作文在四六級考試中處于十分重要的地位,主要表現(xiàn)在以下幾個(gè)方面:
第一,在分值上,作文占了15分。
第二,四六級考試中,有一項(xiàng)規(guī)定是:凡是作文沒有及格的同學(xué),不論是其整個(gè)卷面的成績是否及格,都一律算作不及格,一般情況是按59分計(jì)總成績。
第三,作文是四六級試題中主觀題之一,在改卷中有很大的主動性。
因此寫好作文對我們來說具有十分重要的意義。那如何寫好作文呢?
我想主要應(yīng)注意以下幾個(gè)方面:
一、審題的重要性:來源:考試大的美女編輯們
四六級作文同考研的作文不同的是,考研的作文是給的英文提示,相對要求較高;而四六級作文一般是給的中文提示,但是在有些考題中的一部分是英文提示,這在無形中就增加了寫作的難度,可能給考生在中文和英文的轉(zhuǎn)換之間起了一些誤導(dǎo)作用。
作文的審題對我們來說具有一定方向性的作用。如果審題正確,那么就能讓自己有話可說,有東西可寫,而且能讓自己寫出一些有特色的東西來。
二、寫作中的段首句的重要性:
段首句就是全文的主題句,主題句對于一篇文章來說具有特殊的意義。因?yàn)槎问拙涫穷I(lǐng)銜全文的句子。它寫得好壞,直接影響到你下面的寫作,也影響到閱卷老師對你的第一印象。而且主題句設(shè)計(jì)的好壞,直接影響到你下面的文章的展開。
主題句在全文中具有指導(dǎo)作用,它的設(shè)計(jì)也是構(gòu)思全文的過程。
例如:Psychology plays an importantrole in our daily life. Some psychologist told me. All successall furniturecome from the healthy psychology one has.In our daily life not only thephysical problem we must facebut also the psychological problem. Our younghandsome boys may have many psychological problenms. Such as why I am slowerthan the others or how important the height of your body is etc. Especially onlove... Many students could easily fall in love with a pretty girl, but theymust ask themselves am I right﹖Can I fit or comfort her﹖…………
在這一段話中,"Psychology plays an important role in our daily life."在全文中就起了一個(gè)領(lǐng)銜全文的作用,在這句話的指導(dǎo)下,整篇文章就有了一個(gè)綱,然后通過這個(gè)綱進(jìn)一步展開。這樣,所有的人都會看到全文的主題句,一目了然。
三、寫作中小詞的重要性:
在寫作中,我們通常將一些連詞、副詞及一些介詞稱為小詞,這些小詞在全文中起到了連貫上下文的作用。在全文中如果沒有了這些詞或用錯(cuò)了這些詞就會使整個(gè)文章錯(cuò)誤不斷或讓人感覺全文斷斷續(xù)續(xù)。
例如:Many foreign tourists like China for many reasons. At first China isa country with a long history. The secondChina has many places to tour.Thethird eating culture of China is very developed. The most important reason isthat Chinese people are very friendly . because of these reasons the number oftourists to China is more and more.
在上面這篇文章中,主題句"Many foreign touristslike China for many reasons."寫得很好,然而在下面文章的展開中卻是很不好,首先是"At first"這一用法錯(cuò)誤,然后用"Atfirst The second The third ……"沒有讓全文充分展開。
因此在文章中我們應(yīng)注意:
第一:句子多樣化
句子多樣化涉及到句子結(jié)構(gòu)和句子類型兩個(gè)方面的問題。
英文句子的上下連貫,段落的過渡銜接,主要靠"結(jié)構(gòu)詞"來表示。
(1)如分段敘述某一個(gè)問題時(shí),可用First Second Third... 來表示銜接。
(2)舉例說明時(shí)可用forexample for instance to illustrate 來表示。
(3)進(jìn)一步闡述時(shí)可用furthermore inaddition similarly moreover來加以提示。
(4)強(qiáng)調(diào)某一點(diǎn)的重要性時(shí),可用surely trulyundoubtedly clearly indeed as a matter offact來加強(qiáng)句子的力度。
(5)作結(jié)論時(shí)可用therefore in summary consequently inconclusion in short來導(dǎo)出。
(6)分析因果時(shí)可用because due to so that as aresult來表現(xiàn)主從句之間的邏輯關(guān)系。
(7)轉(zhuǎn)換思路時(shí),可用but however neverthelessotherwise等以示轉(zhuǎn)折,而on the one hand on the other hand on one side of the coin onthe other side of the coin則可用來連接兩個(gè)相反的事實(shí)或觀點(diǎn)。
(8)It follows that... It canbe inferred that... It suggests that...則將讀者引入作者的邏輯推理思路。句子的類型
(1)除了比較熟悉的陳述句和疑問句外,還可用反問句來加強(qiáng)語氣;用感嘆句來表示譏諷;用類比來增加句子的份量。盡管句子多變,但必須遵循一個(gè)原則,即修辭服從文章觀點(diǎn)的表達(dá)。
(2)恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂锰摂M語氣、獨(dú)立主格和非謂語動詞。
第二:關(guān)于作文的復(fù)查問題
復(fù)查過程中盡量避免文章結(jié)構(gòu)上的大調(diào)整。復(fù)查的第一步主要集中在語法上。
(1)每個(gè)句子是否都有謂語動詞。
(2)謂語時(shí)態(tài)與語態(tài)的表現(xiàn)形式是否正確。
(3)謂語與主語之間是否協(xié)調(diào)一致。
(4)代詞與其指代的事物是否一致。
(5)標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號是否用錯(cuò)。
復(fù)查第二步應(yīng)集中在句子的表達(dá)上
(1)句子所表達(dá)的意思是否準(zhǔn)確。
(2)上下文之間的邏輯銜接是否正確,有無相互矛盾之處。
(3)所舉例子能否支持觀點(diǎn)。
第三:常用表達(dá)(慣用句型)
我們可以從下面的一些例句得到一些啟示。
1.堅(jiān)果是利弊兼有的食品。壞處是,它們所含的油脂對心臟不利;好處是,它們富含維生素E。Nuts are a good newsbad-news food. The bad news is that they’re full of oils that aren’t great forthe heart the good news is that they contain itamin E.
2.一般情況下,深綠色食品有益健康,無色青菜為中性,某些桔黃色和紅色蔬菜也是有益的。The general rule is that dark-greenvegetables are good for your heart pale vegetables are neural. Orange and redcan be good too in some cases.
3.大多數(shù)人吃蝦沒有問題,可是,鮭魚卻是市場上的非素食者可以享用的食品。
Shrimp is O.K for most people butsalmon is among the best non-vegetarian goods on the market.
4.一般來說,肉越瘦越好,而野味一般都很瘦。In general the leaner the meat the better - and wildgame tends to be the leanest.
5.過量飲酒仍然有害,可是,以一杯紅酒佐餐對非嗜酒者恐怕無害。
Alcohol in excess is still bad for you but aglass of wine with dinner is probably fine for nonalcoholics.
6.他展示了一種全新的思路:利用成年人的干細(xì)胞。
He has illuminated an entirely new avenue of thought- using stem cells derived from adults.
7. 未來我想象中是這樣的:你可以...
WhatI envision is that you could go to the doctor...
8.他上大學(xué)時(shí)的理想是當(dāng)一名體育教師,還希望好好訓(xùn)練,有一天能參加奧運(yùn)會。
He went to college to be a gym teacherwith hopes of also training for the Olympics.
9.科學(xué)家們今年的一些發(fā)現(xiàn)拓寬了我們的視野,比如...
Scientists expanded our minds this year withnews about possible lake districts on Mars ....
10.一些發(fā)明家已找到了解決實(shí)際應(yīng)用難題的巧妙方法:比如怎樣提高上網(wǎng)速度?
Some innovators have already come upwith ingenious answers to practical challenges How can Web searches be speededup﹖
11. 但是在嶄新的基因療法時(shí)代,這樣效率低下的方法將讓位于更合理、更加系統(tǒng)化的治療方法。However in the newera of genomic medicine this inefficient approach should give way to somethingmuch more rational and systematic.
12. 似乎沒有人懷疑這一天的到來。
Nobody seemsto doubt that it will eventually happen.
13. 和平和發(fā)展是時(shí)代發(fā)展的主題。
Peaceand development are themes of the times.
14. 毋庸諱言,亞洲的經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展存在一些突出的問題...
It is true that there exist in Asia’s economic development some problemsthat merit our attention.
15.更重要的是,亞洲各國人民有著強(qiáng)烈的自尊、自信、自立、自強(qiáng)精神。
More importantly the Asian people have astrong sense of self-esteem self-confidence self-reliance andself-improvement.
16. 換句話說, 他的影片放松而不拖沓,充滿感情而不多愁善感。尤其值得一提的是,他給演員們自由呼吸的空間。
Put that another way his work is relaxed without beingslack affectionate without going sentimental. Above all he leaves his actorsroom to breathe...來源:考試大
17. 要擁有好的記憶力,必須經(jīng)常鍛煉自己的大腦。
Having a good memory isoften just a matter of practicing memory wellness.
18. 同往常一樣,音樂永遠(yuǎn)是他生活的向?qū)Ш土α康脑慈?BR> As always music was his guide and inspiration.
19. 在他身邊,你會感到一種內(nèi)在的力量和智慧。
You get next to him and you feel anintrinsic strength and intelligence.
20. 事實(shí)勝于雄辯,公道自在人心。
Actionsspeak louder than words and the public champions justice.
21.我們必須認(rèn)清形勢,堅(jiān)定信心,扎實(shí)工作,為....
We must have a clear understanding of the currentsituation capitalize on the favorable conditions and work diligently and withfull confidence to ...
22. 積極開展農(nóng)村環(huán)境監(jiān)測和綜合治理,特別注意防治農(nóng)業(yè)化學(xué)污染。
Greatefforts will made to monitor the rural environment and improve it in acomprehensive way making a point of preventing and controlling agriculturalchemical pollution.
23. 根據(jù)這一要求,2001年國民經(jīng)濟(jì)和社會發(fā)展的主要預(yù)期目標(biāo)是:
Inaccordance with these requirements the major targets for national economic andsocial development in 2001 are as follows
24.他把學(xué)習(xí)方向轉(zhuǎn)到了另一個(gè)感興趣的領(lǐng)域:醫(yī)學(xué)。
He switched he studies to another field thatintrigued her medicine
第一,在分值上,作文占了15分。
第二,四六級考試中,有一項(xiàng)規(guī)定是:凡是作文沒有及格的同學(xué),不論是其整個(gè)卷面的成績是否及格,都一律算作不及格,一般情況是按59分計(jì)總成績。
第三,作文是四六級試題中主觀題之一,在改卷中有很大的主動性。
因此寫好作文對我們來說具有十分重要的意義。那如何寫好作文呢?
我想主要應(yīng)注意以下幾個(gè)方面:
一、審題的重要性:來源:考試大的美女編輯們
四六級作文同考研的作文不同的是,考研的作文是給的英文提示,相對要求較高;而四六級作文一般是給的中文提示,但是在有些考題中的一部分是英文提示,這在無形中就增加了寫作的難度,可能給考生在中文和英文的轉(zhuǎn)換之間起了一些誤導(dǎo)作用。
作文的審題對我們來說具有一定方向性的作用。如果審題正確,那么就能讓自己有話可說,有東西可寫,而且能讓自己寫出一些有特色的東西來。
二、寫作中的段首句的重要性:
段首句就是全文的主題句,主題句對于一篇文章來說具有特殊的意義。因?yàn)槎问拙涫穷I(lǐng)銜全文的句子。它寫得好壞,直接影響到你下面的寫作,也影響到閱卷老師對你的第一印象。而且主題句設(shè)計(jì)的好壞,直接影響到你下面的文章的展開。
主題句在全文中具有指導(dǎo)作用,它的設(shè)計(jì)也是構(gòu)思全文的過程。
例如:Psychology plays an importantrole in our daily life. Some psychologist told me. All successall furniturecome from the healthy psychology one has.In our daily life not only thephysical problem we must facebut also the psychological problem. Our younghandsome boys may have many psychological problenms. Such as why I am slowerthan the others or how important the height of your body is etc. Especially onlove... Many students could easily fall in love with a pretty girl, but theymust ask themselves am I right﹖Can I fit or comfort her﹖…………
在這一段話中,"Psychology plays an important role in our daily life."在全文中就起了一個(gè)領(lǐng)銜全文的作用,在這句話的指導(dǎo)下,整篇文章就有了一個(gè)綱,然后通過這個(gè)綱進(jìn)一步展開。這樣,所有的人都會看到全文的主題句,一目了然。
三、寫作中小詞的重要性:
在寫作中,我們通常將一些連詞、副詞及一些介詞稱為小詞,這些小詞在全文中起到了連貫上下文的作用。在全文中如果沒有了這些詞或用錯(cuò)了這些詞就會使整個(gè)文章錯(cuò)誤不斷或讓人感覺全文斷斷續(xù)續(xù)。
例如:Many foreign tourists like China for many reasons. At first China isa country with a long history. The secondChina has many places to tour.Thethird eating culture of China is very developed. The most important reason isthat Chinese people are very friendly . because of these reasons the number oftourists to China is more and more.
在上面這篇文章中,主題句"Many foreign touristslike China for many reasons."寫得很好,然而在下面文章的展開中卻是很不好,首先是"At first"這一用法錯(cuò)誤,然后用"Atfirst The second The third ……"沒有讓全文充分展開。
因此在文章中我們應(yīng)注意:
第一:句子多樣化
句子多樣化涉及到句子結(jié)構(gòu)和句子類型兩個(gè)方面的問題。
英文句子的上下連貫,段落的過渡銜接,主要靠"結(jié)構(gòu)詞"來表示。
(1)如分段敘述某一個(gè)問題時(shí),可用First Second Third... 來表示銜接。
(2)舉例說明時(shí)可用forexample for instance to illustrate 來表示。
(3)進(jìn)一步闡述時(shí)可用furthermore inaddition similarly moreover來加以提示。
(4)強(qiáng)調(diào)某一點(diǎn)的重要性時(shí),可用surely trulyundoubtedly clearly indeed as a matter offact來加強(qiáng)句子的力度。
(5)作結(jié)論時(shí)可用therefore in summary consequently inconclusion in short來導(dǎo)出。
(6)分析因果時(shí)可用because due to so that as aresult來表現(xiàn)主從句之間的邏輯關(guān)系。
(7)轉(zhuǎn)換思路時(shí),可用but however neverthelessotherwise等以示轉(zhuǎn)折,而on the one hand on the other hand on one side of the coin onthe other side of the coin則可用來連接兩個(gè)相反的事實(shí)或觀點(diǎn)。
(8)It follows that... It canbe inferred that... It suggests that...則將讀者引入作者的邏輯推理思路。句子的類型
(1)除了比較熟悉的陳述句和疑問句外,還可用反問句來加強(qiáng)語氣;用感嘆句來表示譏諷;用類比來增加句子的份量。盡管句子多變,但必須遵循一個(gè)原則,即修辭服從文章觀點(diǎn)的表達(dá)。
(2)恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂锰摂M語氣、獨(dú)立主格和非謂語動詞。
第二:關(guān)于作文的復(fù)查問題
復(fù)查過程中盡量避免文章結(jié)構(gòu)上的大調(diào)整。復(fù)查的第一步主要集中在語法上。
(1)每個(gè)句子是否都有謂語動詞。
(2)謂語時(shí)態(tài)與語態(tài)的表現(xiàn)形式是否正確。
(3)謂語與主語之間是否協(xié)調(diào)一致。
(4)代詞與其指代的事物是否一致。
(5)標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號是否用錯(cuò)。
復(fù)查第二步應(yīng)集中在句子的表達(dá)上
(1)句子所表達(dá)的意思是否準(zhǔn)確。
(2)上下文之間的邏輯銜接是否正確,有無相互矛盾之處。
(3)所舉例子能否支持觀點(diǎn)。
第三:常用表達(dá)(慣用句型)
我們可以從下面的一些例句得到一些啟示。
1.堅(jiān)果是利弊兼有的食品。壞處是,它們所含的油脂對心臟不利;好處是,它們富含維生素E。Nuts are a good newsbad-news food. The bad news is that they’re full of oils that aren’t great forthe heart the good news is that they contain itamin E.
2.一般情況下,深綠色食品有益健康,無色青菜為中性,某些桔黃色和紅色蔬菜也是有益的。The general rule is that dark-greenvegetables are good for your heart pale vegetables are neural. Orange and redcan be good too in some cases.
3.大多數(shù)人吃蝦沒有問題,可是,鮭魚卻是市場上的非素食者可以享用的食品。
Shrimp is O.K for most people butsalmon is among the best non-vegetarian goods on the market.
4.一般來說,肉越瘦越好,而野味一般都很瘦。In general the leaner the meat the better - and wildgame tends to be the leanest.
5.過量飲酒仍然有害,可是,以一杯紅酒佐餐對非嗜酒者恐怕無害。
Alcohol in excess is still bad for you but aglass of wine with dinner is probably fine for nonalcoholics.
6.他展示了一種全新的思路:利用成年人的干細(xì)胞。
He has illuminated an entirely new avenue of thought- using stem cells derived from adults.
7. 未來我想象中是這樣的:你可以...
WhatI envision is that you could go to the doctor...
8.他上大學(xué)時(shí)的理想是當(dāng)一名體育教師,還希望好好訓(xùn)練,有一天能參加奧運(yùn)會。
He went to college to be a gym teacherwith hopes of also training for the Olympics.
9.科學(xué)家們今年的一些發(fā)現(xiàn)拓寬了我們的視野,比如...
Scientists expanded our minds this year withnews about possible lake districts on Mars ....
10.一些發(fā)明家已找到了解決實(shí)際應(yīng)用難題的巧妙方法:比如怎樣提高上網(wǎng)速度?
Some innovators have already come upwith ingenious answers to practical challenges How can Web searches be speededup﹖
11. 但是在嶄新的基因療法時(shí)代,這樣效率低下的方法將讓位于更合理、更加系統(tǒng)化的治療方法。However in the newera of genomic medicine this inefficient approach should give way to somethingmuch more rational and systematic.
12. 似乎沒有人懷疑這一天的到來。
Nobody seemsto doubt that it will eventually happen.
13. 和平和發(fā)展是時(shí)代發(fā)展的主題。
Peaceand development are themes of the times.
14. 毋庸諱言,亞洲的經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展存在一些突出的問題...
It is true that there exist in Asia’s economic development some problemsthat merit our attention.
15.更重要的是,亞洲各國人民有著強(qiáng)烈的自尊、自信、自立、自強(qiáng)精神。
More importantly the Asian people have astrong sense of self-esteem self-confidence self-reliance andself-improvement.
16. 換句話說, 他的影片放松而不拖沓,充滿感情而不多愁善感。尤其值得一提的是,他給演員們自由呼吸的空間。
Put that another way his work is relaxed without beingslack affectionate without going sentimental. Above all he leaves his actorsroom to breathe...來源:考試大
17. 要擁有好的記憶力,必須經(jīng)常鍛煉自己的大腦。
Having a good memory isoften just a matter of practicing memory wellness.
18. 同往常一樣,音樂永遠(yuǎn)是他生活的向?qū)Ш土α康脑慈?BR> As always music was his guide and inspiration.
19. 在他身邊,你會感到一種內(nèi)在的力量和智慧。
You get next to him and you feel anintrinsic strength and intelligence.
20. 事實(shí)勝于雄辯,公道自在人心。
Actionsspeak louder than words and the public champions justice.
21.我們必須認(rèn)清形勢,堅(jiān)定信心,扎實(shí)工作,為....
We must have a clear understanding of the currentsituation capitalize on the favorable conditions and work diligently and withfull confidence to ...
22. 積極開展農(nóng)村環(huán)境監(jiān)測和綜合治理,特別注意防治農(nóng)業(yè)化學(xué)污染。
Greatefforts will made to monitor the rural environment and improve it in acomprehensive way making a point of preventing and controlling agriculturalchemical pollution.
23. 根據(jù)這一要求,2001年國民經(jīng)濟(jì)和社會發(fā)展的主要預(yù)期目標(biāo)是:
Inaccordance with these requirements the major targets for national economic andsocial development in 2001 are as follows
24.他把學(xué)習(xí)方向轉(zhuǎn)到了另一個(gè)感興趣的領(lǐng)域:醫(yī)學(xué)。
He switched he studies to another field thatintrigued her medicine