lz 反對(duì)模板:
The lecture talks about , which apparently refutes the points illustrated in the passage.
According to the passage, Conversely, the professor holds the view that
First, the professor argues that , namely . In other words, XXXX nevertheless, which
directly contradicts what the passage indicates, that is, XXXXX.
The second point the professor uses to cast doubt on the passage is that . However, the
passage states that , which is in sharp contrasts to the lecture. It is that as a
matter of fact, according to the lecture. . So there lies another part where
experience contradicts theory (assumption).
Another evidence the lecturer adopts to refute the passage is , differing from the statement
of the passage.
In summary, scarcely at all the professor agrees with what is presented in the passage. He claims that XXXX, whereas the reading materials make point that
反駁的:
Challenge/question/contradict/weaken/jeopardize/cast doubt on/disagree with
Contrary to what is stated in the reading that ..., the speaker strongly thinks that...
提出問題的:
neglect n./v. negligence n.疏忽 forget about; leave out by mistake overlook lose sight of ignore leave out of consideration
缺陷:
faults, weakness, defect, mistake, error,
討論:
Discuss/review/examine/investigate/reinvestigate/reexamine/raise the issue that/strongly think
that/
支持:
Reinforce enhance bolster give a boost to support demonstrate illustrate
Contend a similar stand that, the same as the statement that, in accordance with the Meanwhile, likewise,
論證的:
Proof/demonstrate/sustain/illustrate/confirm/corroborate/substantiate/affirm/strengthen/fortify /underpin/defend/fend for/endorse/
獨(dú)立寫作:
lz 自己的文章:劃線的是重點(diǎn)句型,請(qǐng)發(fā)揮想象力,死命往上套。
When it comes to the issue about living independently or together with parents after grown up,
people's opinion differs from person to person, and culture to culture. Some prefer to be
independence as soon as possible, while others may choose to live with their parents a little
longer on the contrary. On personal level, I support the prior one for reasons of learning to be
independence and keeping one's own privacy. Meanwhile, it is a tradition of my family.
It is true that living with family for a longer time has its own merits. It means that one could keep
living a comfortable life, a life supported by parents and lasting almost twenty years since born,
which do attract some young adults, for a longer time than expected. At the mean time, young
adults could save a lot of money for living in their parents' house and enjoying the food support
from the family. What an appealing life, isn't it? But is it a wise one? When taking more factors
into consideration, as far as I am concerned, living independently overweighs this kind of life.
Recently the ability of young people to live independently from their parents has caused public
concern. Unfortunately people find that hardly can the new generation live a well life alone. It is
young people’s depending on their families too much that leads to this situation. Therefore we
are tempted to ask ourselves: Isn't it necessary for young adults to live their own lives all by
themselves? Isn't it important for young adults to realize the necessity of independence? Isn't it
compulsory for young adults to have an independent life away from their families? Obviously one
cannot live with family for life long. Consequently, one needs to learn independence once grown
up.
The importance of primacy comes next only to the importance of independence. That is, one
cannot keep a total private life living with family. Although one may assume that the family
members would respect others' privacy, the fragile privacy can be hurt and infringed on without
purpose nevertheless. We may easily quote a single example to illustrate this. Just imagine you
are having a phone call with your best friend and you two are talking about something secret and
only shared with friends. At that time your mother passes through your room and occasionally
she gets informed of the certain thing. Examples like this happen everywhere. A survey
conducted by a large company in 10 major cities in China shows that over eighty three
percentage of young adults feels that their privacy get violated by their families. So it is high time
that we seriously take the privacy of our life into account the next time we evaluate the life
together with family.
Moreover, as the proverb says," The apple doesn't fall away from the tree." I get the sense of
independence from my father, who lived alone and earned his own life since he was eighteen. As
a matter of fact, it is an old tradition of my family and I am really glad to keep this tradition.
In short, from what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that it is better for young adults to get independence as soon as possible. Only in this way can we obtain the ability to live alone and the precious privacy of our lives.
Lz 當(dāng)時(shí)摘抄總結(jié)的其他關(guān)鍵句:
開頭:
1、 In response to the problem, some people may argue that___ But is it? Close analysis does
not bear out the argument.
2、 To choose A or choose B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes
are confused by the seemingly good qualities of B, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of
A.
3、 There is no denying the fact that whether to choose A or B is better is a popular topic which
has caused heated debate over a long period of time (because it affects everybody in his or
her daily lives).
Although it seems that sometimes we cannot tell which one outweighs the other between A and B, they deserve some close examination.
There are no less than three advantages in A as rendered below:
中間:
1、 For B, people are often driven to believe that ……. (As a proverb says, “Everything has two
sides”.) Although B does have its seemingly profound advantages, at the mean time there lies
intrinsic harmful characteristics in it such as …… Some experts maintain that……. This
significant point, however, is often not noticed by public. And accordingly, is unconsciously overlooked. What is more, if you notice the invisible benefits of CHOOSING A, you can understand A more deeply.
2、 On the other hand, choosing B also has advantages to some extent.
However, it is also important to see that under certain circumstances B will …… (disadvantage) 或:Yet there are some people who cast serious doubts on B
3、 第四段(針對(duì)我個(gè)人的情況又可以說出一套理由)But if all these factors are contemplated,
according to my personality and fondness, the advantages of A carry more weight than those
of B because A fits me better in two ways:
4、 Moreover, ________also provides adequate justification for my opinion. According to 100
studies carried out in 10 major cities throughout China,___________." No one can deny the
truth behind the number."
In addition, an equally essential factor which deserves people's attention is_______.
Admittedly, it may be true that ______.However, this alone does not provide sufficient support to claim that______. Actually, it is too specific and weak to strengthen the point that_________.
結(jié)尾:
1、 Which one I prefer depends on my own experience, life style and emotional concerns. To be
frank, I would like to choose A
2、 Therefore from what we have discussed, we may safely come to the conclusion that
CHOOSING AAA is a rather wise decision.
3、 There is little doubt that more and more people will come to realize that_______.
綜合寫作:
lz 反對(duì)模板:
The lecture talks about , which apparently refutes the points illustrated in the passage.
According to the passage, Conversely, the professor holds the view that
First, the professor argues that , namely . In other words, XXXX nevertheless, which
directly contradicts what the passage indicates, that is, XXXXX.
The second point the professor uses to cast doubt on the passage is that . However, the
passage states that , which is in sharp contrasts to the lecture. It is that as a
matter of fact, according to the lecture. . So there lies another part where
experience contradicts theory (assumption).
Another evidence the lecturer adopts to refute the passage is , differing from the statement
of the passage.
In summary, scarcely at all the professor agrees with what is presented in the passage. He claims that XXXX, whereas the reading materials make point that
反駁的:
Challenge/question/contradict/weaken/jeopardize/cast doubt on/disagree with
Contrary to what is stated in the reading that ..., the speaker strongly thinks that...
提出問題的:
neglect n./v. negligence n.疏忽 forget about; leave out by mistake overlook lose sight of ignore leave out of consideration
缺陷:
faults, weakness, defect, mistake, error,
討論:
Discuss/review/examine/investigate/reinvestigate/reexamine/raise the issue that/strongly think
that/
支持:
Reinforce enhance bolster give a boost to support demonstrate illustrate
Contend a similar stand that, the same as the statement that, in accordance with the Meanwhile, likewise,
論證的:
Proof/demonstrate/sustain/illustrate/confirm/corroborate/substantiate/affirm/strengthen/fortify /underpin/defend/fend for/endorse/
獨(dú)立寫作:
lz 自己的文章:劃線的是重點(diǎn)句型,請(qǐng)發(fā)揮想象力,死命往上套。
When it comes to the issue about living independently or together with parents after grown up,
people's opinion differs from person to person, and culture to culture. Some prefer to be
independence as soon as possible, while others may choose to live with their parents a little
longer on the contrary. On personal level, I support the prior one for reasons of learning to be
independence and keeping one's own privacy. Meanwhile, it is a tradition of my family.
It is true that living with family for a longer time has its own merits. It means that one could keep
living a comfortable life, a life supported by parents and lasting almost twenty years since born,
which do attract some young adults, for a longer time than expected. At the mean time, young
adults could save a lot of money for living in their parents' house and enjoying the food support
from the family. What an appealing life, isn't it? But is it a wise one? When taking more factors
into consideration, as far as I am concerned, living independently overweighs this kind of life.
Recently the ability of young people to live independently from their parents has caused public
concern. Unfortunately people find that hardly can the new generation live a well life alone. It is
young people’s depending on their families too much that leads to this situation. Therefore we
are tempted to ask ourselves: Isn't it necessary for young adults to live their own lives all by
themselves? Isn't it important for young adults to realize the necessity of independence? Isn't it
compulsory for young adults to have an independent life away from their families? Obviously one
cannot live with family for life long. Consequently, one needs to learn independence once grown
up.
The importance of primacy comes next only to the importance of independence. That is, one
cannot keep a total private life living with family. Although one may assume that the family
members would respect others' privacy, the fragile privacy can be hurt and infringed on without
purpose nevertheless. We may easily quote a single example to illustrate this. Just imagine you
are having a phone call with your best friend and you two are talking about something secret and
only shared with friends. At that time your mother passes through your room and occasionally
she gets informed of the certain thing. Examples like this happen everywhere. A survey
conducted by a large company in 10 major cities in China shows that over eighty three
percentage of young adults feels that their privacy get violated by their families. So it is high time
that we seriously take the privacy of our life into account the next time we evaluate the life
together with family.
Moreover, as the proverb says," The apple doesn't fall away from the tree." I get the sense of
independence from my father, who lived alone and earned his own life since he was eighteen. As
a matter of fact, it is an old tradition of my family and I am really glad to keep this tradition.
In short, from what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that it is better for young adults to get independence as soon as possible. Only in this way can we obtain the ability to live alone and the precious privacy of our lives.
Lz 當(dāng)時(shí)摘抄總結(jié)的其他關(guān)鍵句:
開頭:
1、 In response to the problem, some people may argue that___ But is it? Close analysis does
not bear out the argument.
2、 To choose A or choose B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes
are confused by the seemingly good qualities of B, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of
A.
3、 There is no denying the fact that whether to choose A or B is better is a popular topic which
has caused heated debate over a long period of time (because it affects everybody in his or
her daily lives).
Although it seems that sometimes we cannot tell which one outweighs the other between A and B, they deserve some close examination.
There are no less than three advantages in A as rendered below:
中間:
1、 For B, people are often driven to believe that ……. (As a proverb says, “Everything has two
sides”.) Although B does have its seemingly profound advantages, at the mean time there lies
intrinsic harmful characteristics in it such as …… Some experts maintain that……. This
significant point, however, is often not noticed by public. And accordingly, is unconsciously overlooked. What is more, if you notice the invisible benefits of CHOOSING A, you can understand A more deeply.
2、 On the other hand, choosing B also has advantages to some extent.
However, it is also important to see that under certain circumstances B will …… (disadvantage) 或:Yet there are some people who cast serious doubts on B
3、 第四段(針對(duì)我個(gè)人的情況又可以說出一套理由)But if all these factors are contemplated,
according to my personality and fondness, the advantages of A carry more weight than those
of B because A fits me better in two ways:
4、 Moreover, ________also provides adequate justification for my opinion. According to 100
studies carried out in 10 major cities throughout China,___________." No one can deny the
truth behind the number."
In addition, an equally essential factor which deserves people's attention is_______.
Admittedly, it may be true that ______.However, this alone does not provide sufficient support to claim that______. Actually, it is too specific and weak to strengthen the point that_________.
結(jié)尾:
1、 Which one I prefer depends on my own experience, life style and emotional concerns. To be
frank, I would like to choose A
2、 Therefore from what we have discussed, we may safely come to the conclusion that
CHOOSING AAA is a rather wise decision.
3、 There is little doubt that more and more people will come to realize that_______.