2007年江西省中考英語滿分作文范文

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2007年江西省中考英語滿分作文范文
    中學生學習時間長、壓力大,專家建議學生每天課后應采取適當?shù)姆绞椒潘勺约?。某英文報“學生習作”專欄正在就“學生適當?shù)姆潘煞绞健边@一話題進行征文。假設你是二十二中初三(3)班的班長,近你對班上同學課后放松方式進行了調查。請根據(jù)表格提供的調查信息和要求寫一篇短文向該報投稿。
    對 象:二十二中初三(3)班
    人 數(shù):60人(男:31人;女:29人)
    常用放松方式:
    1.看電視(30人)
    2.玩電腦游戲(12人)
    3.聽音樂(8人)
    4.進行體育鍛煉(5人)
    5.沒有時間放松(5人)
    你的觀點 哪一種(些)放松方式是適當?shù)??為什么?BR>    注意:1.短文包括對調查相關信息的介紹和你自己的觀點;2.詞數(shù):80-100。題目和開頭已為你寫好,不記入總詞數(shù)。
    The Proper Way(s) for Students to Relax
    I am the monitor of Class3,Grade 3,No.22 Middle School. Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class. __________________
    2007年江西省中考英語滿分作文范文
    The Proper Way(s) for students to Relax
    I am the monitor of Class 3, Grade 3, No. 22 Middle School. Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class.
    There are 60 students in my class (31 boys and 29 girls).Different students have different ways to relax. Half of the students often watch TV. 12 students like to play computer games while 8 enjoy listening to music.5 students think doing sports is a good way and another five are too busy to relax.
    As we study long hours every day and suffer from too much pressure, every student should choose proper ways to relax. In my opinion, watching TV or playing computer games is not a proper way to help us relax. I thing taking exercise is a proper way because it can rest our brains and eyes. Besides, it can help improve our health. Therefore, I often play pingpang.
    點評:第一段和第二段是敘述表格中的信息,第三段是表達自己的觀點。在敘述信息時,作者使用了簡潔地語言把意思準確地傳達出來;在抒發(fā)自己的觀點時候,作者詳細地闡明了自己的觀點。詳略得當,銜接自然,結構緊湊,不愧為一篇佳作。