沖刺點撥:決勝關鍵在于創(chuàng)造閃光點2

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no garden has no weeds替換every coin has two sides
    computers do play,do強調
    positive替換important / good等
    a slice of替換a part of
    unfavorable替換bad
    impacts替換effects / influences
    we should, therefore, take advantage of…使用插入語
    fruits (而且fruits用的非常形象,merits/ virtues)替換advantage ( defects替換disadvantage )
    facet替換aspect  
    由此可見,上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點,作文怎么會不得高分呢!
    以下是30個最經典的替換詞供參考。  
    1: individuals,characters, folks代替(people ,persons)
    2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的),promising
    (有希望的),perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding代替good
    3: dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的)代替bad
    如果bad做表語,可以有be less impressive代替