(1)用于描寫漫畫、圖表的常用句型
①As the graph depicts , …
②From the cartoon /picture , we can see that …
③According to the statistics shown in the first /second graph ,
④The table shows / indicates / reveals that …
⑤It can be seen /concluded from the picture / table / figures that …
(2)用于句首提出論題或現象的句型
①Recently , …h(huán)as become the focus of the society .
②…h(huán)as been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life .
③Nowadays there is a growing concern for …
④Nowadays it is common to hear /see …
⑤…h(huán)as become a common occurrence in our daily life .
⑥Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of …
⑦It is only during the last /past few years that man has become generally aware that …
⑧There is an old / popular saying / proverb which says / goes …
⑨In recent years , there is a general tendency …
⑩Nowadays … has become a problem we have to face .
(3)用于比較、闡述不同觀點的常用句型
①Some people like / prefer …, while others are / feel inclined to …
②There are different opinions among people as to … Some believe … whole hold …
③Some people claim that … is superior to … Others , however , disagree with it .
④Some people believe … Others maintain … Still others claim …
⑤Some people suggest … Others , however , hold the opposite opinion .
⑥On the one hand , people tend to … On the other hand , they feel …
⑦Some people argue that … Others , in contrast , believe that …
⑧Although more and more people come to believe … there are still others who insist that …
⑨On the contrary , there are people in favor of …
⑩There are some people who hold different opinions about …
(4)用于陳述個人觀點/想法的常用句型
①My own experience tells me that …
②In my opinion , we should attack more importance to …
③As for my own idea about … I believe …
④As far as I am concerned , I plan to …
⑤Personally , I prefer …
⑥In my view , both sides are partly right in that …
⑦But for me , I would rather …
⑧My own point of view is that …
⑨In conclusion , I support the statement that …
⑩As regards me , I tend to choose …
(5)用于書信寫作的常用句型
①Thank you for your letter of …
②It is a pleasure for me invite you on behalf of … to accept …
③Thanks so much for your letter , which arrived …
④I am writing to you with reference to …
⑤I am writing to you in connection with …
⑥I would be grateful if you could / would …
⑦I would like to know some information on …
⑧It will be appreciated if you can / could …
⑨I would also like to know if you can / could …
⑩I look forward to hearing from you .
(6)用于結尾的常用句型
①From what has been discussed / mentioned above , we may conclude that …
②Therefore , it is not difficult to draw / come to the conclusion that …
③It is high time that something was done about …
④From all the reasons / consideration above , it is evident / clear / obvious that …
⑤Taking into account all these factors , we may reach the conclusion that …
⑥Given the reasons / consideration I have just outlined / discussed / presented , I strongly recommend that …
⑦It is clear , therefore , that …
⑧All in all ,what really matters is , in fact , to …
⑨It is essential that effective measure be taken to …
⑩From what has been discussed above , we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that …
⑪ In conclusion ,the most important is …
⑫ On the whole , it is high time that every one …
⑬As a result , we should take some effective steps to …
⑭ Judging by the figures / statistics , it is not difficult to see that …
⑮ Only in this way / in so doing , can be really …
托福高分作文標志:
1、是否長短句交叉;
2、是否會使用插入語;
3、用詞是否多樣,準確,形象,盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞;
4、關鍵詞是否換用,切勿老用重復詞;
5、句型使用是否準確、地道。
下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項:
1. 適當用被動替換主動,這樣能更客觀的反映事實, 句子開頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫結尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 舉個經典結尾2004年六月六級作文的后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
2. 善于使用插入語,比如說把副詞、連接詞等,作插入語放在中間,一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間,一般放在動詞,助動詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號。
比如說:Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
3. 一定要學會換詞,換形象,具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中,applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)
下面舉一篇南京工程學院某位同學寫的優(yōu)秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。
Computer and I ( By Simmy )
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
exceedingly 替換very
thrilling 替換exciting
sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換sb. be interested in sth.
google 替換search
an army of 替換a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型,用來描述在某個時期發(fā)生了什么事情;Increasing popularity 替換more and more popular
Coincident with … 非常地道的句型,表達“與…一致”的意思,替換With …
Advancement 替換development
Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替換enter into
Current ( currently )替換now
Appeal to sb. 替換sb. be interested in sth.
Growing individuals 替換more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say 經典句型, 說某事是毫不夸張的
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.
For a start 替換To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被動
Additionally 替換In addition / Besides
Deliver 替換send
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence , porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個句子有三個精彩之處,首先There is no denying that這個句型,還有however作為插入語,function in the disservice of 替換do harm to
Emerging 替換appearing ( fading 替換disappearing )
Net citizen 網民,屬于精彩用詞
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
No garden has no weeds 替換Every coin has two sides
Computers do play ,do 強調
Positive 替換important / good 等
A slice of 替換a part of
Unfavorable 替換bad
Impacts 替換effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入語
Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象,merits/ virtues) 替換advantage ( defects 替換disadvantage ) Facet 替換aspect
以下是30個經典的替換詞,各位同學可以參考一下:
1.individuals,characters, folks替換(people ,persons)
2.positive, favorable, rosy (美好的),promising
(有希望的),perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替換good
3.dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替換bad
如果bad做表語,可以有be less impressive替換
eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.
4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替換many.
注:用many, if not most 一定要小心,many后一定要有詞。
Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理 用most, if not all ,替換most.
5.a slice of, quiet a few , several替換some
6.harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,
hold the view that, it is widely shared that,
it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因為是書面語,所以要加that)
7.affair ,business ,matter 替換thing
8.shared 代common
9.reap huge fruits 替換get many benefits )
10.for my part ,from my own perspective 替換in my opinion
11.Increasing(ly),growing 替換more and more( 注意沒有growingly這種形式。所以當修飾名詞時用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞,副詞用increasingly.
Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.
Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.
12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替換hardly
13.beneficial, rewarding替換helpful,
14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替換customer
15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替換very
16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable ... 替換unnecessary, avoidable
17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替換sb take interest in / sb. be interested in
18.capture one's attention替換attract one's attention.
19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代indicate, suggest ,fear
21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替換cause.
22. There are several reasons behind sth 替換..reasons for sth
23.desire 替換want.
24.pour attention into 替換pay attention to
25.bear in mind that 替換remember
26. enjoy, possess 替換have(注意process是過程的意思)
27. interaction替換communication
28.frown on sth替換be against , disagree with sth
29.to name only a few, as an example替換for example, for instance
30. next to / virtually impossible,替換nearly / almost impossible
①As the graph depicts , …
②From the cartoon /picture , we can see that …
③According to the statistics shown in the first /second graph ,
④The table shows / indicates / reveals that …
⑤It can be seen /concluded from the picture / table / figures that …
(2)用于句首提出論題或現象的句型
①Recently , …h(huán)as become the focus of the society .
②…h(huán)as been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life .
③Nowadays there is a growing concern for …
④Nowadays it is common to hear /see …
⑤…h(huán)as become a common occurrence in our daily life .
⑥Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of …
⑦It is only during the last /past few years that man has become generally aware that …
⑧There is an old / popular saying / proverb which says / goes …
⑨In recent years , there is a general tendency …
⑩Nowadays … has become a problem we have to face .
(3)用于比較、闡述不同觀點的常用句型
①Some people like / prefer …, while others are / feel inclined to …
②There are different opinions among people as to … Some believe … whole hold …
③Some people claim that … is superior to … Others , however , disagree with it .
④Some people believe … Others maintain … Still others claim …
⑤Some people suggest … Others , however , hold the opposite opinion .
⑥On the one hand , people tend to … On the other hand , they feel …
⑦Some people argue that … Others , in contrast , believe that …
⑧Although more and more people come to believe … there are still others who insist that …
⑨On the contrary , there are people in favor of …
⑩There are some people who hold different opinions about …
(4)用于陳述個人觀點/想法的常用句型
①My own experience tells me that …
②In my opinion , we should attack more importance to …
③As for my own idea about … I believe …
④As far as I am concerned , I plan to …
⑤Personally , I prefer …
⑥In my view , both sides are partly right in that …
⑦But for me , I would rather …
⑧My own point of view is that …
⑨In conclusion , I support the statement that …
⑩As regards me , I tend to choose …
(5)用于書信寫作的常用句型
①Thank you for your letter of …
②It is a pleasure for me invite you on behalf of … to accept …
③Thanks so much for your letter , which arrived …
④I am writing to you with reference to …
⑤I am writing to you in connection with …
⑥I would be grateful if you could / would …
⑦I would like to know some information on …
⑧It will be appreciated if you can / could …
⑨I would also like to know if you can / could …
⑩I look forward to hearing from you .
(6)用于結尾的常用句型
①From what has been discussed / mentioned above , we may conclude that …
②Therefore , it is not difficult to draw / come to the conclusion that …
③It is high time that something was done about …
④From all the reasons / consideration above , it is evident / clear / obvious that …
⑤Taking into account all these factors , we may reach the conclusion that …
⑥Given the reasons / consideration I have just outlined / discussed / presented , I strongly recommend that …
⑦It is clear , therefore , that …
⑧All in all ,what really matters is , in fact , to …
⑨It is essential that effective measure be taken to …
⑩From what has been discussed above , we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that …
⑪ In conclusion ,the most important is …
⑫ On the whole , it is high time that every one …
⑬As a result , we should take some effective steps to …
⑭ Judging by the figures / statistics , it is not difficult to see that …
⑮ Only in this way / in so doing , can be really …
托福高分作文標志:
1、是否長短句交叉;
2、是否會使用插入語;
3、用詞是否多樣,準確,形象,盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞;
4、關鍵詞是否換用,切勿老用重復詞;
5、句型使用是否準確、地道。
下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項:
1. 適當用被動替換主動,這樣能更客觀的反映事實, 句子開頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫結尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 舉個經典結尾2004年六月六級作文的后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
2. 善于使用插入語,比如說把副詞、連接詞等,作插入語放在中間,一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間,一般放在動詞,助動詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號。
比如說:Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
3. 一定要學會換詞,換形象,具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中,applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)
下面舉一篇南京工程學院某位同學寫的優(yōu)秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。
Computer and I ( By Simmy )
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
exceedingly 替換very
thrilling 替換exciting
sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換sb. be interested in sth.
google 替換search
an army of 替換a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型,用來描述在某個時期發(fā)生了什么事情;Increasing popularity 替換more and more popular
Coincident with … 非常地道的句型,表達“與…一致”的意思,替換With …
Advancement 替換development
Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替換enter into
Current ( currently )替換now
Appeal to sb. 替換sb. be interested in sth.
Growing individuals 替換more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say 經典句型, 說某事是毫不夸張的
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.
For a start 替換To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被動
Additionally 替換In addition / Besides
Deliver 替換send
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence , porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個句子有三個精彩之處,首先There is no denying that這個句型,還有however作為插入語,function in the disservice of 替換do harm to
Emerging 替換appearing ( fading 替換disappearing )
Net citizen 網民,屬于精彩用詞
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
No garden has no weeds 替換Every coin has two sides
Computers do play ,do 強調
Positive 替換important / good 等
A slice of 替換a part of
Unfavorable 替換bad
Impacts 替換effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入語
Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象,merits/ virtues) 替換advantage ( defects 替換disadvantage ) Facet 替換aspect
以下是30個經典的替換詞,各位同學可以參考一下:
1.individuals,characters, folks替換(people ,persons)
2.positive, favorable, rosy (美好的),promising
(有希望的),perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替換good
3.dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替換bad
如果bad做表語,可以有be less impressive替換
eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.
4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替換many.
注:用many, if not most 一定要小心,many后一定要有詞。
Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理 用most, if not all ,替換most.
5.a slice of, quiet a few , several替換some
6.harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,
hold the view that, it is widely shared that,
it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因為是書面語,所以要加that)
7.affair ,business ,matter 替換thing
8.shared 代common
9.reap huge fruits 替換get many benefits )
10.for my part ,from my own perspective 替換in my opinion
11.Increasing(ly),growing 替換more and more( 注意沒有growingly這種形式。所以當修飾名詞時用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞,副詞用increasingly.
Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.
Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.
12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替換hardly
13.beneficial, rewarding替換helpful,
14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替換customer
15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替換very
16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable ... 替換unnecessary, avoidable
17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替換sb take interest in / sb. be interested in
18.capture one's attention替換attract one's attention.
19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代indicate, suggest ,fear
21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替換cause.
22. There are several reasons behind sth 替換..reasons for sth
23.desire 替換want.
24.pour attention into 替換pay attention to
25.bear in mind that 替換remember
26. enjoy, possess 替換have(注意process是過程的意思)
27. interaction替換communication
28.frown on sth替換be against , disagree with sth
29.to name only a few, as an example替換for example, for instance
30. next to / virtually impossible,替換nearly / almost impossible