托??谡ZTask6實例賞析

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廣大托友們一定很清楚IBT口語中難度系數(shù)的就是屬于Integrated speaking的Task6,因為它僅僅提供一段長達2分鐘的lecture,然后要求大家用20seconds來prepare,并且必須在1分鐘之內(nèi)陳述出來。那么多說無益,我今天就拿來客戶的三篇task6實例和大家一起探討一下!
    Task6常見問題
    1、雖然已經(jīng)掌握了Lecture中所透露的基本信息,但是還是會遺漏一些重要信息分支或者是關鍵詞匯。
    2、對一些比較生僻的地理專有名詞把握得不是很好,然后一概用一些泛指的詞匯來代替。
    3、用詞方面存在的問題:首先,在陳述中重復使用一些詞匯,嚴重影響口語表達的豐富性和多樣性;然后,對一些行近詞并沒有精確把握。行近詞很容易給人造成混淆,但是它們的真正意思卻很不相同,所以如果沒有很準確地把握而混用了行近詞,可以想象的到出來的表達效果會讓人啼笑皆非!
    實例1
    Using points and examples from the talk, describe traditional beliefs about trees, and explain why people have thought of trees as special.
    Sample answer
    ①Some people believe that the first people come from ash trees.②Some people believe trees can help people avoid some special bone disease. ③Some people believe the branch of trees can help them find water on the ground.④ ⑷And people have thought of trees as special because trees is important people.⑤⑸Trees can provide food or use as building materials.
    解析
    ①中表述了其中的基本信息,但是太過于籠統(tǒng),遺漏了一些細節(jié)。
    Better expression: The Norse people and Algonquin people both honored the ash tree as cosmic tree. According to their traditions, the first human beings come from the ash tree.
    ②對聽力材料中所給出信息的理解有所偏差。
    Better expression: The Europeans in North America also hold beliefs about trees. They think that people can avoid getting a disease of the bones by carrying the seeds of buckeye tree in their pockets.
    ③Better expression: They also hold the opinion that the branch of the hazel trees can help water dowsers to find water underground.
    說明:本段陳述中多次重復使用believe,這對體現(xiàn)語言的多樣性表達不是很好!而且遺漏了water dowser探井人這個關鍵信息詞,此外我們知道尋找水源都是在地下進行,故不能使用on the ground而應該是underground。本段的人稱使用的是they,因為它和②中的主語是一致的,都是The Europeans in North America對trees的different beliefs.
    ④Better expression: Trees are important for people.
    說明:類似這樣的基本語法錯誤實在是不應該犯的!
    ⑤Better expression: trees can provide many life’s necessities for people, such as, food, oils, building materials, medicines, spices and dyes.
    總體評析:這位托友已經(jīng)把握lecture中的基本信息,語言基本流暢,但是表達不夠完整、精確、缺少細節(jié),而且其對地理名詞的掌握得并不好,都一概用some people來代替,這是很不可取的,針對這個問題就需要大家在平常的學習中有系統(tǒng)地積累一些專有名詞。