• Topic 2008.11.9
• Movies and TV have more positive effects than negative effects on young people’s behavior.
電影電視對(duì)于青少年行為的影響利大于弊。
題目中明顯要求就電視的優(yōu)點(diǎn)以及缺點(diǎn)進(jìn)行比較，我們暫且用A、B表示兩個(gè)不同觀點(diǎn)
1.A+A+B
雙關(guān)的寫作的第一種寫法是運(yùn)用兩個(gè)正向的論點(diǎn)去支撐A，再用一個(gè)論點(diǎn)去支持B，因?yàn)锳的優(yōu)勢(shì)更大一些，所以最終得出A更合適的結(jié)果。
• Topic 2008.11.9
• Movies and TV have more positive effects than negative effects on young people’s behavior.
電影電視對(duì)于青少年行為的影響利大于弊。
• Agree:
• The positive influence outweighs their negative effects.
• Large quantities of motion pictures (movies) about encouragement strengthen young generation’s willpower to chase dreams with determination.
• Influenced by a number of interesting TV programs, young people begin to learn things that they used to feel boring.
• Admittedly, we should not ignore that there are some violent plots which tend to result in teenage crimes.However, this kind of movie makes up only a small section of products in film industry and is under the strict control of government. Therefore, its influence is quite limited.
我們可以看到，在這種寫法中，我們所支持的觀點(diǎn)為電影電視是利大于弊的。前兩個(gè)理由我們先正向拋出兩個(gè)論點(diǎn)說明為什么它們對(duì)青年人的影響利大于弊，最后一個(gè)分論點(diǎn)我們寫讓步段，先承認(rèn)它們的確有可能對(duì)青年人行為產(chǎn)生錯(cuò)誤的引導(dǎo)，但是其后又對(duì)這些錯(cuò)誤影響做一些彌補(bǔ)，因?yàn)橛胸?fù)面影響的節(jié)目只是整個(gè)電影市場(chǎng)的一小部分，不能夠以偏概全，斷章取義。
2.A+A-B
我們介紹的第二種寫法是，先用兩個(gè)正向的論點(diǎn)支持A，再用一個(gè)論點(diǎn)去反對(duì)B，最終得出A更適合的結(jié)果。
• Topic: Some people argue that the government should not spend money on public services and facilities, but on arts.
• 有一部分人認(rèn)為政府應(yīng)該花更多的錢在公共服務(wù)和基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施上，而非藝術(shù)上。
• Public facilities, widely accepted as the main foundation to a city’s development, should be one of the highest priorities.
• In addition to social benefits, there are a great number of economic merits that …
• Arts is a key component of culture and naturally passed down from one generation to generation, while public facilities require the spending of government to survive.
這種讓步段寫法是分解了公共基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施以及藝術(shù)的基本特征，藝術(shù)是一種自然流傳的形式，千百年來優(yōu)秀的書法、繪畫、音樂、文學(xué)作品得以傳世靠的不是*的支持，而是源于它的本質(zhì)，所以才被歷史所選擇。相比之下，公共基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施相形見絀，試想如果政府沒有資金投入，它是不可能維持下去的。
• Movies and TV have more positive effects than negative effects on young people’s behavior.
電影電視對(duì)于青少年行為的影響利大于弊。
題目中明顯要求就電視的優(yōu)點(diǎn)以及缺點(diǎn)進(jìn)行比較，我們暫且用A、B表示兩個(gè)不同觀點(diǎn)
1.A+A+B
雙關(guān)的寫作的第一種寫法是運(yùn)用兩個(gè)正向的論點(diǎn)去支撐A，再用一個(gè)論點(diǎn)去支持B，因?yàn)锳的優(yōu)勢(shì)更大一些，所以最終得出A更合適的結(jié)果。
• Topic 2008.11.9
• Movies and TV have more positive effects than negative effects on young people’s behavior.
電影電視對(duì)于青少年行為的影響利大于弊。
• Agree:
• The positive influence outweighs their negative effects.
• Large quantities of motion pictures (movies) about encouragement strengthen young generation’s willpower to chase dreams with determination.
• Influenced by a number of interesting TV programs, young people begin to learn things that they used to feel boring.
• Admittedly, we should not ignore that there are some violent plots which tend to result in teenage crimes.However, this kind of movie makes up only a small section of products in film industry and is under the strict control of government. Therefore, its influence is quite limited.
我們可以看到，在這種寫法中，我們所支持的觀點(diǎn)為電影電視是利大于弊的。前兩個(gè)理由我們先正向拋出兩個(gè)論點(diǎn)說明為什么它們對(duì)青年人的影響利大于弊，最后一個(gè)分論點(diǎn)我們寫讓步段，先承認(rèn)它們的確有可能對(duì)青年人行為產(chǎn)生錯(cuò)誤的引導(dǎo)，但是其后又對(duì)這些錯(cuò)誤影響做一些彌補(bǔ)，因?yàn)橛胸?fù)面影響的節(jié)目只是整個(gè)電影市場(chǎng)的一小部分，不能夠以偏概全，斷章取義。
2.A+A-B
我們介紹的第二種寫法是，先用兩個(gè)正向的論點(diǎn)支持A，再用一個(gè)論點(diǎn)去反對(duì)B，最終得出A更適合的結(jié)果。
• Topic: Some people argue that the government should not spend money on public services and facilities, but on arts.
• 有一部分人認(rèn)為政府應(yīng)該花更多的錢在公共服務(wù)和基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施上，而非藝術(shù)上。
• Public facilities, widely accepted as the main foundation to a city’s development, should be one of the highest priorities.
• In addition to social benefits, there are a great number of economic merits that …
• Arts is a key component of culture and naturally passed down from one generation to generation, while public facilities require the spending of government to survive.
這種讓步段寫法是分解了公共基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施以及藝術(shù)的基本特征，藝術(shù)是一種自然流傳的形式，千百年來優(yōu)秀的書法、繪畫、音樂、文學(xué)作品得以傳世靠的不是*的支持，而是源于它的本質(zhì)，所以才被歷史所選擇。相比之下，公共基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施相形見絀，試想如果政府沒有資金投入，它是不可能維持下去的。