第一章 大學(xué)英語六級(jí)寫作宏觀分析
本章內(nèi)容：
一、考試時(shí)間
二、字?jǐn)?shù)要求
三、評(píng)分原則及標(biāo)準(zhǔn)下的寫作要求www.Ｅxamda.CoM考試就到考試大
一)評(píng)分原則
1. 從內(nèi)容和語言兩個(gè)方面對(duì)作文進(jìn)行綜合評(píng)判。內(nèi)容和語言是一個(gè)統(tǒng)一體。作文應(yīng)表達(dá)題目所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容，而內(nèi)容要通過語言來表達(dá)。
二)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
2分：條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。
5分：基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語言錯(cuò)誤。
8分：基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫;語言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。
11分：切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯(cuò)誤。
14分：切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順、連貫，基本上無語言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。
三)寫作要求
1、從內(nèi)容上來看，千萬不要跑題
2、語言表達(dá)重于內(nèi)容
四)提高表達(dá)能力的三個(gè)方面
四、閱卷實(shí)例及高分作文的特點(diǎn)
2008年12月六級(jí)試題考試大論壇
How to Improve Students’ Mental Health
1. 大學(xué)生的心理健康非常重要
2. 為此，學(xué)?？梢?BR> 3. 我們自己應(yīng)當(dāng)
五、考試題型的回顧和分類(2004.1—2008.12)
一)考試題型回顧
1. (08. 12) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How to Improve Students’ Mental Health? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1. 大學(xué)生的心理健康非常重要
2. 為此，學(xué)?？梢?BR> 3. 我們自己應(yīng)當(dāng)
2. (08. 6) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Will E-books Replace Traditional Books? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.隨著信息技術(shù)的發(fā)展，電子圖書越來越多。
2.有人認(rèn)為電子圖書會(huì)取代傳統(tǒng)圖書，理由是……
3.我的看法。www.Ｅxamda.CoM考試就到考試大
3. (07. 12) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Digital Age. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.如今數(shù)字化產(chǎn)品得到越來越廣泛的使用，例如……
2.數(shù)字化產(chǎn)品的使用對(duì)人們工作、學(xué)習(xí)和生活產(chǎn)生的影響。
4. (07. 6) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.有人做好事期望得到回報(bào);
2.有人認(rèn)為應(yīng)該像雷鋒那樣做好事不圖回報(bào);
3.我的觀點(diǎn)。
5. (06. 12) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Importance of Reading Classics. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.閱讀經(jīng)典書籍對(duì)人的成長至關(guān)重要;
2.現(xiàn)在愿意閱讀經(jīng)典的人卻越來越少，原因是……
3.我們大學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎么做。
6. (06. 6) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Traveling Abroad. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.近十年來X市有越來越多的人選擇出境旅游;
2.出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因;
3.這種現(xiàn)象可能產(chǎn)生的影響。
7. (06. 1) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a company declining a job offer. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.對(duì)公司提供職位表示感謝采集者退散
2.解釋為何不能接受所提供的職位
3.希望給與諒解，并表達(dá)對(duì)公司的良好祝愿
8. (05. 6) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Say No to Pirated Products. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.目前盜版的現(xiàn)象比較嚴(yán)重;
2.造成這種現(xiàn)象的原因及其危害;
3.我們應(yīng)該怎么做。
Useful words and expressions:
盜版：piracy (n.)
盜版產(chǎn)品：pirated products
知識(shí)產(chǎn)權(quán)：intellectual property rights
侵犯版權(quán)：infringe sb’s copyright; copyright infringement
9. (05. 1) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an open letter on behalf of the student union asking people to give help to a student who is seriously ill. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.對(duì)病人的簡單介紹：目前的病情和家庭情況;
2.目前的困難：無法繼續(xù)承擔(dān)醫(yī)療費(fèi)用，需要護(hù)理;
3.希望捐助，聯(lián)系方式。
Your Help Needed
10. (04. 6) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to the editor of a newspaper complaining about the poor service of a bookstore. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
設(shè)想你買了一本英文詞典，發(fā)現(xiàn)有這樣那樣的質(zhì)量問題，書店的服務(wù)態(tài)度又不好，因此給報(bào)社編輯寫信。信中必須包括以下內(nèi)容：
1.事情的起因;
2.與書店交涉的經(jīng)過;
3.呼吁服務(wù)行業(yè)必須提高服務(wù)質(zhì)量。
A Letter to the Editor of a Newspaper
11. (04. 1) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.有些大學(xué)校園浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象日益嚴(yán)重;
2.浪費(fèi)的危害;
3.杜絕浪費(fèi)，從我做起。
本章內(nèi)容：
一、考試時(shí)間
二、字?jǐn)?shù)要求
三、評(píng)分原則及標(biāo)準(zhǔn)下的寫作要求www.Ｅxamda.CoM考試就到考試大
一)評(píng)分原則
1. 從內(nèi)容和語言兩個(gè)方面對(duì)作文進(jìn)行綜合評(píng)判。內(nèi)容和語言是一個(gè)統(tǒng)一體。作文應(yīng)表達(dá)題目所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容，而內(nèi)容要通過語言來表達(dá)。
二)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
2分：條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。
5分：基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語言錯(cuò)誤。
8分：基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫;語言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。
11分：切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯(cuò)誤。
14分：切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順、連貫，基本上無語言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。
三)寫作要求
1、從內(nèi)容上來看，千萬不要跑題
2、語言表達(dá)重于內(nèi)容
四)提高表達(dá)能力的三個(gè)方面
四、閱卷實(shí)例及高分作文的特點(diǎn)
2008年12月六級(jí)試題考試大論壇
How to Improve Students’ Mental Health
1. 大學(xué)生的心理健康非常重要
2. 為此，學(xué)?？梢?BR> 3. 我們自己應(yīng)當(dāng)
五、考試題型的回顧和分類(2004.1—2008.12)
一)考試題型回顧
1. (08. 12) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How to Improve Students’ Mental Health? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1. 大學(xué)生的心理健康非常重要
2. 為此，學(xué)?？梢?BR> 3. 我們自己應(yīng)當(dāng)
2. (08. 6) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Will E-books Replace Traditional Books? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.隨著信息技術(shù)的發(fā)展，電子圖書越來越多。
2.有人認(rèn)為電子圖書會(huì)取代傳統(tǒng)圖書，理由是……
3.我的看法。www.Ｅxamda.CoM考試就到考試大
3. (07. 12) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Digital Age. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.如今數(shù)字化產(chǎn)品得到越來越廣泛的使用，例如……
2.數(shù)字化產(chǎn)品的使用對(duì)人們工作、學(xué)習(xí)和生活產(chǎn)生的影響。
4. (07. 6) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.有人做好事期望得到回報(bào);
2.有人認(rèn)為應(yīng)該像雷鋒那樣做好事不圖回報(bào);
3.我的觀點(diǎn)。
5. (06. 12) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Importance of Reading Classics. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.閱讀經(jīng)典書籍對(duì)人的成長至關(guān)重要;
2.現(xiàn)在愿意閱讀經(jīng)典的人卻越來越少，原因是……
3.我們大學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎么做。
6. (06. 6) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Traveling Abroad. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.近十年來X市有越來越多的人選擇出境旅游;
2.出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因;
3.這種現(xiàn)象可能產(chǎn)生的影響。
7. (06. 1) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a company declining a job offer. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.對(duì)公司提供職位表示感謝采集者退散
2.解釋為何不能接受所提供的職位
3.希望給與諒解，并表達(dá)對(duì)公司的良好祝愿
8. (05. 6) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Say No to Pirated Products. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.目前盜版的現(xiàn)象比較嚴(yán)重;
2.造成這種現(xiàn)象的原因及其危害;
3.我們應(yīng)該怎么做。
Useful words and expressions:
盜版：piracy (n.)
盜版產(chǎn)品：pirated products
知識(shí)產(chǎn)權(quán)：intellectual property rights
侵犯版權(quán)：infringe sb’s copyright; copyright infringement
9. (05. 1) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an open letter on behalf of the student union asking people to give help to a student who is seriously ill. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.對(duì)病人的簡單介紹：目前的病情和家庭情況;
2.目前的困難：無法繼續(xù)承擔(dān)醫(yī)療費(fèi)用，需要護(hù)理;
3.希望捐助，聯(lián)系方式。
Your Help Needed
10. (04. 6) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to the editor of a newspaper complaining about the poor service of a bookstore. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
設(shè)想你買了一本英文詞典，發(fā)現(xiàn)有這樣那樣的質(zhì)量問題，書店的服務(wù)態(tài)度又不好，因此給報(bào)社編輯寫信。信中必須包括以下內(nèi)容：
1.事情的起因;
2.與書店交涉的經(jīng)過;
3.呼吁服務(wù)行業(yè)必須提高服務(wù)質(zhì)量。
A Letter to the Editor of a Newspaper
11. (04. 1) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.有些大學(xué)校園浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象日益嚴(yán)重;
2.浪費(fèi)的危害;
3.杜絕浪費(fèi)，從我做起。