四六級(jí)考試寫作題型分析及范文(1)2

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第二節(jié)提綱作文
     提綱作文是要求考生根據(jù)所給出的作文題目和提綱(一般為中文提綱)進(jìn)行寫作。中文提綱大多是以三個(gè)單句的形式出現(xiàn)的。寫提綱作文,首先要做的就是審題,并要仔細(xì)分析題目中所列舉的提綱。審?fù)觐}后應(yīng)該根據(jù)提綱擬出三個(gè)英文的主題句,再在這些主題句的基礎(chǔ)上擴(kuò)展成文。在擴(kuò)展的過(guò)程中一定要做到條理清楚,開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山。
     [例1]directions: for this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic good health according the following outline. your composition is less than 120 words.remember that the contents of the outline should all be included in your composition.
    outline:
     1健康的重要性
     2保持健康的方法
     3我的做法
     [范文]
    good health
     good health is very important to everyone. with it, we can study hard, we can serve our country, we can do everything as we like. without good health, everybody knows that we will fail to do things. we can‘t work efficiently, we may stay in hospital, well become a burden of our family.
    in my opinion, there are two ways for us to keep fit. first, we must eat a balanced diet. that is to say, we must eat not only eggs, fish and meat, but also some vegetables and fruit everyday. besides eating properly, drinking clean water is also important. never get addicted to drinking the soft drink.second, exercising is a vital part of our daily life. we can do some running in the morning and play football in the afternoon.
    as a university student, i pay much attention to physical exercises. i do some swimming in summer and some skating in winter. i often play badminton and tennis. i am also careful with my diet. in a way, keeping healthy is not very hard if you just take it seriously.
     文章開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山就點(diǎn)出了主題:good health is very important to everyone.然后作者很巧妙地用了with 和without這兩個(gè)介詞從正反兩個(gè)方面舉出了具體的事例來(lái)支持自己的觀點(diǎn)。另外,with和without這兩個(gè)詞常用于議論文中,用“正證法”和“反證法”來(lái)對(duì)各論點(diǎn)或觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行論述。第二段的開(kāi)頭句緊扣提綱,概括地提出保持健康有兩種方法,并且通過(guò)first, second這樣的指示詞,使所列舉的事實(shí)條理化。最后一段告訴讀者自己的做法,也緊扣了提綱。
     [例2]directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic competition. your composition should be less than 120 words. remember that the contents of the outline should all be included in your composition.
    outline:
     1the importance of competition
     2the function of competition
     3my own practices
     [范文]
    competition
     competition makes people active and creative. it is very necessary to compete if human society wants to advance. without it, we would become lazy and nobody would take any responsibility.“three monks,there will be no drinking water.”this chinese proverb vividly describes why chinas productivity was so low before mr. deng came into power. at that time, we had the socalled planned economy. there was no competition at all. so farmers didnt work hard. workers didnt work hard. china was on the edge of collapse.
     competition can stimulate people to try their best to do things. for example, in 100meter race, each sportsman runs as quickly as possible, trying to win the champion, the same things happen in our society and in our daily life. if a company wants to surpass, it must compete with them. it must raise its efficiency. all the companies doing this will no doubt benefit the whole society and the whole human beings.being a student, i must compete with other students in our studies. i must study hard in all the fields so that i can be a useful man when i enter the society after graduation.
     文章一開(kāi)頭就提出了競(jìng)爭(zhēng)的重要性。接下來(lái),作者用了兩個(gè)事例更進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明了主題。最后談到了自己的做法。