2010.8.21——8.31 GMAT作文機(jī)經(jīng) AA篇
AA15 The following appeared as part of a business plan by the Capital Idea Investment firm.
“Currently more and more books are becoming available in electronic form — either free of charge on the Internet or for a very low price per book on CD-ROM.* People who would not pay bookstore prices will now have access to whatever book they want from their home or work computers. Consequently, literary classics are likely to be read more widely than ever before: 72 percent of those responding to a recent online survey said they would read books in electronic form, and 81 percent said they believed that reading classic works was important. Given this newly developing market, we should invest in E-Classics, a new company that sells electronic versions of literary classics.”
提綱：
1. More accesses to cheaper books do not necessarily guarantee the desire to read classics.
2. the survey is doubtful
3. It is hard to make profit when there are so many E-books available on the net.
AA16 The following appeared as part of an article in a weekly newsmagazine.
“The country of Sacchar can best solve its current trade deficit problem by lowering the price of sugar, its primary export. Such an action would make Sacchar better able to compete for markets with other sugar-exporting countries. The sale of Sacchar’s sugar abroad would increase, and this increase would substantially reduce Sacchar’s trade deficit.”
AA17上月的作文狗，cereal的那個(gè)，75%的人覺(jué)得味道比較好，還有包含Vitamin K，這個(gè)特點(diǎn)應(yīng)該表現(xiàn)在新的包裝上~
考古
V1 the Cunch(貌似) Breakfast cereal contain 20% more nutrients than any other cereal in the city XXX. Moreover, in the survey conducted by us, 75% consumers prefer to the taste of Cunch Breakfast cereal than other cereal products. However, 消費(fèi)者似乎并沒(méi)有顯著的青睞這個(gè)cereal。Therefore, in order to increase the sales, we should redesign the front of the Cunch Breakfast box with detailed information about the two features mentioned above(即多20%的營(yíng)養(yǎng)，75%認(rèn)為口味出眾) (題庫(kù)里沒(méi)找到) 3次
V2說(shuō)一個(gè)cereal的廠家的備忘錄：認(rèn)為該廠出產(chǎn)的cereal的一大優(yōu)勢(shì)是包含vitamin K。另外在一項(xiàng)調(diào)查中，有75%的人表示喜歡cereal口味。但是現(xiàn)在銷(xiāo)售量降低。建議在做廣告中更換包裝盒，并注明該cereal的兩大優(yōu)勢(shì)(就是包 含vitamin k和口味好)。
V3 一下來(lái)自公司營(yíng)銷(xiāo)總監(jiān)的備忘錄：一家生產(chǎn)cereal 公司生產(chǎn)的cereal含有的維生素k的數(shù)量比競(jìng)爭(zhēng)對(duì)手都要多20%，而且一項(xiàng)調(diào)查顯示75%的顧客認(rèn)為該公司生產(chǎn)的cereal比競(jìng)爭(zhēng)對(duì)手都要好，但是 該公司的銷(xiāo)售量并不高。因此營(yíng)銷(xiāo)總監(jiān)建議公司重新對(duì)包裝盒進(jìn)行設(shè)計(jì)，把該產(chǎn)品含有比競(jìng)爭(zhēng)對(duì)手20%的vitamin K 和上述的那個(gè)調(diào)查貼在包裝盒上。
V4關(guān)于cereals 的， 第一句說(shuō)our cereals contains more vitamin k preserving …第二個(gè)就用survey 75%consumers favor its tastes 。。后面就說(shuō)為了增加sales 吸引更多的顧客 應(yīng)該redesign the front of the ..box.
AA15 The following appeared as part of a business plan by the Capital Idea Investment firm.
“Currently more and more books are becoming available in electronic form — either free of charge on the Internet or for a very low price per book on CD-ROM.* People who would not pay bookstore prices will now have access to whatever book they want from their home or work computers. Consequently, literary classics are likely to be read more widely than ever before: 72 percent of those responding to a recent online survey said they would read books in electronic form, and 81 percent said they believed that reading classic works was important. Given this newly developing market, we should invest in E-Classics, a new company that sells electronic versions of literary classics.”
提綱：
1. More accesses to cheaper books do not necessarily guarantee the desire to read classics.
2. the survey is doubtful
3. It is hard to make profit when there are so many E-books available on the net.
AA16 The following appeared as part of an article in a weekly newsmagazine.
“The country of Sacchar can best solve its current trade deficit problem by lowering the price of sugar, its primary export. Such an action would make Sacchar better able to compete for markets with other sugar-exporting countries. The sale of Sacchar’s sugar abroad would increase, and this increase would substantially reduce Sacchar’s trade deficit.”
AA17上月的作文狗，cereal的那個(gè)，75%的人覺(jué)得味道比較好，還有包含Vitamin K，這個(gè)特點(diǎn)應(yīng)該表現(xiàn)在新的包裝上~
考古
V1 the Cunch(貌似) Breakfast cereal contain 20% more nutrients than any other cereal in the city XXX. Moreover, in the survey conducted by us, 75% consumers prefer to the taste of Cunch Breakfast cereal than other cereal products. However, 消費(fèi)者似乎并沒(méi)有顯著的青睞這個(gè)cereal。Therefore, in order to increase the sales, we should redesign the front of the Cunch Breakfast box with detailed information about the two features mentioned above(即多20%的營(yíng)養(yǎng)，75%認(rèn)為口味出眾) (題庫(kù)里沒(méi)找到) 3次
V2說(shuō)一個(gè)cereal的廠家的備忘錄：認(rèn)為該廠出產(chǎn)的cereal的一大優(yōu)勢(shì)是包含vitamin K。另外在一項(xiàng)調(diào)查中，有75%的人表示喜歡cereal口味。但是現(xiàn)在銷(xiāo)售量降低。建議在做廣告中更換包裝盒，并注明該cereal的兩大優(yōu)勢(shì)(就是包 含vitamin k和口味好)。
V3 一下來(lái)自公司營(yíng)銷(xiāo)總監(jiān)的備忘錄：一家生產(chǎn)cereal 公司生產(chǎn)的cereal含有的維生素k的數(shù)量比競(jìng)爭(zhēng)對(duì)手都要多20%，而且一項(xiàng)調(diào)查顯示75%的顧客認(rèn)為該公司生產(chǎn)的cereal比競(jìng)爭(zhēng)對(duì)手都要好，但是 該公司的銷(xiāo)售量并不高。因此營(yíng)銷(xiāo)總監(jiān)建議公司重新對(duì)包裝盒進(jìn)行設(shè)計(jì)，把該產(chǎn)品含有比競(jìng)爭(zhēng)對(duì)手20%的vitamin K 和上述的那個(gè)調(diào)查貼在包裝盒上。
V4關(guān)于cereals 的， 第一句說(shuō)our cereals contains more vitamin k preserving …第二個(gè)就用survey 75%consumers favor its tastes 。。后面就說(shuō)為了增加sales 吸引更多的顧客 應(yīng)該redesign the front of the ..box.