2007年天津市中考英語滿分作文范文
“Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine” was launched on April 29, 2007. The teachers and students in our school were organized to watch the launching ceremony together first , and then we went to the playground to have one-hour sports activities , such as running , doing exercises and playing basketball . I felt very good after having some exercises.
I think it is a good way to build up our body strength. Sports can also let brains have a rest so that our study will be more effective. To do physical exercises an hour a day will make us happy a whole life, so I will keep on doing it. I hope more and more people will join us in sports activities.
點評：作者根據的題目中的提示完成了這篇佳作。本文的特點就是要點清楚，表達通順。很多人在根據提示完成文章時，常常把一條一條的提示寫的很突兀，沒有連續(xù)性，而本文的作者卻成功地避免了這種問題，運用非常嫻熟地語言表達功力把各個要點非常自然地串聯起來。
“Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine” was launched on April 29, 2007. The teachers and students in our school were organized to watch the launching ceremony together first , and then we went to the playground to have one-hour sports activities , such as running , doing exercises and playing basketball . I felt very good after having some exercises.
I think it is a good way to build up our body strength. Sports can also let brains have a rest so that our study will be more effective. To do physical exercises an hour a day will make us happy a whole life, so I will keep on doing it. I hope more and more people will join us in sports activities.
點評：作者根據的題目中的提示完成了這篇佳作。本文的特點就是要點清楚，表達通順。很多人在根據提示完成文章時，常常把一條一條的提示寫的很突兀，沒有連續(xù)性，而本文的作者卻成功地避免了這種問題，運用非常嫻熟地語言表達功力把各個要點非常自然地串聯起來。