不能接觸到社會百態(tài)。工作或者旅行一年，可以讓孩子接觸到形形色色的人，學(xué)好如何和不同的人溝通和交流。          更好地磨練他們的意志（temper willpower）。大學(xué)之前很多孩子都實在爸媽的羽翼下生活，沒有經(jīng)歷困難。工作和旅行一年，他們會遇到很多突發(fā)狀況，這些能夠很好的鍛煉孩子的品質(zhì)，以及培養(yǎng)獨立解決困難的能力。這樣進(jìn)入大學(xué)之后，孩子們就能游刃有余的（do a job with skill and ease/accomplish a task with ease）解決各類問題。