I have a happy home. At home with Dad, there mom, and brother. Oh, and I do not forget.
I have an amiable mother, she was very concerned about my body. Every morning, I get up, my mother would give me cook an egg, let me eat on the road, he said eating can fill my mind, attending a lecture and more spiritual; in the evening, I finished the job, this time to sleep, my mother would Give me a glass of milk tune, she said to eat for good health. Do you know why I so fat so solid? That morning to eat eggs at night to drink milk, so I have here to tell students, you can also call parents like my mother do that to you eat, so you can make the class more spirit, more solid body. - Look, this is particularly concerned about the mother of my body.
My father is a serious and kind man, he was particularly concerned about my learning. One time, I fell to the class examinations dozen. I am glad that a home put this good news to tell Mom and Dad. But Dad said: "One such test results, it is the pride that you have not heard of the old saying called 'open mind to make progress, proud people behind' it.?" It's like a pot of cold water poured into my heart straight I almost cried out. Dad to see me this way, calmly sitting beside me, slowly enlighten me, speak a lot of "humble in victory by defeat," the truth, and encouraged me should redouble their efforts straight to me that music so far. - Look, this is my serious and loving dad.
My brother is a lovely and very naughty, naughty brother. He sometimes very lovely, he would not be happy when I do some face, or say something funny things that make me happy. However, he sometimes has very naughty, he will often take the time to do their homework in my way or something like that bother me, sometimes something will grab me the results I always lose, who told me that my sister it? - Look, this is my lovely and very naughty, naughty brother.
I'm a cheerful person. I have a happy home, and my father loved me, my mother loves me, my brother also give me a lot of fun. I love my parents, but also love his brother. I live in a warm home, I grew up happily in the warm home.
Well, I have to tell you my family, and also the let me hear your home!
Comment: This presentation of my home written assignments better, clear structure, the beginning and end can always described the situation at home, in the middle specific description of family members, but the characteristics are still quite prominent.
我有一個(gè)幸福的家。家里有爸爸，有媽媽，還有弟弟。噢，還有我，別忘了。
我有一個(gè)和藹可親的媽媽，她很關(guān)心我的身體。每天早晨，我起床的時(shí)候，媽媽都會(huì)給我煮上一個(gè)雞蛋，讓我在路上吃，說(shuō)吃了能補(bǔ)腦子，上課聽(tīng)講更有精神；晚上，我寫(xiě)完了作業(yè)，該睡的時(shí)候，媽媽會(huì)給我調(diào)一杯牛奶，說(shuō)吃了對(duì)身體好。你們知道我為什么這樣胖這樣結(jié)實(shí)嗎？就是早上吃了雞蛋晚上喝了牛奶，所以，我也要在這里告訴同學(xué)們，你們也叫家長(zhǎng)像我媽媽那樣做給你們吃，這樣能讓你們上課更加有精神，身體更加結(jié)實(shí)。——看，這就是特別關(guān)心我身體的媽媽。
我的爸爸是一個(gè)嚴(yán)肅而又慈祥的人，他特別關(guān)心我的學(xué)習(xí)。有，我考試考落到了班上十幾名。我很高興，一到家就把這喜訊告訴了爸爸和媽媽。然而爸爸卻說(shuō)：“考了一個(gè)這樣的成績(jī)，就驕傲了。你沒(méi)有聽(tīng)說(shuō)過(guò)一句老話叫‘虛心使人進(jìn)步，驕傲使人落后’嗎？”這就像一盆涼水直潑到我的心里，我差點(diǎn)兒就哭了出來(lái)。爸爸見(jiàn)到我這樣，就心平氣和地坐在我的身邊，慢慢地開(kāi)導(dǎo)我，講了不少“勝不驕敗不餒”的道理，并鼓勵(lì)我應(yīng)該再接再厲，直把我說(shuō)樂(lè)為止?！?，這就是我嚴(yán)肅而慈祥的爸爸。
我的弟弟是一個(gè)活潑可愛(ài)而又十分頑皮、淘氣的弟弟。他有的時(shí)候非?；顫娍蓯?ài)，他會(huì)在我不開(kāi)心的時(shí)候，做一些鬼臉，或說(shuō)一些搞笑的事情讓我開(kāi)心。然而，他有的時(shí)候又十分頑皮，他經(jīng)常會(huì)在我做作業(yè)的時(shí)候拿這樣或那樣的事情來(lái)煩我，有的時(shí)候還會(huì)跟我搶東西，結(jié)果我總是吃虧，誰(shuí)叫我是姐姐呢？——看，這就是我活潑可愛(ài)又十分頑皮、淘氣的弟弟。
我是一個(gè)性格開(kāi)朗的人。我有一個(gè)幸福的家，爸爸愛(ài)我，媽媽愛(ài)我，弟弟也能給我許多樂(lè)趣。我愛(ài)爸爸媽媽，也愛(ài)弟弟。我在溫暖的家中生活，在溫暖的家中快樂(lè)地長(zhǎng)大。
好，我把我的一家都告訴你們了，也該讓我聽(tīng)聽(tīng)你們的家吧！
I have an amiable mother, she was very concerned about my body. Every morning, I get up, my mother would give me cook an egg, let me eat on the road, he said eating can fill my mind, attending a lecture and more spiritual; in the evening, I finished the job, this time to sleep, my mother would Give me a glass of milk tune, she said to eat for good health. Do you know why I so fat so solid? That morning to eat eggs at night to drink milk, so I have here to tell students, you can also call parents like my mother do that to you eat, so you can make the class more spirit, more solid body. - Look, this is particularly concerned about the mother of my body.
My father is a serious and kind man, he was particularly concerned about my learning. One time, I fell to the class examinations dozen. I am glad that a home put this good news to tell Mom and Dad. But Dad said: "One such test results, it is the pride that you have not heard of the old saying called 'open mind to make progress, proud people behind' it.?" It's like a pot of cold water poured into my heart straight I almost cried out. Dad to see me this way, calmly sitting beside me, slowly enlighten me, speak a lot of "humble in victory by defeat," the truth, and encouraged me should redouble their efforts straight to me that music so far. - Look, this is my serious and loving dad.
My brother is a lovely and very naughty, naughty brother. He sometimes very lovely, he would not be happy when I do some face, or say something funny things that make me happy. However, he sometimes has very naughty, he will often take the time to do their homework in my way or something like that bother me, sometimes something will grab me the results I always lose, who told me that my sister it? - Look, this is my lovely and very naughty, naughty brother.
I'm a cheerful person. I have a happy home, and my father loved me, my mother loves me, my brother also give me a lot of fun. I love my parents, but also love his brother. I live in a warm home, I grew up happily in the warm home.
Well, I have to tell you my family, and also the let me hear your home!
Comment: This presentation of my home written assignments better, clear structure, the beginning and end can always described the situation at home, in the middle specific description of family members, but the characteristics are still quite prominent.
我有一個(gè)幸福的家。家里有爸爸，有媽媽，還有弟弟。噢，還有我，別忘了。
我有一個(gè)和藹可親的媽媽，她很關(guān)心我的身體。每天早晨，我起床的時(shí)候，媽媽都會(huì)給我煮上一個(gè)雞蛋，讓我在路上吃，說(shuō)吃了能補(bǔ)腦子，上課聽(tīng)講更有精神；晚上，我寫(xiě)完了作業(yè)，該睡的時(shí)候，媽媽會(huì)給我調(diào)一杯牛奶，說(shuō)吃了對(duì)身體好。你們知道我為什么這樣胖這樣結(jié)實(shí)嗎？就是早上吃了雞蛋晚上喝了牛奶，所以，我也要在這里告訴同學(xué)們，你們也叫家長(zhǎng)像我媽媽那樣做給你們吃，這樣能讓你們上課更加有精神，身體更加結(jié)實(shí)。——看，這就是特別關(guān)心我身體的媽媽。
我的爸爸是一個(gè)嚴(yán)肅而又慈祥的人，他特別關(guān)心我的學(xué)習(xí)。有，我考試考落到了班上十幾名。我很高興，一到家就把這喜訊告訴了爸爸和媽媽。然而爸爸卻說(shuō)：“考了一個(gè)這樣的成績(jī)，就驕傲了。你沒(méi)有聽(tīng)說(shuō)過(guò)一句老話叫‘虛心使人進(jìn)步，驕傲使人落后’嗎？”這就像一盆涼水直潑到我的心里，我差點(diǎn)兒就哭了出來(lái)。爸爸見(jiàn)到我這樣，就心平氣和地坐在我的身邊，慢慢地開(kāi)導(dǎo)我，講了不少“勝不驕敗不餒”的道理，并鼓勵(lì)我應(yīng)該再接再厲，直把我說(shuō)樂(lè)為止?！?，這就是我嚴(yán)肅而慈祥的爸爸。
我的弟弟是一個(gè)活潑可愛(ài)而又十分頑皮、淘氣的弟弟。他有的時(shí)候非?；顫娍蓯?ài)，他會(huì)在我不開(kāi)心的時(shí)候，做一些鬼臉，或說(shuō)一些搞笑的事情讓我開(kāi)心。然而，他有的時(shí)候又十分頑皮，他經(jīng)常會(huì)在我做作業(yè)的時(shí)候拿這樣或那樣的事情來(lái)煩我，有的時(shí)候還會(huì)跟我搶東西，結(jié)果我總是吃虧，誰(shuí)叫我是姐姐呢？——看，這就是我活潑可愛(ài)又十分頑皮、淘氣的弟弟。
我是一個(gè)性格開(kāi)朗的人。我有一個(gè)幸福的家，爸爸愛(ài)我，媽媽愛(ài)我，弟弟也能給我許多樂(lè)趣。我愛(ài)爸爸媽媽，也愛(ài)弟弟。我在溫暖的家中生活，在溫暖的家中快樂(lè)地長(zhǎng)大。
好，我把我的一家都告訴你們了，也該讓我聽(tīng)聽(tīng)你們的家吧！