Once you have a first draft you, can deletematerial that is unrelated to your thesis and addmaterial necessary to illustrate your points andmake your paper convincing.
【分析】復合句。主句主干為you can delete materialand add material and make your paper convincing。 句首的once引導條件狀語從句;that引導的定語從句修飾其前的 material;形容詞短語 necessary to illustrate yourpoints做后置定語修飾第二個material。
【譯文】一旦初稿寫成，你就可以刪除與文章主題無關(guān)的材料，添加需要的材料來證明你的觀點并使文章具有說服力。
【分析】復合句。主句主干為you can delete materialand add material and make your paper convincing。 句首的once引導條件狀語從句;that引導的定語從句修飾其前的 material;形容詞短語 necessary to illustrate yourpoints做后置定語修飾第二個material。
【譯文】一旦初稿寫成，你就可以刪除與文章主題無關(guān)的材料，添加需要的材料來證明你的觀點并使文章具有說服力。