GMAT AWA 作文6分感想

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1/10號,我也作文6分!(GRE/TOEFL均4分) 模版分享。剛剛收到的,我竟然也有6分!
    我的背景:03年T 4分,06年 GRE 4分, 06年新T 25分
    作文一直是我的弱項,我也很自卑,GRE復(fù)習(xí)30天作文,全脫產(chǎn),還是4分,不僅對自己產(chǎn)生懷疑!這次終于可以了!
    考試的時候,Argument寫作還剩1分鐘,我在改一個單詞的時候,大家都死機了,15分鐘后開機,我忘了改什么了,結(jié)果過去了,是個影響,不過接下來還好,CD幫了我太多,下面介紹經(jīng)驗,給那些很努力的,努力提高而又覺得沒信心,或者覺得無法下手的朋友看看。
    1. 復(fù)習(xí)材料: 新黃金80+本月/上月JJ
    我考的2題都是上月的JJ,也同時是黃金80里的,所以其實只看上月JJ就可以了。
    2. 感覺:我也覺得無從下手,特別慌,但我不想放棄,就逼著自己看題目,最后我練了2篇issue,3篇argu。所以如果不知道怎么下手,就看黃金題目是怎么寫的,然后看看argument
    3. Issue備考:需要模版,我是說開頭結(jié)尾的模版,因為我就是用了一位NN的模版,獻給大家。這位NN的模版很獨特,就是連詞特多!!
    Should...? The author asserts that, however, some people would hold the opposite opinion because of their diverse background, ethics and personal concerns. From my perspective, nevertheless, after pondering on this knotty concerns, viewing this controversial issue in several diverse lights and taking some compelling factors into account, I concur/don't concur with the speaker and am inclined to hold the position that... the followings would greatly substantiate my points of view.
    The most importatnt evidence for my view is that... in addition...specifically...it follows, therefore, that...
    Another equivalently crucial ground is that...moreover...for instance...consequently, under this circumstances, it is obvious that...
    Admittlely...自由發(fā)揮,說點不足...after considering both the advan. and disadvan. it is obvious that...
    In sum, basing my conclusion on the illustrations and expositions mentioned above, accordingly, I hold the position that...
    4. Argument備考:平時看看黃金就夠了,反駁論點看7宗罪,同時也要再結(jié)合一位NN的,一般來說,最常見的就是:gratuitous assumption,數(shù)據(jù)問題,同時發(fā)生和A不是B的原因。
    我的模版:
    In this conclusion, the argument endorsed by the author is that... Adducing grounds to buttress his prepostion, the author maintains that... moreover...it is argued that...the author cites the fact that.....this argument is problematic in several respects.
    First, and foremost...
    Second...
    Finally...
    In conclusion, this argument is not compelling and not undeniable as it stands. Only with more solid confirmations, along with more concrete evidence,can the argument be viewed as rational and verifiable. To strengthen this argu, the author would have to provide evidence to show that.... in addition, the author would also have to present verifiable justifications to demonstrate that... Only in this way can the argument be more thorough and convincing.
    我想說大家一定要有信心,GMAT作文還是很模式化的! 考試前我看了一位朋友的心得,他說Issue不用模版,結(jié)果他也5.5分,我就聽他的,中間自己一頓狂寫,題目是沒有創(chuàng)新,就不能取得勝利和長期的成功地那個,我就狂舉例子,把超女,聯(lián)想并IBM全舉上了;Admittely的部分就是說光創(chuàng)新也要有生產(chǎn)和銷售保證,結(jié)果竟然是6分,大家也別太模式化哈,多來點有意思的,
    Argument就是背模版,套模版,我最后兩篇作文都在420字以上。大家加油!
    當(dāng)初我GRE準(zhǔn)備一個月作文,結(jié)果才4分,這就是努力的結(jié)果,我GMAT準(zhǔn)備了10天多,背模版。