2014年考研《英語一》小作文范文及點評

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Honorable president,
    I’m writing this letter to express my views concerning about how to improve the health status among our university students. My suggestions are as follows.
    Firstly, we should pay more attention to the physical conditions of the undergraduates rather than their academic performances. Secondly, adequate PE lessons should be guaranteed in their course systems. Finally, we hope that our university should regularly organize various extracurricular activities. Through the implementation of the above methods, I am convinced that the health conditions of our college students could be enhanced considerably.
    I am looking forward to your reply and I will appreciate your consideration for my proposals.
    Yours sincerely,
    Xxx
    本篇考研英語一的小作文是考研常見的建議信,題材涉及大學校園生活,考生應該比較熟悉,難度不大。需要注意的是小作文重在語句的精煉,在信中要清晰明了地表達觀點、列明論點??忌跁鴮憰r,應當首先表明寫此信件的目的;然后具體闡述幾個方面,并可借用firstly, secondly, finally等標示詞有條理地闡明自己的建議;最后寫希望收信人給予回復或采納,并表示感謝。