2010.8.21——8.31 GMAT作文機(jī)經(jīng) AA篇
AA20 6月商店擺奢侈品 拿奢侈品做廣告 結(jié)果整個(gè)店里不管是奢侈品還是正常產(chǎn)品 賣(mài)得都好 但是當(dāng)擺普通商品的時(shí)候 生意就不太好 經(jīng)理就建議 一年到頭擺奢侈品。
考古
V1: AUTOMOBILE——6月的銷(xiāo)售策略是陳列LUXURY MODEL,打LUXURY MODEL的廣告，然后COMBINED SALES劇烈上漲。2月陳列MORE INEXPENSIVE MODEL，打INEXPENSIVE MODEL的廣告，OVERALL SALES下降。
經(jīng)歷的結(jié)論：應(yīng)該繼續(xù)6月的策略，因?yàn)橹灰櫩吞と階UTO LOT然后看到L MODEL就會(huì)被吸引然后購(gòu)買(mǎi)。
V2 :6月份的時(shí)候公司進(jìn)行了advertising on parking lots and show room of luxury automotibles. And the sales increased significantly for both luxury and inexpensive models. 這證明這種投放廣告的方式是有效的, 可以同時(shí)帶來(lái)高級(jí)汽車(chē)(luxury)和普通汽車(chē)(inexpensive) 的銷(xiāo)售增加. However, in Feburary, 同樣針對(duì)inexpensive models的廣告活動(dòng),沒(méi)有帶來(lái)sales的增長(zhǎng). 因此,公司應(yīng)該在以后的廣告活動(dòng)中put the luxury models in front并center at luxury modles. 這樣,現(xiàn)行可以maximize profits.
V3：一個(gè)汽車(chē)公司在JULY 與FEB 兩個(gè)月做廣告賣(mài)汽車(chē)一個(gè)是有關(guān)豪華汽車(chē)的一個(gè)月是不貴的汽車(chē)的然后得出結(jié)論后面邏輯錯(cuò)誤百出很好寫(xiě)。
AA21 The following appeared in a memorandum from the Director of Human Resources to the executive officers of Company X.
“Last year, we surveyed our employees on improvements needed at Company X by having them rank, in order of importance, the issues presented in a list of possible improvements. Improved communications between employees and management was consistently ranked as the issue of highest importance by the employees who responded to the survey. As you know, we have since instituted regular communications sessions conducted by high-level management, which the employees can attend on a voluntary basis. Therefore, it is likely that most employees at Company X now feel that the improvement most needed at the company has been made.”
提綱：
(下文思路單一，兩段都是談?wù){(diào)查方法的問(wèn)題，還可以談后半部分，“采取了措施就一定能達(dá)到目的嗎?”)
1. The result of a last year's survey does not necessarily represent the improvement most needed of this year.
2. How was the survey held has not been illustrated by the author, thus making the conclusion groundless.
3. Whether the implement of the mentioned resolution is right or wrong is still unkonwn, it is still too early to say the improvement has been made.
1， 調(diào)查的可信性：是否anonymous，如果要named，很可能并不是他們最想要的改進(jìn)。
2， 改進(jìn)方法是否充分?是否交流會(huì)有很好交流，并且采納accept意見(jiàn)
AA20 6月商店擺奢侈品 拿奢侈品做廣告 結(jié)果整個(gè)店里不管是奢侈品還是正常產(chǎn)品 賣(mài)得都好 但是當(dāng)擺普通商品的時(shí)候 生意就不太好 經(jīng)理就建議 一年到頭擺奢侈品。
考古
V1: AUTOMOBILE——6月的銷(xiāo)售策略是陳列LUXURY MODEL,打LUXURY MODEL的廣告，然后COMBINED SALES劇烈上漲。2月陳列MORE INEXPENSIVE MODEL，打INEXPENSIVE MODEL的廣告，OVERALL SALES下降。
經(jīng)歷的結(jié)論：應(yīng)該繼續(xù)6月的策略，因?yàn)橹灰櫩吞と階UTO LOT然后看到L MODEL就會(huì)被吸引然后購(gòu)買(mǎi)。
V2 :6月份的時(shí)候公司進(jìn)行了advertising on parking lots and show room of luxury automotibles. And the sales increased significantly for both luxury and inexpensive models. 這證明這種投放廣告的方式是有效的, 可以同時(shí)帶來(lái)高級(jí)汽車(chē)(luxury)和普通汽車(chē)(inexpensive) 的銷(xiāo)售增加. However, in Feburary, 同樣針對(duì)inexpensive models的廣告活動(dòng),沒(méi)有帶來(lái)sales的增長(zhǎng). 因此,公司應(yīng)該在以后的廣告活動(dòng)中put the luxury models in front并center at luxury modles. 這樣,現(xiàn)行可以maximize profits.
V3：一個(gè)汽車(chē)公司在JULY 與FEB 兩個(gè)月做廣告賣(mài)汽車(chē)一個(gè)是有關(guān)豪華汽車(chē)的一個(gè)月是不貴的汽車(chē)的然后得出結(jié)論后面邏輯錯(cuò)誤百出很好寫(xiě)。
AA21 The following appeared in a memorandum from the Director of Human Resources to the executive officers of Company X.
“Last year, we surveyed our employees on improvements needed at Company X by having them rank, in order of importance, the issues presented in a list of possible improvements. Improved communications between employees and management was consistently ranked as the issue of highest importance by the employees who responded to the survey. As you know, we have since instituted regular communications sessions conducted by high-level management, which the employees can attend on a voluntary basis. Therefore, it is likely that most employees at Company X now feel that the improvement most needed at the company has been made.”
提綱：
(下文思路單一，兩段都是談?wù){(diào)查方法的問(wèn)題，還可以談后半部分，“采取了措施就一定能達(dá)到目的嗎?”)
1. The result of a last year's survey does not necessarily represent the improvement most needed of this year.
2. How was the survey held has not been illustrated by the author, thus making the conclusion groundless.
3. Whether the implement of the mentioned resolution is right or wrong is still unkonwn, it is still too early to say the improvement has been made.
1， 調(diào)查的可信性：是否anonymous，如果要named，很可能并不是他們最想要的改進(jìn)。
2， 改進(jìn)方法是否充分?是否交流會(huì)有很好交流，并且采納accept意見(jiàn)