三、詞匯(vocabulary):同義改寫,百花齊放
盲點(diǎn)1 :遭遇生詞
大部分考生苦惱的地方莫過(guò)于此,寫作過(guò)程中無(wú)數(shù)次由于生詞的關(guān)系而短路。
盲點(diǎn)1擊破:同義改寫原則
其實(shí)考生對(duì)不認(rèn)識(shí)的詞完全可以paraphrase ,如望子成龍,望女成鳳完全可以寫成:All parents expect their children to have a promising further.
注意:對(duì)于各個(gè)領(lǐng)域內(nèi)的專有名詞我們鼓勵(lì)大家履行詞以類記原則,畢竟只有語(yǔ)言水平較高的烤鴨才可能做到用簡(jiǎn)單的詞匯解釋難詞。如有同學(xué)在解釋寄生蟲(chóng)(parasite)在他筆下成了“ something that is very tiny and lives on my skin and sucks my blood without doing any work”!這樣的paraphrase 只能讓考官啼笑皆非。
盲點(diǎn)2:同義重現(xiàn)
如在discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the internet時(shí),有考生作文中曾出現(xiàn)了不下10次的advantages and disadvantages .這會(huì)讓考官出現(xiàn)極嚴(yán)重的審美疲勞,分?jǐn)?shù)自然不高。
盲點(diǎn)2擊破:百花齊放原則
其實(shí)考生在平時(shí)的習(xí)作中應(yīng)注意近義詞,反義詞,衍生詞的積累,并不斷練習(xí)。如上面的advantages的同義詞為benefits gains merits pros等;disadvantages的同義詞有downsides ,weakness, drawbacks cons等。
盲點(diǎn)3:大詞連篇
很多考生認(rèn)為大詞生僻詞匯用得越多,得分就越高。
盲點(diǎn)3擊破:整體協(xié)調(diào)原則
看到劍橋系列教材大家會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn),考官給出的范文大詞生詞寥寥可數(shù),真正有說(shuō)服力的是你用的詞能夠準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤的表達(dá)你的思想。試想一個(gè)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤連篇的考生盲目地使用各種生僻詞匯來(lái)堆砌文章,這無(wú)疑給考官造成一種“暴發(fā)戶”般的強(qiáng)烈視覺(jué)沖擊,最后只能適得其反。所以,用詞上我們講究與內(nèi)容以及句式結(jié)構(gòu)整體協(xié)調(diào)的原則。
三、句式(sentence structure):長(zhǎng)短結(jié)合,錯(cuò)落有致
盲點(diǎn)1:長(zhǎng)篇累牘
和用詞上的大詞連篇一樣,部分考生以能使用各種復(fù)雜的長(zhǎng)難句為榮。
盲點(diǎn)1擊破:長(zhǎng)短結(jié)合原則
事實(shí)上,如果大家有看劍橋后面的范文的話,會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)長(zhǎng)難句并不象絕大多數(shù)同學(xué)想象得那般高深。通常的情況是長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合使用,而且論點(diǎn)通常用短句,而論據(jù)則長(zhǎng)句居多。
盲點(diǎn)2:短小精悍
和長(zhǎng)篇累牘型考生相反的是短小精悍型考生,為了保險(xiǎn)起見(jiàn),這類考生作文中充滿了簡(jiǎn)單的is/am/are的主系表和主謂賓句型。
盲點(diǎn)2擊破:靈活多變?cè)瓌t
這類考生如果能稍稍變得aggressive一些,他們將是考場(chǎng)上的“黑馬”。如以Parents and teachers often link children's score to their academic ability這個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句為例,通過(guò)強(qiáng)調(diào)句型的包裝我們得到:
It is children's score that parents and teachers often link to their academic ability rather than other qualifications.
通過(guò)倒裝句的包裝我們可以得到:
So important is children's score that parents and teachers often link them to children's academic ability .
通過(guò)插入語(yǔ)的包裝我們可以得到:
Scores , as is known to everyone ,are often linked to children's academic ability by teachers and parents.
通過(guò)分詞短語(yǔ)的包裝我們可以得到:
Based on the conception that scores tells everything, parents and teachers often link children's score to their academic ability .
………
通過(guò)如此靈活的加工和包裝,你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn),簡(jiǎn)單句經(jīng)過(guò)稍稍潤(rùn)色原來(lái)也可以如此光彩照人,這要比無(wú)數(shù)大詞生僻詞堆砌形成的長(zhǎng)難句更加贏得考官的青睞。
總之,掌握了如上原則,再加上持之以恒的練習(xí),考生一定能在Task 2中獲得自己滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。
盲點(diǎn)1 :遭遇生詞
大部分考生苦惱的地方莫過(guò)于此,寫作過(guò)程中無(wú)數(shù)次由于生詞的關(guān)系而短路。
盲點(diǎn)1擊破:同義改寫原則
其實(shí)考生對(duì)不認(rèn)識(shí)的詞完全可以paraphrase ,如望子成龍,望女成鳳完全可以寫成:All parents expect their children to have a promising further.
注意:對(duì)于各個(gè)領(lǐng)域內(nèi)的專有名詞我們鼓勵(lì)大家履行詞以類記原則,畢竟只有語(yǔ)言水平較高的烤鴨才可能做到用簡(jiǎn)單的詞匯解釋難詞。如有同學(xué)在解釋寄生蟲(chóng)(parasite)在他筆下成了“ something that is very tiny and lives on my skin and sucks my blood without doing any work”!這樣的paraphrase 只能讓考官啼笑皆非。
盲點(diǎn)2:同義重現(xiàn)
如在discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the internet時(shí),有考生作文中曾出現(xiàn)了不下10次的advantages and disadvantages .這會(huì)讓考官出現(xiàn)極嚴(yán)重的審美疲勞,分?jǐn)?shù)自然不高。
盲點(diǎn)2擊破:百花齊放原則
其實(shí)考生在平時(shí)的習(xí)作中應(yīng)注意近義詞,反義詞,衍生詞的積累,并不斷練習(xí)。如上面的advantages的同義詞為benefits gains merits pros等;disadvantages的同義詞有downsides ,weakness, drawbacks cons等。
盲點(diǎn)3:大詞連篇
很多考生認(rèn)為大詞生僻詞匯用得越多,得分就越高。
盲點(diǎn)3擊破:整體協(xié)調(diào)原則
看到劍橋系列教材大家會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn),考官給出的范文大詞生詞寥寥可數(shù),真正有說(shuō)服力的是你用的詞能夠準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤的表達(dá)你的思想。試想一個(gè)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤連篇的考生盲目地使用各種生僻詞匯來(lái)堆砌文章,這無(wú)疑給考官造成一種“暴發(fā)戶”般的強(qiáng)烈視覺(jué)沖擊,最后只能適得其反。所以,用詞上我們講究與內(nèi)容以及句式結(jié)構(gòu)整體協(xié)調(diào)的原則。
三、句式(sentence structure):長(zhǎng)短結(jié)合,錯(cuò)落有致
盲點(diǎn)1:長(zhǎng)篇累牘
和用詞上的大詞連篇一樣,部分考生以能使用各種復(fù)雜的長(zhǎng)難句為榮。
盲點(diǎn)1擊破:長(zhǎng)短結(jié)合原則
事實(shí)上,如果大家有看劍橋后面的范文的話,會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)長(zhǎng)難句并不象絕大多數(shù)同學(xué)想象得那般高深。通常的情況是長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合使用,而且論點(diǎn)通常用短句,而論據(jù)則長(zhǎng)句居多。
盲點(diǎn)2:短小精悍
和長(zhǎng)篇累牘型考生相反的是短小精悍型考生,為了保險(xiǎn)起見(jiàn),這類考生作文中充滿了簡(jiǎn)單的is/am/are的主系表和主謂賓句型。
盲點(diǎn)2擊破:靈活多變?cè)瓌t
這類考生如果能稍稍變得aggressive一些,他們將是考場(chǎng)上的“黑馬”。如以Parents and teachers often link children's score to their academic ability這個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句為例,通過(guò)強(qiáng)調(diào)句型的包裝我們得到:
It is children's score that parents and teachers often link to their academic ability rather than other qualifications.
通過(guò)倒裝句的包裝我們可以得到:
So important is children's score that parents and teachers often link them to children's academic ability .
通過(guò)插入語(yǔ)的包裝我們可以得到:
Scores , as is known to everyone ,are often linked to children's academic ability by teachers and parents.
通過(guò)分詞短語(yǔ)的包裝我們可以得到:
Based on the conception that scores tells everything, parents and teachers often link children's score to their academic ability .
………
通過(guò)如此靈活的加工和包裝,你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn),簡(jiǎn)單句經(jīng)過(guò)稍稍潤(rùn)色原來(lái)也可以如此光彩照人,這要比無(wú)數(shù)大詞生僻詞堆砌形成的長(zhǎng)難句更加贏得考官的青睞。
總之,掌握了如上原則,再加上持之以恒的練習(xí),考生一定能在Task 2中獲得自己滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。