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第一段開(kāi)頭句：There are four people in my family.
第二段開(kāi)頭句：In my family I love my puppy best.
第三段開(kāi)頭句：I love my family very much.
Peter 的文章：
Including me,there are four people in my family:my dad, mom,and my older sister .My family is a small family,and we also have a puppy.It's name is baby.
In my family, I love my puppy best. because daddy and mom do not have time to play with me ,and my older sister has to go to school,so I always talk to baby while they are out.
I love my family very much,so I hope daddy and mom will not be so busy and they will have more time to stay at home.I think baby also wants them to stay at home longer.
第一段開(kāi)頭句：There are four people in my family.
第二段開(kāi)頭句：In my family I love my puppy best.
第三段開(kāi)頭句：I love my family very much.
Peter 的文章：
Including me,there are four people in my family:my dad, mom,and my older sister .My family is a small family,and we also have a puppy.It's name is baby.
In my family, I love my puppy best. because daddy and mom do not have time to play with me ,and my older sister has to go to school,so I always talk to baby while they are out.
I love my family very much,so I hope daddy and mom will not be so busy and they will have more time to stay at home.I think baby also wants them to stay at home longer.