2012考研進(jìn)入沖刺階段，提高復(fù)習(xí)效率很重要，考研英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)方面每天要用規(guī)范的英語(yǔ)句子練習(xí)。句子冗長(zhǎng)是考生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)最容易出現(xiàn)的毛病。有的考生錯(cuò)誤地認(rèn)為，句子越長(zhǎng)，就越顯示出自己的英語(yǔ)水平高超。這是造成句子冗長(zhǎng)的原因之一。另一個(gè)原因是受漢語(yǔ)的影響，有的考生在造句時(shí)，頭腦中首先出現(xiàn)的是漢語(yǔ)句子，然后再翻譯成英語(yǔ)，這不可避免地形成了漢語(yǔ)式的贅述。
明確了以上兩個(gè)原因之后，考生應(yīng)時(shí)刻力求句子的簡(jiǎn)練和表達(dá)的清晰，刪除多余無(wú)關(guān)的詞語(yǔ)，有意識(shí)地克服一味追求長(zhǎng)句的弊病，學(xué)會(huì)靈活變換句式。同時(shí)還應(yīng)當(dāng)克服漢語(yǔ)的影響，不要用硬譯的方法來(lái)組合語(yǔ)句，逐漸養(yǎng)成用英語(yǔ)進(jìn)行思維的習(xí)慣。
誤：In my opinion, I think the picture is very meaningful.(這里的In my opinion和I think是同義的，是不必要的重復(fù)。)
正：In my opinion, the picture is very meaningful. 或者I think the picture is very meaningful.
誤：The distant explosion was audible to the ear. (audible意為“可聽(tīng)見(jiàn)的，聽(tīng)得見(jiàn)的”，to the ear是多余的詞語(yǔ)，應(yīng)該刪掉。)
誤：There are four companies in Shanghai, and any of them can supply us with spare parts. (此句可簡(jiǎn)化成 Any of the four companies in Shanghai can supply spare parts.)
另：The bottle that are placed on the shelf contain some chemicals that have been newly discovered. 此句可簡(jiǎn)化為：The bottle on the shelf contain some new chemicals.
Mr. Li, who is my favorite professor, has received a Distinguished Teacher Award. 此句可簡(jiǎn)化為：Mr. Li, my favorite professor, has received a Distinguished Teacher Award.
另外，漢語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣也是造成表達(dá)臃腫的原因。比如，在漢語(yǔ)中，我們常說(shuō)：“壓倒多數(shù)”、“適當(dāng)調(diào)整”、“基本完成”、“堅(jiān)決禁止” 、“加快改革的步伐”等，但如果用下列英語(yǔ)表達(dá)這些概念就顯得多余了：“overwhelming majority”、“appropriate readjustment”、“basically accomplish”、“firmly forbid”、“accelerate the pace of reform”?！癿ajority”指的肯定是絕大多數(shù);“readjustment”肯定要適當(dāng);“基本完成”中的“基本”是漢語(yǔ)中的謙辭;“forbid”本身就包含堅(jiān)決禁止的含義;“accelerate the pace of reform”中的pace多余，可以簡(jiǎn)化成“accelerate the reform”。
類似的贅述還有以下表達(dá)，其實(shí)，用箭頭后面的表達(dá)更為簡(jiǎn)潔：
to make an investigation of---- to investigate
to make a careful study of ----to study carefully
to make a decision of---- to decide to
to make a proposal that ----to propose that
to make efforts to ----to try/attempt to
to make an analysis of ----to analyze
to have a dislike for ----to dislike
to have trust in---- to trust
to have an influence on---- to influence
to have adequate knowledge of---- to know enough about
to have the need for---- to need
to have respect for---- to respect
to give guidance to ----to guide
to provide assistance to---- to assist
to carry out the struggle against ----to struggle against
to conduct reform of ----to reform
to engage in free discussion of---- to discuss freely
to achieve success in ----to succeed in
to accomplish the modernization of---- to modernize
to realize the transformation of---- to transform
to bring about an improvement in---- to improve
to place stress on ----to stress
to exercise control over---- to control
to register an increase ----to increase
明確了以上兩個(gè)原因之后，考生應(yīng)時(shí)刻力求句子的簡(jiǎn)練和表達(dá)的清晰，刪除多余無(wú)關(guān)的詞語(yǔ)，有意識(shí)地克服一味追求長(zhǎng)句的弊病，學(xué)會(huì)靈活變換句式。同時(shí)還應(yīng)當(dāng)克服漢語(yǔ)的影響，不要用硬譯的方法來(lái)組合語(yǔ)句，逐漸養(yǎng)成用英語(yǔ)進(jìn)行思維的習(xí)慣。
誤：In my opinion, I think the picture is very meaningful.(這里的In my opinion和I think是同義的，是不必要的重復(fù)。)
正：In my opinion, the picture is very meaningful. 或者I think the picture is very meaningful.
誤：The distant explosion was audible to the ear. (audible意為“可聽(tīng)見(jiàn)的，聽(tīng)得見(jiàn)的”，to the ear是多余的詞語(yǔ)，應(yīng)該刪掉。)
誤：There are four companies in Shanghai, and any of them can supply us with spare parts. (此句可簡(jiǎn)化成 Any of the four companies in Shanghai can supply spare parts.)
另：The bottle that are placed on the shelf contain some chemicals that have been newly discovered. 此句可簡(jiǎn)化為：The bottle on the shelf contain some new chemicals.
Mr. Li, who is my favorite professor, has received a Distinguished Teacher Award. 此句可簡(jiǎn)化為：Mr. Li, my favorite professor, has received a Distinguished Teacher Award.
另外，漢語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣也是造成表達(dá)臃腫的原因。比如，在漢語(yǔ)中，我們常說(shuō)：“壓倒多數(shù)”、“適當(dāng)調(diào)整”、“基本完成”、“堅(jiān)決禁止” 、“加快改革的步伐”等，但如果用下列英語(yǔ)表達(dá)這些概念就顯得多余了：“overwhelming majority”、“appropriate readjustment”、“basically accomplish”、“firmly forbid”、“accelerate the pace of reform”?！癿ajority”指的肯定是絕大多數(shù);“readjustment”肯定要適當(dāng);“基本完成”中的“基本”是漢語(yǔ)中的謙辭;“forbid”本身就包含堅(jiān)決禁止的含義;“accelerate the pace of reform”中的pace多余，可以簡(jiǎn)化成“accelerate the reform”。
類似的贅述還有以下表達(dá)，其實(shí)，用箭頭后面的表達(dá)更為簡(jiǎn)潔：
to make an investigation of---- to investigate
to make a careful study of ----to study carefully
to make a decision of---- to decide to
to make a proposal that ----to propose that
to make efforts to ----to try/attempt to
to make an analysis of ----to analyze
to have a dislike for ----to dislike
to have trust in---- to trust
to have an influence on---- to influence
to have adequate knowledge of---- to know enough about
to have the need for---- to need
to have respect for---- to respect
to give guidance to ----to guide
to provide assistance to---- to assist
to carry out the struggle against ----to struggle against
to conduct reform of ----to reform
to engage in free discussion of---- to discuss freely
to achieve success in ----to succeed in
to accomplish the modernization of---- to modernize
to realize the transformation of---- to transform
to bring about an improvement in---- to improve
to place stress on ----to stress
to exercise control over---- to control
to register an increase ----to increase