Tonight is Christmas eve. Huang Peixin mysteriously gave me a gift after school. "It's the Christmas tree!" She said with a smile, "you go back and do it, you will have an unexpected surprise!" "Really?" I'm looking forward to the evening.
I returned home, can't wait to open the bag: what a Christmas tree? Only two pieces of cardboard and a small plate, a bag of water. I doubted put together well two pieces of cardboard, this is not the "trunk"? I felt a joy in my heart. "Huang Peixin didn't cheat me." I put the "trunk" on the plate, and the water poured into the plate. At this time, I saw the water quickly into the "tree", "all eyes on my trunk". After about 30 minutes, I found the "trunk" on the "long" a little white, I rubbed my eyes, make sure no wrong, jumped up and down with excitement, "I jumped ten feet high" and said: "Mom, grow, grow!"
Mother smiled and said: "silly girl, what long came out!" I continued to look at the "Christmas tree" with a curious mood, at this moment, my mother called out to eat, and I waved, and then put into the magic of the "Christmas tree" on the. I do not know how long, a little white flowers disappeared, the "Christmas tree" of the "leaves" long came out, I hold my breath, staring eyes, a blink, for fear that in my blink of time there will be some secret "sneak" away. Unconsciously, I fell asleep......
I woke up from the dim light, and I went to see my Christmas tree ". "Wow! Great, great!" I was surprised, "Christmas tree" grew! It is colorful, in the light of the background is more beautiful, I carefully looked at it: a small plate on a trace of white silk, such as the "ground", "Christmas tree" colorful. Too beautiful! I can not help but like a pony like dance and skip with joy.
I really appreciate Huang Peixin, because it is her to bring me this special, beautiful gift, she made me a happy christmas!
Lin Liankai teacher's comment: Christmas is a holiday for children. Love it, not only because of the magic of Santa Claus, but also because in this day, the children can happily for their good friends to send gifts. The author is no exception. She received a good gift for a friend, very happy, but also full of joy as a Christmas tree. I think, this is not only a Christmas tree, but also a long in the heart of the Christmas tree! The students said, is it?
今晚是平安夜。黃佩欣放學(xué)時(shí)神秘地送我一樣禮物?！笆鞘フQ樹(shù)！”她笑著說(shuō)，“你回去照著說(shuō)明書(shū)來(lái)做，你將會(huì)有一個(gè)意想不到的驚喜！”“真的嗎？”我期待晚上的到來(lái)。
我回到家里，迫不及待地打開(kāi)膠袋：哪有什么圣誕樹(shù)？只有兩塊硬紙板和一個(gè)小盤子、一袋水。我將信將疑地把兩塊紙板插在一起咦，這不就是“樹(shù)干”嗎？我心里一陣歡喜?！包S佩欣果然沒(méi)有騙我?！蔽以侔选皹?shù)干”插在盤子里，然后把水倒進(jìn)盤子里。這時(shí)，只見(jiàn)水快速滲進(jìn)“樹(shù)干”，我目不轉(zhuǎn)睛地盯住“樹(shù)干”。大概過(guò)了30分鐘左右，我發(fā)現(xiàn)“樹(shù)干”上“長(zhǎng)”出一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)小白花，我揉揉眼睛，確定沒(méi)有看錯(cuò)，興奮得又蹦又跳，我“一蹦十尺高”語(yǔ)無(wú)倫次地說(shuō)：“媽媽，長(zhǎng)出來(lái)了，長(zhǎng)出來(lái)了！”
媽媽笑著說(shuō)：“傻丫頭，什么長(zhǎng)出來(lái)了呀！”我繼續(xù)懷著好奇的心情看著“圣誕樹(shù)”，就在這時(shí)，媽媽喊吃飯了，我揮揮手，便又投入神奇的“圣誕樹(shù)”上了。不知看了多久，一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)的小白花消失了，“圣誕樹(shù)”的“葉子”長(zhǎng)出來(lái)了，我屏住呼吸，瞪著眼睛望著，一眨不眨，生怕在我眨眼的時(shí)候會(huì)有一些秘密“溜”走了。不知不覺(jué)，我睡著了……
我從朦朧的燈下醒來(lái)，我立即去看我的“圣誕樹(shù)”。“哇噻！太棒了，太棒了！”我又驚又喜，“圣誕樹(shù)”長(zhǎng)成了！它五顏六色，在燈光的襯托下顯得更加美，我仔細(xì)地望著它：小盤子上有著一絲絲的白色小絲，像是下雪后的“地面”，“圣誕樹(shù)”五彩繽紛。太美了！我高興得不禁像小馬駒那樣歡蹦亂跳。
我真感謝黃佩欣，因?yàn)槭撬龓Ыo我這份特殊的，美好的禮物，是她令我過(guò)上了一個(gè)開(kāi)心的圣誕節(jié)！
林蓮開(kāi)老師點(diǎn)評(píng)：圣誕節(jié)是深受小孩子喜愛(ài)的節(jié)日。喜愛(ài)它，不光是因?yàn)槭フQ老人的神奇，還因?yàn)樵谶@天，孩子們可以高高興興地為自己的好朋友送禮物。小作者也不例外。她收到了好朋友的禮物后，無(wú)比開(kāi)心，還歡天喜地的做了一棵圣誕樹(shù)。我想，這不僅是一棵節(jié)日的圣誕樹(shù)，更是一棵長(zhǎng)在心里的圣誕樹(shù)！同學(xué)們說(shuō)，是嗎？
I returned home, can't wait to open the bag: what a Christmas tree? Only two pieces of cardboard and a small plate, a bag of water. I doubted put together well two pieces of cardboard, this is not the "trunk"? I felt a joy in my heart. "Huang Peixin didn't cheat me." I put the "trunk" on the plate, and the water poured into the plate. At this time, I saw the water quickly into the "tree", "all eyes on my trunk". After about 30 minutes, I found the "trunk" on the "long" a little white, I rubbed my eyes, make sure no wrong, jumped up and down with excitement, "I jumped ten feet high" and said: "Mom, grow, grow!"
Mother smiled and said: "silly girl, what long came out!" I continued to look at the "Christmas tree" with a curious mood, at this moment, my mother called out to eat, and I waved, and then put into the magic of the "Christmas tree" on the. I do not know how long, a little white flowers disappeared, the "Christmas tree" of the "leaves" long came out, I hold my breath, staring eyes, a blink, for fear that in my blink of time there will be some secret "sneak" away. Unconsciously, I fell asleep......
I woke up from the dim light, and I went to see my Christmas tree ". "Wow! Great, great!" I was surprised, "Christmas tree" grew! It is colorful, in the light of the background is more beautiful, I carefully looked at it: a small plate on a trace of white silk, such as the "ground", "Christmas tree" colorful. Too beautiful! I can not help but like a pony like dance and skip with joy.
I really appreciate Huang Peixin, because it is her to bring me this special, beautiful gift, she made me a happy christmas!
Lin Liankai teacher's comment: Christmas is a holiday for children. Love it, not only because of the magic of Santa Claus, but also because in this day, the children can happily for their good friends to send gifts. The author is no exception. She received a good gift for a friend, very happy, but also full of joy as a Christmas tree. I think, this is not only a Christmas tree, but also a long in the heart of the Christmas tree! The students said, is it?
今晚是平安夜。黃佩欣放學(xué)時(shí)神秘地送我一樣禮物?！笆鞘フQ樹(shù)！”她笑著說(shuō)，“你回去照著說(shuō)明書(shū)來(lái)做，你將會(huì)有一個(gè)意想不到的驚喜！”“真的嗎？”我期待晚上的到來(lái)。
我回到家里，迫不及待地打開(kāi)膠袋：哪有什么圣誕樹(shù)？只有兩塊硬紙板和一個(gè)小盤子、一袋水。我將信將疑地把兩塊紙板插在一起咦，這不就是“樹(shù)干”嗎？我心里一陣歡喜?！包S佩欣果然沒(méi)有騙我?！蔽以侔选皹?shù)干”插在盤子里，然后把水倒進(jìn)盤子里。這時(shí)，只見(jiàn)水快速滲進(jìn)“樹(shù)干”，我目不轉(zhuǎn)睛地盯住“樹(shù)干”。大概過(guò)了30分鐘左右，我發(fā)現(xiàn)“樹(shù)干”上“長(zhǎng)”出一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)小白花，我揉揉眼睛，確定沒(méi)有看錯(cuò)，興奮得又蹦又跳，我“一蹦十尺高”語(yǔ)無(wú)倫次地說(shuō)：“媽媽，長(zhǎng)出來(lái)了，長(zhǎng)出來(lái)了！”
媽媽笑著說(shuō)：“傻丫頭，什么長(zhǎng)出來(lái)了呀！”我繼續(xù)懷著好奇的心情看著“圣誕樹(shù)”，就在這時(shí)，媽媽喊吃飯了，我揮揮手，便又投入神奇的“圣誕樹(shù)”上了。不知看了多久，一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)的小白花消失了，“圣誕樹(shù)”的“葉子”長(zhǎng)出來(lái)了，我屏住呼吸，瞪著眼睛望著，一眨不眨，生怕在我眨眼的時(shí)候會(huì)有一些秘密“溜”走了。不知不覺(jué)，我睡著了……
我從朦朧的燈下醒來(lái)，我立即去看我的“圣誕樹(shù)”。“哇噻！太棒了，太棒了！”我又驚又喜，“圣誕樹(shù)”長(zhǎng)成了！它五顏六色，在燈光的襯托下顯得更加美，我仔細(xì)地望著它：小盤子上有著一絲絲的白色小絲，像是下雪后的“地面”，“圣誕樹(shù)”五彩繽紛。太美了！我高興得不禁像小馬駒那樣歡蹦亂跳。
我真感謝黃佩欣，因?yàn)槭撬龓Ыo我這份特殊的，美好的禮物，是她令我過(guò)上了一個(gè)開(kāi)心的圣誕節(jié)！
林蓮開(kāi)老師點(diǎn)評(píng)：圣誕節(jié)是深受小孩子喜愛(ài)的節(jié)日。喜愛(ài)它，不光是因?yàn)槭フQ老人的神奇，還因?yàn)樵谶@天，孩子們可以高高興興地為自己的好朋友送禮物。小作者也不例外。她收到了好朋友的禮物后，無(wú)比開(kāi)心，還歡天喜地的做了一棵圣誕樹(shù)。我想，這不僅是一棵節(jié)日的圣誕樹(shù)，更是一棵長(zhǎng)在心里的圣誕樹(shù)！同學(xué)們說(shuō)，是嗎？