Nowadays，the problem of generation gap becomes more and more serious. Based on the survey by our school, the poor relationship between parents and their children is very common. Are these problems caused by the busy parents? Or, do the harsh family rules affect their relationship?
Firstly, in most of the families in the US, both of the parents have to go out for work in order to earn more money to proveide better environment for their lovely children. Unfortunately, this causes the rare communication between them and their children, since these parents always take rest during leisure time. These parents and children cannot know deeply about each other, then friction is easy to appear. Therefore, a wid e generation gap comes into being.
Secondly, parents who ask their children to be absolute obedient to them is also one of the grave causes of generation gap between them. Therefore, these children are not willing to communicate with their parents and most of these parents are not active to talk with their children. Thus, misunderstanding between them often occurs.
To solve these problems, the busy parents should sacrifice their spare time to communicate with their children actively so as to improve their relationship. At the same time, they can also observe their children’s behavior in order to understand their children’ personality and reduce the quarrel betweeen them.
Besides that, the parents should try to give up their absolute power in family to give a better image to their children since it can make their children feel free to chat with their parents. Then it is easy for the parents to approach their lovely children. Therefore, a close and harmonious relationship between parents and children appears.
In conclusion, to have a close relationship between parents and children, the parents should devote their leisure time to talking with their children and observing their childern’s personality and give their children the approaching images. If so, this terrible phenomenon, generation gap, cannot occur any more.
亮點(diǎn)詞句
1. Based on the survey by our school…我校的一項(xiàng)調(diào)查顯示……
2. Are these problems caused by the busy parents?Or, do the harsh family rules
affect their relationship? 這些問題都是因?yàn)楦改柑σ鸬膯?抑或家教太嚴(yán)影響了兩代
人的關(guān)系?(以提問方式引出文章內(nèi)容,起到引發(fā)讀者思考、增加閱讀興趣的作用)
3. friction n. 沖突，不和，摩擦
4. come into being 出現(xiàn)，形成
5. be absolutely obedient to somebody 對(duì)某人絕對(duì)地順從
6. Thus, misunderstanding between them often occurs. 因此，誤解時(shí)有發(fā)生
7. try to give up their absolute power in family to give a better image to their
children 盡量放棄他們（父母）在家中的絕對(duì)權(quán)力，在孩子面前樹立良好的形象
作文地帶整理點(diǎn)評(píng)
本文作者是一個(gè)美國孩子。在遇到這類文題時(shí)，我們的學(xué)生往往會(huì)編造出一些例子（別人的或自己的）來說明代溝的存在和危害，最后的落腳點(diǎn)通常是“少年不知愁滋味”、“枉費(fèi)父母一片心”等。這樣的立意不能說沒有道理，但千篇一律地都這樣說，無疑體現(xiàn)了我們思維的保守和僵化。
本文作者獨(dú)辟蹊徑，重在說理，鮮明地提出了在消除代溝方面父母應(yīng)該做些什么，期盼之情，溢于言表。文章的立意也做到了平中見奇。此外，作者使用了一些關(guān)鍵性的承上啟下的詞，如firstly, secondly, besides that, therefore, in conclusion等，既體現(xiàn)了思維的縝密性，又使文章看起來布局合理，層次分明。
Firstly, in most of the families in the US, both of the parents have to go out for work in order to earn more money to proveide better environment for their lovely children. Unfortunately, this causes the rare communication between them and their children, since these parents always take rest during leisure time. These parents and children cannot know deeply about each other, then friction is easy to appear. Therefore, a wid e generation gap comes into being.
Secondly, parents who ask their children to be absolute obedient to them is also one of the grave causes of generation gap between them. Therefore, these children are not willing to communicate with their parents and most of these parents are not active to talk with their children. Thus, misunderstanding between them often occurs.
To solve these problems, the busy parents should sacrifice their spare time to communicate with their children actively so as to improve their relationship. At the same time, they can also observe their children’s behavior in order to understand their children’ personality and reduce the quarrel betweeen them.
Besides that, the parents should try to give up their absolute power in family to give a better image to their children since it can make their children feel free to chat with their parents. Then it is easy for the parents to approach their lovely children. Therefore, a close and harmonious relationship between parents and children appears.
In conclusion, to have a close relationship between parents and children, the parents should devote their leisure time to talking with their children and observing their childern’s personality and give their children the approaching images. If so, this terrible phenomenon, generation gap, cannot occur any more.
亮點(diǎn)詞句
1. Based on the survey by our school…我校的一項(xiàng)調(diào)查顯示……
2. Are these problems caused by the busy parents?Or, do the harsh family rules
affect their relationship? 這些問題都是因?yàn)楦改柑σ鸬膯?抑或家教太嚴(yán)影響了兩代
人的關(guān)系?(以提問方式引出文章內(nèi)容,起到引發(fā)讀者思考、增加閱讀興趣的作用)
3. friction n. 沖突，不和，摩擦
4. come into being 出現(xiàn)，形成
5. be absolutely obedient to somebody 對(duì)某人絕對(duì)地順從
6. Thus, misunderstanding between them often occurs. 因此，誤解時(shí)有發(fā)生
7. try to give up their absolute power in family to give a better image to their
children 盡量放棄他們（父母）在家中的絕對(duì)權(quán)力，在孩子面前樹立良好的形象
作文地帶整理點(diǎn)評(píng)
本文作者是一個(gè)美國孩子。在遇到這類文題時(shí)，我們的學(xué)生往往會(huì)編造出一些例子（別人的或自己的）來說明代溝的存在和危害，最后的落腳點(diǎn)通常是“少年不知愁滋味”、“枉費(fèi)父母一片心”等。這樣的立意不能說沒有道理，但千篇一律地都這樣說，無疑體現(xiàn)了我們思維的保守和僵化。
本文作者獨(dú)辟蹊徑，重在說理，鮮明地提出了在消除代溝方面父母應(yīng)該做些什么，期盼之情，溢于言表。文章的立意也做到了平中見奇。此外，作者使用了一些關(guān)鍵性的承上啟下的詞，如firstly, secondly, besides that, therefore, in conclusion等，既體現(xiàn)了思維的縝密性，又使文章看起來布局合理，層次分明。