[范文]
changes in people‘s diet
as can be seen in the table， there have been great changes in people‘s diet in the past five years. grain used to be the chinese main food， but now it is playing a less important role in peoples diet， while the consumption of some highenergy foods， such as milk and meat， has increased steadily.
what caused these changes? i think the reasons are as follows: first,the open policy brings the people opportunities to earn a lot of money.second,people nowadays pay more attention to the structure of their diet.they are seeking the most reasonable diet structure, which will do good to their health.
from the above， we can see that，with the development of the country，the level of the chinese people‘s life has changed in the past five years.i’m sure there will be greater changes in the future.
文中第一句話就明確告訴讀者這篇作文是一篇圖表作文。接下來根據(jù)圖表分析了在過去的五年中人們的飲食結(jié)構(gòu)都發(fā)生了哪些變化，最后預(yù)測將來人們的生活水平還會發(fā)生更大的變化。盡管在這張圖表中有很多數(shù)據(jù)，但作者并沒有過多地引用這些數(shù)據(jù)，而是通過數(shù)據(jù)把要說明的問題點(diǎn)了出來。
[例2]directions： for this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than 100 words on income sources between chinese and american students.study the following table carefully and your composition must be based on the in formation given in the table. write three paragraphs to：
1. describe the differences of the income sources between chinese and american students.
2. analyze possible reasons for these differences.
3. predicate future tendency.
[范文]
income sources between chinese students and american students
income sources of chinese students are quite different from those of american students. in china, students get 90% of their money from their parents while in america, only 50% of students` money is provided by parents. in addition, chinese students earn only 5% of their money from part time jobs and 5% from fellowship or scholarship while income from these two resources for american students takes up 35% and 15% respectively of their total income.
i think there are probably three reasons for their differences. first， because of the influence of different social and family values，chinese students have formed the habit of asking for money from their parents while american students have developed more sense of being financially independent. second， most chinese parents devote too much care to their children and they would rather save up to afford their childrens education rather than encourage them to take parttime jobs.but in america， many parents pay more attention to developing the students ability of selfreliance，so they encourage their children to find parttime job to earn some money by themselves. third， since america is more developed than china，it is relatively easy for students to find parttime jobs.in china，such opportunities are rather rare.
i believe with the development of china， more and more chinese students will realize and pay more attention to the necessity of selfdependence. in addition， more and more opportunities will be provided for them to take parttime jobs. so more students will go out of the ivory tower to broaden their knowledge and to become the master of their own lives.
作者在這篇圖表作文中很好地利用了圖表以及題目中所給的提示，文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，意思表達(dá)清楚，較好地完成了一篇圖表作文所應(yīng)該表達(dá)的內(nèi)容。
第五節(jié)命題作文
命題作文要求就所給的作文題目進(jìn)行寫作。與其他作文相比，命題作文具有較大的自主性。因?yàn)橥瑯拥囊粋€(gè)題目可以從不同的角度、用不同的文體來進(jìn)行寫作。例如“my teacher”這個(gè)題目可以寫成一篇記敘文，也可以寫成一篇描寫文。不管用什么文體，也不管從哪個(gè)方面來寫，只要寫出的文章切題、流暢、條理清楚、語言正確就是一篇好文章。然而，這種較大的自主性也會使考生感到困難。因?yàn)樵谟邢薜?0分鐘之內(nèi)，要形成提綱，并寫成短文并不是件易事。這就要求考生在寫命題作文時(shí)首先一定要審好題，要仔細(xì)分析題意，搞清楚題目所涉及的范圍，確定文章的中心思想，切忌跑題。再者，要選擇正確的文體。最后，要圍繞文章的中心思想，將寫作素材進(jìn)行分析、歸類并寫好寫作提綱，包括：引言句、主題句和結(jié)尾句
changes in people‘s diet
as can be seen in the table， there have been great changes in people‘s diet in the past five years. grain used to be the chinese main food， but now it is playing a less important role in peoples diet， while the consumption of some highenergy foods， such as milk and meat， has increased steadily.
what caused these changes? i think the reasons are as follows: first,the open policy brings the people opportunities to earn a lot of money.second,people nowadays pay more attention to the structure of their diet.they are seeking the most reasonable diet structure, which will do good to their health.
from the above， we can see that，with the development of the country，the level of the chinese people‘s life has changed in the past five years.i’m sure there will be greater changes in the future.
文中第一句話就明確告訴讀者這篇作文是一篇圖表作文。接下來根據(jù)圖表分析了在過去的五年中人們的飲食結(jié)構(gòu)都發(fā)生了哪些變化，最后預(yù)測將來人們的生活水平還會發(fā)生更大的變化。盡管在這張圖表中有很多數(shù)據(jù)，但作者并沒有過多地引用這些數(shù)據(jù)，而是通過數(shù)據(jù)把要說明的問題點(diǎn)了出來。
[例2]directions： for this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than 100 words on income sources between chinese and american students.study the following table carefully and your composition must be based on the in formation given in the table. write three paragraphs to：
1. describe the differences of the income sources between chinese and american students.
2. analyze possible reasons for these differences.
3. predicate future tendency.
[范文]
income sources between chinese students and american students
income sources of chinese students are quite different from those of american students. in china, students get 90% of their money from their parents while in america, only 50% of students` money is provided by parents. in addition, chinese students earn only 5% of their money from part time jobs and 5% from fellowship or scholarship while income from these two resources for american students takes up 35% and 15% respectively of their total income.
i think there are probably three reasons for their differences. first， because of the influence of different social and family values，chinese students have formed the habit of asking for money from their parents while american students have developed more sense of being financially independent. second， most chinese parents devote too much care to their children and they would rather save up to afford their childrens education rather than encourage them to take parttime jobs.but in america， many parents pay more attention to developing the students ability of selfreliance，so they encourage their children to find parttime job to earn some money by themselves. third， since america is more developed than china，it is relatively easy for students to find parttime jobs.in china，such opportunities are rather rare.
i believe with the development of china， more and more chinese students will realize and pay more attention to the necessity of selfdependence. in addition， more and more opportunities will be provided for them to take parttime jobs. so more students will go out of the ivory tower to broaden their knowledge and to become the master of their own lives.
作者在這篇圖表作文中很好地利用了圖表以及題目中所給的提示，文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，意思表達(dá)清楚，較好地完成了一篇圖表作文所應(yīng)該表達(dá)的內(nèi)容。
第五節(jié)命題作文
命題作文要求就所給的作文題目進(jìn)行寫作。與其他作文相比，命題作文具有較大的自主性。因?yàn)橥瑯拥囊粋€(gè)題目可以從不同的角度、用不同的文體來進(jìn)行寫作。例如“my teacher”這個(gè)題目可以寫成一篇記敘文，也可以寫成一篇描寫文。不管用什么文體，也不管從哪個(gè)方面來寫，只要寫出的文章切題、流暢、條理清楚、語言正確就是一篇好文章。然而，這種較大的自主性也會使考生感到困難。因?yàn)樵谟邢薜?0分鐘之內(nèi)，要形成提綱，并寫成短文并不是件易事。這就要求考生在寫命題作文時(shí)首先一定要審好題，要仔細(xì)分析題意，搞清楚題目所涉及的范圍，確定文章的中心思想，切忌跑題。再者，要選擇正確的文體。最后，要圍繞文章的中心思想，將寫作素材進(jìn)行分析、歸類并寫好寫作提綱，包括：引言句、主題句和結(jié)尾句