GMAT考試:2011年8月gmat作文機(jī)經(jīng)AA(至8.14)(5)

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    提供觀(guān)點(diǎn):
    1、The absolute value of consumption should be given by the author.
    2、all things are equal
    3、Whether the increase of profit gained by attracting more middle-aged consumers will be offset
    4、by the reduction of profit because of the loss of young consumers.
    40. 是一個(gè)百貨 做調(diào)查 加了一個(gè) phmancy銷(xiāo)量提升20% 所以得出結(jié)論 顧客更看重購(gòu)物的方便性,所以應(yīng)該 。。。 然后應(yīng)該 增加new department 以增加 competitive advantage
    [v2] 一個(gè)grocery shop去年增加了pharmacy section就導(dǎo)致了sales increase20%,所以一個(gè)人就說(shuō)customers like one-stop shopping。 因此,要增加profit就要增加repair 還有一個(gè)什么部門(mén)(不記得了),還有什么什么兩個(gè)部門(mén)。。。
    [v3] The total sales increased 20% after adding a pharmacy totheir grocery store. Because the customers like convenience of one-stopshopping, the manager thinks they should put clothing department to a hairsalon or restaurant…。.
    提供觀(guān)點(diǎn):
    1、時(shí)間關(guān)系不能推出因果關(guān)系。僅因藥品專(zhuān)柜開(kāi)在銷(xiāo)售額增加前,就認(rèn)為總體銷(xiāo)售額增加時(shí)其結(jié)果,是錯(cuò)誤的
    2、錯(cuò)誤類(lèi)比。即使銷(xiāo)售額增加是由藥品專(zhuān)柜開(kāi)設(shè)引起,也不代表開(kāi)設(shè)其他專(zhuān)柜能增加銷(xiāo)售額(顧客不一定更關(guān)注一條龍購(gòu)物的便利)
    3、增加銷(xiāo)售額未必增加利潤(rùn),增加服務(wù)也要增加成本