SAT 寫作技巧的掌握對大家提高SAT 寫作成績有很大的幫助,但是真正掌握一項SAT寫作技巧并不是一件容易的事,下面就從一篇SAT寫作主體部分的過程來手把手教大家SAT寫作技巧,供大家參考,希望給大家?guī)韼椭徒梃b。
Assignment: Is it better to get all the information before taking action or is it better to take action first and then analyze the process of the whole action?
解惑:這是個選擇式的題目,問各位是先行動好,還是得到全部信息然后行動更好。
主體部分的SAT寫作過程如下,大家可以在這個過程當中學(xué)習(xí)到一些SAT寫作技巧:
這篇文章是選擇式的,所以的寫法是把例子拆成兩個部分,第一部分是否定的內(nèi)容,即倉促行動導(dǎo)致全盤皆輸;第二部分是全面準備后下決定然后成功的例子。
用一個最簡單的素材:
First, she started a restaurant, Helen’s Place. Though it was popular and did a steady business. Aunt Helen knew little about managing money, so her restaurant went out of business.
Then she tried to open a coffeehouse, but there were already many popular coffeehouses in her town, so her coffeehouse never managed to attract many customers.
Finally, using knowledge she had gained from earlier businesses, she started her own catering service. It has been a success for ten years now.
接下來結(jié)合這個素材進行一些SAT寫作技巧上的應(yīng)用,大家可以依據(jù)真實經(jīng)歷進行寫作,會更有真情實感。
第一步:不做計劃---失敗
阿姨為人打工多年,小有積蓄(save up for many years)---希望自己創(chuàng)業(yè)(start up her own business)---因為覺得自己廚藝不錯,沒有進行實地考察,就倉促決定選擇餐館, (without a moment’ hesitation,make a decision/action 點題)--- 但是后來發(fā)現(xiàn)餐館沒有什么客戶(fail to attract many customers)---原因是所處的地段是中學(xué)附近,競爭對手實力過分強大(fierce competition)---可以把對手細化成兩類加強真實感,一類是small profit, large sales revenue; 還有一類是good at creating romantic atmosphere, aimed at rich customers--- 之后阿姨不得不關(guān)門(close down營造失敗的細節(jié)).
第二部 過渡
阿姨的父親是個老企業(yè)家,他指出問題阿姨這次失敗的原因所在, 即要做計劃然后再行動---阿姨學(xué)習(xí)了經(jīng)驗---下定決心重新起航,并且會先做好全面準備工作再決定。
注:通常SAT寫作滿分作文都會出現(xiàn)一個“智者”指出主人公問題的所在而不是由主人公自己講出。
Despite great disappointment, my optimistic aunt soon recovered from this failure with her father’s encouragement (an experienced and successful entrepreneur in Suzhou), who pointed out her biggest problem after knowing the whole process. He told my aunt, ‘More haste, less speed. You had better make full preparation before each decision.’
Having gained experience from her failure, my aunt tried to restart her business three months later. But this time she gave priority to having a deeper understanding of the demands of the local market.
第三步 充分準備--決定進行catering service---成功 (這是關(guān)鍵段落,點題)
具體就是doing marketing research(這里需要考生去細化一些怎么做市場調(diào)研的細節(jié),對應(yīng)題目的get all the information)--- 然后data enabled my aunt to reach a final decision(對應(yīng)題目的take action)--- 決定進行catering service considering its large marketing potential----最后是成功(這里的細節(jié)大家可以自己去營造,比如年利潤the annual profit increased by 10%, with a market share of… in this field)
第四步 總結(jié)例子,重述觀點。
Had it not been for the full preparation before my aunt’s second try, she would not have regained her self confidence and established herself as one of the most successful entrepreneurs in Suzhou.
Therefore, from my personal experience, we can draw the conclusion that it is more effective to try after careful arrangements.
通過上面的幾個步驟,大家就可以寫出一篇不錯的SAT寫作范文來了。從上面的步驟中,大家可以學(xué)習(xí)到一些SAT寫作技巧。即使是手把手的教大家SAT寫作技巧,也是需要考生在寫的過程中才能完全學(xué)會的,所以備考SAT 寫作,一定喲啊多練習(xí)。
Assignment: Is it better to get all the information before taking action or is it better to take action first and then analyze the process of the whole action?
解惑:這是個選擇式的題目,問各位是先行動好,還是得到全部信息然后行動更好。
主體部分的SAT寫作過程如下,大家可以在這個過程當中學(xué)習(xí)到一些SAT寫作技巧:
這篇文章是選擇式的,所以的寫法是把例子拆成兩個部分,第一部分是否定的內(nèi)容,即倉促行動導(dǎo)致全盤皆輸;第二部分是全面準備后下決定然后成功的例子。
用一個最簡單的素材:
First, she started a restaurant, Helen’s Place. Though it was popular and did a steady business. Aunt Helen knew little about managing money, so her restaurant went out of business.
Then she tried to open a coffeehouse, but there were already many popular coffeehouses in her town, so her coffeehouse never managed to attract many customers.
Finally, using knowledge she had gained from earlier businesses, she started her own catering service. It has been a success for ten years now.
接下來結(jié)合這個素材進行一些SAT寫作技巧上的應(yīng)用,大家可以依據(jù)真實經(jīng)歷進行寫作,會更有真情實感。
第一步:不做計劃---失敗
阿姨為人打工多年,小有積蓄(save up for many years)---希望自己創(chuàng)業(yè)(start up her own business)---因為覺得自己廚藝不錯,沒有進行實地考察,就倉促決定選擇餐館, (without a moment’ hesitation,make a decision/action 點題)--- 但是后來發(fā)現(xiàn)餐館沒有什么客戶(fail to attract many customers)---原因是所處的地段是中學(xué)附近,競爭對手實力過分強大(fierce competition)---可以把對手細化成兩類加強真實感,一類是small profit, large sales revenue; 還有一類是good at creating romantic atmosphere, aimed at rich customers--- 之后阿姨不得不關(guān)門(close down營造失敗的細節(jié)).
第二部 過渡
阿姨的父親是個老企業(yè)家,他指出問題阿姨這次失敗的原因所在, 即要做計劃然后再行動---阿姨學(xué)習(xí)了經(jīng)驗---下定決心重新起航,并且會先做好全面準備工作再決定。
注:通常SAT寫作滿分作文都會出現(xiàn)一個“智者”指出主人公問題的所在而不是由主人公自己講出。
Despite great disappointment, my optimistic aunt soon recovered from this failure with her father’s encouragement (an experienced and successful entrepreneur in Suzhou), who pointed out her biggest problem after knowing the whole process. He told my aunt, ‘More haste, less speed. You had better make full preparation before each decision.’
Having gained experience from her failure, my aunt tried to restart her business three months later. But this time she gave priority to having a deeper understanding of the demands of the local market.
第三步 充分準備--決定進行catering service---成功 (這是關(guān)鍵段落,點題)
具體就是doing marketing research(這里需要考生去細化一些怎么做市場調(diào)研的細節(jié),對應(yīng)題目的get all the information)--- 然后data enabled my aunt to reach a final decision(對應(yīng)題目的take action)--- 決定進行catering service considering its large marketing potential----最后是成功(這里的細節(jié)大家可以自己去營造,比如年利潤the annual profit increased by 10%, with a market share of… in this field)
第四步 總結(jié)例子,重述觀點。
Had it not been for the full preparation before my aunt’s second try, she would not have regained her self confidence and established herself as one of the most successful entrepreneurs in Suzhou.
Therefore, from my personal experience, we can draw the conclusion that it is more effective to try after careful arrangements.
通過上面的幾個步驟,大家就可以寫出一篇不錯的SAT寫作范文來了。從上面的步驟中,大家可以學(xué)習(xí)到一些SAT寫作技巧。即使是手把手的教大家SAT寫作技巧,也是需要考生在寫的過程中才能完全學(xué)會的,所以備考SAT 寫作,一定喲啊多練習(xí)。

