二、組織結(jié)構(gòu)(organization):起承轉(zhuǎn)合,行云流水
盲點(diǎn)1:天馬行空
這類考生和“千言萬語”型考生神似,寫作時(shí)缺乏自己的一套寫作框架。有時(shí),盡管有全文框架,段落框架又缺失,通常表現(xiàn)為主體段內(nèi)部的分論點(diǎn)或分論據(jù)存在邏輯上的重復(fù)或沖突。
盲點(diǎn)1擊破:起承轉(zhuǎn)合原則
除了段落之間應(yīng)存在“第一段(起)為背景介紹和提出論點(diǎn)段;第二段(承)為己方觀點(diǎn)論證段;第三段(轉(zhuǎn))為讓步段;第四段(合)總結(jié)段?!钡倪壿嬁蚣苤猓温鋬?nèi)部每一句也需要有這樣的邏輯框架來約束,如讓步段中:“some people may argue that … (起);because they maintain that …。(承) ;However ,they are oversimplifying the situation, in fact …..(轉(zhuǎn)); Therefore , I believe …。(合)
盲點(diǎn)2:?jiǎn)尉溆坞x
這類烤鴨寫出來的句子與句子之間沒有連接詞,有時(shí)就算有,邏輯連詞也使用錯(cuò)誤?;蛘呤菢?biāo)點(diǎn)不注意。最常見使用錯(cuò)誤諸如on the other hand.它連接的是轉(zhuǎn)折,卻無數(shù)次被誤解成遞進(jìn)。
盲點(diǎn)2擊破:行云流水原則
考生應(yīng)準(zhǔn)確記憶并正確使用各種邏輯關(guān)系詞,力求做到行云流水,常見的邏輯連詞有:
因果關(guān)系:
因:As since due to owning to
果:hence thus therefore as a consequence as a result
表目的:thereby
舉例關(guān)系:Take for example, For instance, To illustrate, As an apt illustration ,
對(duì)比關(guān)系:While ,whilst, whereas, by contrast.
讓步關(guān)系:despite ,in spite of , not with standing , nonetheless, even though,
Provided that , if
盲點(diǎn)1:天馬行空
這類考生和“千言萬語”型考生神似,寫作時(shí)缺乏自己的一套寫作框架。有時(shí),盡管有全文框架,段落框架又缺失,通常表現(xiàn)為主體段內(nèi)部的分論點(diǎn)或分論據(jù)存在邏輯上的重復(fù)或沖突。
盲點(diǎn)1擊破:起承轉(zhuǎn)合原則
除了段落之間應(yīng)存在“第一段(起)為背景介紹和提出論點(diǎn)段;第二段(承)為己方觀點(diǎn)論證段;第三段(轉(zhuǎn))為讓步段;第四段(合)總結(jié)段?!钡倪壿嬁蚣苤猓温鋬?nèi)部每一句也需要有這樣的邏輯框架來約束,如讓步段中:“some people may argue that … (起);because they maintain that …。(承) ;However ,they are oversimplifying the situation, in fact …..(轉(zhuǎn)); Therefore , I believe …。(合)
盲點(diǎn)2:?jiǎn)尉溆坞x
這類烤鴨寫出來的句子與句子之間沒有連接詞,有時(shí)就算有,邏輯連詞也使用錯(cuò)誤?;蛘呤菢?biāo)點(diǎn)不注意。最常見使用錯(cuò)誤諸如on the other hand.它連接的是轉(zhuǎn)折,卻無數(shù)次被誤解成遞進(jìn)。
盲點(diǎn)2擊破:行云流水原則
考生應(yīng)準(zhǔn)確記憶并正確使用各種邏輯關(guān)系詞,力求做到行云流水,常見的邏輯連詞有:
因果關(guān)系:
因:As since due to owning to
果:hence thus therefore as a consequence as a result
表目的:thereby
舉例關(guān)系:Take for example, For instance, To illustrate, As an apt illustration ,
對(duì)比關(guān)系:While ,whilst, whereas, by contrast.
讓步關(guān)系:despite ,in spite of , not with standing , nonetheless, even though,
Provided that , if

