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4. 第四段第一句"It’s no denying that elective courses can broaden our horizons"應(yīng)改為"There’s no denying that elective courses can broaden our horizon" 。 "It"這個(gè)代詞作先行詞應(yīng)指代后面的名詞從句,可是本句中的"that"從句是"deny"的賓語(yǔ), "It"就沒(méi)有什么可指代了。顯然是作者把用法記錯(cuò)了。
    5. 第四段第三句"We shouldn’t ignore the major we are studying while immerse ourselves into the pleasure of elective courses"應(yīng)改為"We shouldn’t neglect the major courses we are studying while immersing ourselves in the pleasures we find in elective courses" 。這句話的主要問(wèn)題是"while"后面應(yīng)該用分詞,而不應(yīng)該是動(dòng)詞原形。其余的問(wèn)題是語(yǔ)言問(wèn)題, "ignore"的意思是"不理,無(wú)視(pretend not to notice)", 例如:"He completely ignored her and kept on walking"。 "neglect"的意思是"忽視"(fail to give enough attention to)", 例如:"What do you think of parents who neglect their children?"第三個(gè)問(wèn)題是"immerse…into"應(yīng)為 "immerse…in" 。
    3 英語(yǔ)表達(dá)和搭配方面的問(wèn)題
    第一段第二句中的"I took a harmonica to play in this semester"應(yīng)改為"I took a course on the harmonica this semester"。原句不能表達(dá)選課的意思。
    第二段第二句中的"when I felt dull in learning English"應(yīng)改為"when I’m bored with learning English" 。 "Dull"的意思是"boring, not interesting"用在這里不合適。
    第四段第二句中的"You can’t have the cake and take it"建議改為"You can’t have your cake and eat it, too" 。這是一個(gè)諺語(yǔ),表示"魚(yú)與熊掌不可兼得" 。估計(jì)是讀者記錯(cuò)了。
    要學(xué)好英語(yǔ),寫好英語(yǔ),首先要有扎實(shí)的基本功,要牢固地掌握英語(yǔ)考試*大的基本語(yǔ)法和句子結(jié)構(gòu),同時(shí)要掌握好英語(yǔ)的基本詞匯,不但要弄清每個(gè)詞的意思,還要記住它們的搭配。學(xué)習(xí)中要仔細(xì)琢磨,要多讀,好還要多背一點(diǎn)好的文章,以此增加語(yǔ)感。學(xué)習(xí)語(yǔ)言是一件艱苦的事,要舍得花功夫,只有這樣,才能期望取得較快的進(jìn)步。當(dāng)然,只要能鉆進(jìn)去,也能從語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí)中獲得許多知識(shí)和樂(lè)趣。