2014年6月英語四級寫作范文(周思成)，本次2014年6月14日英語四級寫作范文題目是“Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown/your campus/China（多題多卷,3個不同詞匯）, what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?”
【參考范文1】
The most interesting place
Dear Pacival,
I am thrilled to know that you are going to visit my hometown and I can’t wait see you again. I miss everything that happened when I was in your city, and your parents and you were so kind to me that I will try my best this time to make your stay an enjoyable and memerable one.
My home town，Changsha, is the capital of Hunan province and best known as the star city for its well developed entertainment industry and tourism. There are numerous places and attractions worth recommending, and Yuelu Mountain is the first one that I’d like to introduce to you. Firstly, in the foot of Yuelu Mountain is the prominent Yuelu Academy. It has an exceedingly long history and its architecture is characteristic of Song Dynasty. Then, after a half hour, we will reach the Bird Forest. There are various rare birds there, and they can sing, perform, and interact with us. After about an hour, we will arrive at the peak, Baiyun Summit. The scenery there is spectacular and we can have a wonderful panorama of the whole city.
I bet you must be very excited about all these activities, and the Yuelu Mountain is waiting for us to explore. All you need to do is pack up and go, and I assure you that this trip will be a great fun.
Should you have any question and suggestion, please let me know.
I am looking forward to your arrival.
Yours sincerely,
Romeo
2014年6月英語四級作文點評：豫園（滬江版）
【參考范文2】
Yu Garden
If a foreign friend of mine is going to visit my hometown, Shanghai, I would like to take her to Yu Garden.
Yu Garden is a traditional Chinese garden located beside the City God Temple in the northeast of Shanghai. Here she will marvel at the exotic and exquisite beauty of the Chinese Garden. She can walk on the crooked bridge and take photos of the beautiful goldfish. Besides, she can taste the local cuisines like steamed buns, wonton noodles, soy milk. There are a variety of mouth-watering snacks there. Apart from the beautiful scenery and delicious food, she will also be attracted by the remarkable performance of different craftsmen. For example, she will see Shanghai-style paper-cutting, and the process of making Chinese candy and clay figurines.
I believe my friend will have a great day if she visits Yu Garden. This is a place where the features of this city are combined.
【點評】
本次四級作文一反以往的圖片題形式，改為情境式話題作文，可能讓準備好圖片題寫作的同學有點措手不及。不過話題貼近生活，要求介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)的某景點，寫起來相對簡單。此類文章在結構上的要求不像議論文那樣嚴格，所以可以在語言文字上博出彩，增加詞匯的豐富性、句子的流暢性都是不錯的加分點。
【參考范文3】
2014年6月英語四級作文點評及范文（新東方版）
If my foreign friend comes to my hometown, I will take her to the Central Avenue .When it comes to the reasons why I choose this place, they can be briefly summed up as below.
To start with, Central Avenue is a symbol of Harbin, which has a long history. There are European-style buildings in mounting numbers along the street, attracting a great many tourists to take photos with them. Moreover, a variety of delicious foods are tempting. Taking a look around, I can find examples too numerous to list. The best illustration might be ice-cream brick of Ma Dieer. Finally, brilliant historic culture can widen vision and enhance knowledge, laying a solid foundation for the understanding of this fabulous city.
Harbin is a city full of vitality and energy. I believe my foreign friend will enjoy her days here. Not only can she appreciate the landscape of the Songhua River but also taste authentic northeast food. No better place can be chosen than Central Avenue!
【參考范文1】
The most interesting place
Dear Pacival,
I am thrilled to know that you are going to visit my hometown and I can’t wait see you again. I miss everything that happened when I was in your city, and your parents and you were so kind to me that I will try my best this time to make your stay an enjoyable and memerable one.
My home town，Changsha, is the capital of Hunan province and best known as the star city for its well developed entertainment industry and tourism. There are numerous places and attractions worth recommending, and Yuelu Mountain is the first one that I’d like to introduce to you. Firstly, in the foot of Yuelu Mountain is the prominent Yuelu Academy. It has an exceedingly long history and its architecture is characteristic of Song Dynasty. Then, after a half hour, we will reach the Bird Forest. There are various rare birds there, and they can sing, perform, and interact with us. After about an hour, we will arrive at the peak, Baiyun Summit. The scenery there is spectacular and we can have a wonderful panorama of the whole city.
I bet you must be very excited about all these activities, and the Yuelu Mountain is waiting for us to explore. All you need to do is pack up and go, and I assure you that this trip will be a great fun.
Should you have any question and suggestion, please let me know.
I am looking forward to your arrival.
Yours sincerely,
Romeo
2014年6月英語四級作文點評：豫園（滬江版）
【參考范文2】
Yu Garden
If a foreign friend of mine is going to visit my hometown, Shanghai, I would like to take her to Yu Garden.
Yu Garden is a traditional Chinese garden located beside the City God Temple in the northeast of Shanghai. Here she will marvel at the exotic and exquisite beauty of the Chinese Garden. She can walk on the crooked bridge and take photos of the beautiful goldfish. Besides, she can taste the local cuisines like steamed buns, wonton noodles, soy milk. There are a variety of mouth-watering snacks there. Apart from the beautiful scenery and delicious food, she will also be attracted by the remarkable performance of different craftsmen. For example, she will see Shanghai-style paper-cutting, and the process of making Chinese candy and clay figurines.
I believe my friend will have a great day if she visits Yu Garden. This is a place where the features of this city are combined.
【點評】
本次四級作文一反以往的圖片題形式，改為情境式話題作文，可能讓準備好圖片題寫作的同學有點措手不及。不過話題貼近生活，要求介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)的某景點，寫起來相對簡單。此類文章在結構上的要求不像議論文那樣嚴格，所以可以在語言文字上博出彩，增加詞匯的豐富性、句子的流暢性都是不錯的加分點。
【參考范文3】
2014年6月英語四級作文點評及范文（新東方版）
If my foreign friend comes to my hometown, I will take her to the Central Avenue .When it comes to the reasons why I choose this place, they can be briefly summed up as below.
To start with, Central Avenue is a symbol of Harbin, which has a long history. There are European-style buildings in mounting numbers along the street, attracting a great many tourists to take photos with them. Moreover, a variety of delicious foods are tempting. Taking a look around, I can find examples too numerous to list. The best illustration might be ice-cream brick of Ma Dieer. Finally, brilliant historic culture can widen vision and enhance knowledge, laying a solid foundation for the understanding of this fabulous city.
Harbin is a city full of vitality and energy. I believe my foreign friend will enjoy her days here. Not only can she appreciate the landscape of the Songhua River but also taste authentic northeast food. No better place can be chosen than Central Avenue!