2012年12月英語六級作文寫作技巧

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綜 合 改錯(Errors Correction):   一、語法錯誤   二、詞匯錯誤   三、邏輯錯誤   四、多詞少詞   Example:Television is rapidly becoming the literature   of our periods. Many of the arguments 1.time/times/age   having used for the study for literature as a 2. /   school subject are valid for ∧ study of television. 3. the   綜 合 改 錯(Errors Correction):   語法錯誤   1、平行結(jié)構(gòu)(not only...but also\both...and\either...or\and)   1) A professor’s salary is higher than a secretary.[secretary’s]   2) One of these is informative, interesting, and is easy to understand.[去掉]   3) Defining a problem is easier than to provide a solution.[providing]   2、連詞錯誤   1) Candle will later be replaced by lamp, that could burn longer and lighter. [which]   2) The children attended a small elementary school (often of just one room) to that they had to walk every day, possibly for a few miles. [which,that前只能有except和in。except that除此以外;in that因?yàn)?,體現(xiàn)在]   3) It will be interesting to discover how many young people go to universities without any idea of that they are going to do afterward. [what,what相當(dāng)于the thing that]   4) It appears that we all find company in sound, if we demand a little quiet from time to time. [but或yet]   5) They are likely to travel more and to want more education. Nevertheless, many more jobs are available in these services. [Therefore或So]   3、分詞錯誤   1) Police’s records show a surprised link between changes in the seasons and crime patterns. [surprising]   2) Deciding how much discomfort and risk we are preparing to put up with in the name of better health is a high personal matter, not a decision we should remain to doctors alone.   3) Even the quiet of our careful protected wilderness areas can be invaded at any moment by a passed jet. [passing]   4) So a sportsman’s individual way of walking with raised shoulders is imitated by an admired fan. [admiring]   4、指代錯誤   1) A break in their employment, or a decision to work part time, will slow its raises and promotions-because it would for men. [their]   2) Clearly some risks worth taking, especially when the rewards are high: a man surrounded by flames and smoke generally considers that jumping out of a second-floor window is an acceptable risk to save its life. [his] 轉(zhuǎn)自:考試網(wǎng) - [Examw.Com]   3) The modern light-house also identifies it in a code known to all ships. [itself]   5、形容詞、副詞(略)   6、謂語錯誤(主謂一致、時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài))   1) Business today whether it is running a little gas-station or a big factory take good management.[takes]   2) Advances in technology has also changed people’s lives.   3) But if 98 percent of us doesn’t need to work, what are we going to do with ourselves? [don’t]   4) Whether women who have started a career will attain pay equality with men rest on at least two factors. [rests]   5) In some places all the trees have cut down. [have been]