最后講一種題目，黃金里的也是，就是題目的論述無懈可擊，是真理一般，既沒有提A比b好讓你選或者讓你駁，也沒提出啥啥啥不應(yīng)該，讓你給揪住辮子．這種題目的辦法就是分層次寫． 12.26就屬于這種題目
12. “Education has become the main provider of individual opportunity in our society. Just as property and money once were the keys to success, education has now become the element that most ensures success in life.”
26. “Location has traditionally been one of the most important determinants of a business’s success. The importance of location is not likely to change, no matter how advanced the development of computer communications and others kinds of technology becomes.”
對12做個分析．
開頭:盡量用點比較復(fù)雜的的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，讓人眼前亮一下如Done by sth, A does; Doing sth, A is ...或Prep doing sth, a becomes...． As the society is becoming more and more complex,人們成功的require更多了，要求更高了．Education, the resource that used to be accessible only to those well-off or privileged,變成了主要的機(jī)會提供者． （后面分層，這句話提點） 不僅career成功需要教育，life成功也更需要教育．（橋秒搞定）
中間： On one hand 事業(yè)成功,知識的重要性，信息花科技化，還是很容易的，舉個爆發(fā)戶的例子如dell或者中國的dell神舟啥的．或者引用個Bacon的知識就是力量，很多做項目的如４大都需要lifelong learning
ON the other hand，生活的成功需要知識教育．因為社會復(fù)雜，誘惑多，人們盡管物質(zhì)豐富，但啥啥貧瘠，不斷的教育給人的心靈purified一下，instill nutrients進(jìn)我們的心，生活上避免snare,獲得成功．
結(jié)尾．
最后談一下句式的變化和重申文章的結(jié)構(gòu)：
句式的變化：
原句 this argument would be more persuasive if more evidence can be added. 評價：基本的句式，比較一般．
改動 Buttressed with more evidence, the argument can be more cogent(persuasive),由于開頭的過去分詞的出現(xiàn)，這個高級的結(jié)構(gòu)就會給你帶來加分．試著改一下自己平淡的句子吧，呵呵，但不用每句都如此．
同樣By providing opportunities to civilians, education has become .....比 because education can provide opportunities to ,education has become出彩的多．
對東西的修飾 A,.........,is 如何如何，中間,,,,,就是對A的定語修飾。比如Enron, the former monster in resource and energy that collapsed along with its auditor A&A for frauds, demonstrated that .............這里我們可以看到，即使插入語我們也可以在其中放入從句，交代的更清楚，句自清晰，老外看了更喜歡，呵呵．其實都是簡單的技巧，不用你擴(kuò)大詞匯，只是修改一下自己平淡的表達(dá)，說不定就能拿高點的分?jǐn)?shù)．
文章的結(jié)構(gòu)：還是應(yīng)該盡量全面，注意邏輯關(guān)系．Admittedly(Indisputably)一段， however(be that as it may)否定一下，出正式的論斷．既加字?jǐn)?shù)又顯得分析全面還是不錯的，其實ai時間短本來就不可能太深入，還是考察大家是否對題目的各個點都能提一下．大家加油吧，就寫這么多．
12. “Education has become the main provider of individual opportunity in our society. Just as property and money once were the keys to success, education has now become the element that most ensures success in life.”
26. “Location has traditionally been one of the most important determinants of a business’s success. The importance of location is not likely to change, no matter how advanced the development of computer communications and others kinds of technology becomes.”
對12做個分析．
開頭:盡量用點比較復(fù)雜的的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，讓人眼前亮一下如Done by sth, A does; Doing sth, A is ...或Prep doing sth, a becomes...． As the society is becoming more and more complex,人們成功的require更多了，要求更高了．Education, the resource that used to be accessible only to those well-off or privileged,變成了主要的機(jī)會提供者． （后面分層，這句話提點） 不僅career成功需要教育，life成功也更需要教育．（橋秒搞定）
中間： On one hand 事業(yè)成功,知識的重要性，信息花科技化，還是很容易的，舉個爆發(fā)戶的例子如dell或者中國的dell神舟啥的．或者引用個Bacon的知識就是力量，很多做項目的如４大都需要lifelong learning
ON the other hand，生活的成功需要知識教育．因為社會復(fù)雜，誘惑多，人們盡管物質(zhì)豐富，但啥啥貧瘠，不斷的教育給人的心靈purified一下，instill nutrients進(jìn)我們的心，生活上避免snare,獲得成功．
結(jié)尾．
最后談一下句式的變化和重申文章的結(jié)構(gòu)：
句式的變化：
原句 this argument would be more persuasive if more evidence can be added. 評價：基本的句式，比較一般．
改動 Buttressed with more evidence, the argument can be more cogent(persuasive),由于開頭的過去分詞的出現(xiàn)，這個高級的結(jié)構(gòu)就會給你帶來加分．試著改一下自己平淡的句子吧，呵呵，但不用每句都如此．
同樣By providing opportunities to civilians, education has become .....比 because education can provide opportunities to ,education has become出彩的多．
對東西的修飾 A,.........,is 如何如何，中間,,,,,就是對A的定語修飾。比如Enron, the former monster in resource and energy that collapsed along with its auditor A&A for frauds, demonstrated that .............這里我們可以看到，即使插入語我們也可以在其中放入從句，交代的更清楚，句自清晰，老外看了更喜歡，呵呵．其實都是簡單的技巧，不用你擴(kuò)大詞匯，只是修改一下自己平淡的表達(dá)，說不定就能拿高點的分?jǐn)?shù)．
文章的結(jié)構(gòu)：還是應(yīng)該盡量全面，注意邏輯關(guān)系．Admittedly(Indisputably)一段， however(be that as it may)否定一下，出正式的論斷．既加字?jǐn)?shù)又顯得分析全面還是不錯的，其實ai時間短本來就不可能太深入，還是考察大家是否對題目的各個點都能提一下．大家加油吧，就寫這么多．