滿分文（一）
Dear Peter，
I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.
Since Im quite interested in English， I would like to make an English pen friend to improve my writing. Can you introduce one to me？ My ideal pen friend should be of my age， and a boy will be better. A boy who likes traveling and football will be a good candidate.
In my opinion， the guy of my age will share almost the same experiences as me and it is easier to talk to each other. We can share our feelings of traveling and football. If possible， I hope that he likes pets. Hope you can find me an ideal pen friend.Thank you.
Best regards，
Li Hua
點評：
本文屬于比較“平”的文章，即穩(wěn)中求勝。文章沒有華麗的詞語，但是使用了一些短語和結(jié)構(gòu)，能夠獲得老師的欣賞。首句是個原因狀語從句。文章也運用了定語從句來修飾boy，比較好。If possible這個省略句則表明作者對這類狀語從句的熟悉。
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好詞：
1. candidate n.候選人
2.share with 與…分享
好句：In my opinion， the guy of my age will share almost the same experiences as me and it is easier to talk to each other.在我看來，像我這樣年齡的男生和我會有更多的共同語言。
好處：復雜句的組合很好。
Dear Peter，
I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.
Since Im quite interested in English， I would like to make an English pen friend to improve my writing. Can you introduce one to me？ My ideal pen friend should be of my age， and a boy will be better. A boy who likes traveling and football will be a good candidate.
In my opinion， the guy of my age will share almost the same experiences as me and it is easier to talk to each other. We can share our feelings of traveling and football. If possible， I hope that he likes pets. Hope you can find me an ideal pen friend.Thank you.
Best regards，
Li Hua
點評：
本文屬于比較“平”的文章，即穩(wěn)中求勝。文章沒有華麗的詞語，但是使用了一些短語和結(jié)構(gòu)，能夠獲得老師的欣賞。首句是個原因狀語從句。文章也運用了定語從句來修飾boy，比較好。If possible這個省略句則表明作者對這類狀語從句的熟悉。
積累卡片
好詞：
1. candidate n.候選人
2.share with 與…分享
好句：In my opinion， the guy of my age will share almost the same experiences as me and it is easier to talk to each other.在我看來，像我這樣年齡的男生和我會有更多的共同語言。
好處：復雜句的組合很好。