2010.9.1——9.13 GMAT作文機(jī)經(jīng) AA篇
AA1
V1公司說(shuō)即使生產(chǎn)跟不上也能增加demand,使其變popular，等到生產(chǎn)跟上了就能成為leader.
V2說(shuō)什么Fishborn brewery的，什么要大力發(fā)展它的national market盡管產(chǎn)量更不上什么的~說(shuō)產(chǎn)量跟不上會(huì)造成供應(yīng)不足，反而會(huì)使產(chǎn)品需求增大什么
考古：Fishbone Brewery is a regional small-scaled Brewery that produces a rare and exotic beer. They have hired a consultant who recommended Fishbone to start a national campaign immediately which will lead to high demand for Fishbone beer. Since Fishbone has not yet have the ability to meet excessive demand, those delays in excessive demand will increase the reputation of Fishbone, and thus, pump up the sales. The consultant predicts that within 3 years, Fishbone will become a national leader in beer industry (感謝likebeing 提供)
提綱：
1.對(duì)事故的反映時(shí)間誠(chéng)然是評(píng)價(jià)服務(wù)質(zhì)量的一個(gè)因素但并不是的因素.所以僅僅因?yàn)闁|區(qū)的商業(yè)救護(hù)班的反映時(shí)間短就認(rèn)定商業(yè)救護(hù)辦的服務(wù)更好是gratuitous的.
2.就算東區(qū)的商業(yè)班的服務(wù)質(zhì)量更好也并不意味著,西區(qū)用商業(yè)班就會(huì)有一樣的成效.因?yàn)闁|西區(qū)的情況是不同的.很可能西區(qū)的志愿者更有服務(wù),獻(xiàn)身意識(shí).
3.此外除非商業(yè)班收十分昂貴的服務(wù)費(fèi)用或者有十分多的事故事實(shí)這些都是不可能的, 改成商業(yè)是不見(jiàn)得就可以給該鎮(zhèn)增加很多稅收的.所以把這一點(diǎn)作為理由是不正確的.
1.錯(cuò)誤類(lèi)比 兩個(gè)城市不一樣，很可能因?yàn)槲骱蜄|的不一樣，比如，路的情況traffic condition?？赡軚|的車(chē)輛更好。服務(wù)的態(tài)度更好。而且沒(méi)有說(shuō)東的志愿情況如何，很可能東的志愿比商業(yè)的快。
2.草率的判斷：就算是商業(yè)的更快，也不一定更好。反映時(shí)間不是的因素，有其他——比如服務(wù)的質(zhì)量，態(tài)度，器材等等。
另外，除非商業(yè)可以charge considerable fees 或者 accident rate非常高，否則未必帶來(lái)可觀的revenue。
A. In the first place, the arguer ignores other factors that might account for the longer average response time as revealed bu the recent review.
B. In the second place, the arguer infairly reduces better patient care to shorter response time to accidents.
C. Finally, the arguer fails to support the claim that hiring a commercial ambulance service would automatically raise revenue for West Cambria.
AA1
V1公司說(shuō)即使生產(chǎn)跟不上也能增加demand,使其變popular，等到生產(chǎn)跟上了就能成為leader.
V2說(shuō)什么Fishborn brewery的，什么要大力發(fā)展它的national market盡管產(chǎn)量更不上什么的~說(shuō)產(chǎn)量跟不上會(huì)造成供應(yīng)不足，反而會(huì)使產(chǎn)品需求增大什么
考古：Fishbone Brewery is a regional small-scaled Brewery that produces a rare and exotic beer. They have hired a consultant who recommended Fishbone to start a national campaign immediately which will lead to high demand for Fishbone beer. Since Fishbone has not yet have the ability to meet excessive demand, those delays in excessive demand will increase the reputation of Fishbone, and thus, pump up the sales. The consultant predicts that within 3 years, Fishbone will become a national leader in beer industry (感謝likebeing 提供)
提綱：
1.對(duì)事故的反映時(shí)間誠(chéng)然是評(píng)價(jià)服務(wù)質(zhì)量的一個(gè)因素但并不是的因素.所以僅僅因?yàn)闁|區(qū)的商業(yè)救護(hù)班的反映時(shí)間短就認(rèn)定商業(yè)救護(hù)辦的服務(wù)更好是gratuitous的.
2.就算東區(qū)的商業(yè)班的服務(wù)質(zhì)量更好也并不意味著,西區(qū)用商業(yè)班就會(huì)有一樣的成效.因?yàn)闁|西區(qū)的情況是不同的.很可能西區(qū)的志愿者更有服務(wù),獻(xiàn)身意識(shí).
3.此外除非商業(yè)班收十分昂貴的服務(wù)費(fèi)用或者有十分多的事故事實(shí)這些都是不可能的, 改成商業(yè)是不見(jiàn)得就可以給該鎮(zhèn)增加很多稅收的.所以把這一點(diǎn)作為理由是不正確的.
1.錯(cuò)誤類(lèi)比 兩個(gè)城市不一樣，很可能因?yàn)槲骱蜄|的不一樣，比如，路的情況traffic condition?？赡軚|的車(chē)輛更好。服務(wù)的態(tài)度更好。而且沒(méi)有說(shuō)東的志愿情況如何，很可能東的志愿比商業(yè)的快。
2.草率的判斷：就算是商業(yè)的更快，也不一定更好。反映時(shí)間不是的因素，有其他——比如服務(wù)的質(zhì)量，態(tài)度，器材等等。
另外，除非商業(yè)可以charge considerable fees 或者 accident rate非常高，否則未必帶來(lái)可觀的revenue。
A. In the first place, the arguer ignores other factors that might account for the longer average response time as revealed bu the recent review.
B. In the second place, the arguer infairly reduces better patient care to shorter response time to accidents.
C. Finally, the arguer fails to support the claim that hiring a commercial ambulance service would automatically raise revenue for West Cambria.