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短文改錯是英語高考中主觀性試題的重要組成部分和必考題型,同時也是同學(xué)們感到困難、得分較低的一種綜合性題型。短文改錯對同學(xué)們的要求較高,是對語言知識綜合運(yùn)用能力的考查,因此同學(xué)們在該項(xiàng)上往往失分較多。
1. 語法知識掌握不牢固。改錯題的大部分知識點(diǎn)都在語法上,如果語法知識掌握不牢固,改錯題想得高分基本不容易。
2. 不了解設(shè)題原則。改錯題的設(shè)置和解答都是必須遵循一定原則的,有的同學(xué)由于對這些原則了解不是很清楚,從而在改錯時出現(xiàn)一個詞改成了兩個詞,把名詞改成了介詞或者改變了句子原意等錯誤。
3. 脫離語境,沒有聯(lián)系上下文。由于短文改錯一般是以“行”為單位而設(shè)置錯誤,因此有的同學(xué)常常只顧“行”,而忽略了對整句的理解。這就使得一些基礎(chǔ)不扎實(shí)、英語能力不強(qiáng)的同學(xué)受到分行的影響,而不能將上下文聯(lián)系起來看問題,從而闖不過人為設(shè)置的解題障礙。
4. 忽視了行文邏輯。有些同學(xué)由于基礎(chǔ)不扎實(shí)或粗心大意,忽視對句意的理解,或者對句意模棱兩可,從而導(dǎo)致前后邏輯混亂而失分。
應(yīng)對策略
1. 了解設(shè)錯規(guī)律,熟悉語法答題。從歷年短文改錯試題來看,對詞類的錯誤考查是一個重點(diǎn)。所以同學(xué)們要特別注意短文改錯題錯誤設(shè)置的隱性規(guī)律,那就是虛詞以設(shè)置增減詞試題居多;實(shí)詞以設(shè)置改變形式的試題居多。對句子結(jié)構(gòu)的考查,是短文改錯中的另外一個重點(diǎn)。每年的短文改錯試題都會涉及句子,特別是句型的考查。所以在平時,同學(xué)們要分清主語、謂語、賓語、補(bǔ)語、定語和狀語等6種基本句子成分及其用法。
2. 遵循改錯原則,牢記解題規(guī)范。根據(jù)高考英語考試說明,高考英語短文改錯題錯誤的改正必須遵循兩個原則:①盡可能少改動,即改正錯誤時只能在一行中增加一詞、減少一詞或改動一詞。如果不了解或不重視這一原則,必然會造成改對但不得分的遺憾現(xiàn)象。②盡可能維持原意。一些短文改錯的試題乍一看好像不止一種改法,實(shí)際上根據(jù)“限度維持原意”的原則卻只有一種正確改法。
3. 把握分行技巧,提高語境得分。為檢測根據(jù)語境邏輯發(fā)現(xiàn)并改正錯誤的能力,短文改錯題常設(shè)置有語境題。對這樣的命題特點(diǎn),同學(xué)們要引起特別的重視,在平時練習(xí)時學(xué)會不要以“行”為單位,而要以句,有時候甚至以段為單位通讀、分析上下文,從而在語境中發(fā)現(xiàn)錯誤并改正錯誤。
4. 利用母語翻譯,巧解語義試題。短文改錯是考查同學(xué)們根據(jù)語境、邏輯改正語言錯誤的試題,因此同學(xué)們必須有較強(qiáng)的語境分析能力,然而絕大多數(shù)同學(xué)都沒有用英語進(jìn)行思維的習(xí)慣。因此他們不把目光放在理解語境上,而放在試題文字上,試圖找到明顯的語言錯誤。不否認(rèn)這么做也能解出部分試題,但卻無法解出語境試題。針對這種情況,同學(xué)們應(yīng)學(xué)會用母語翻譯法分析語境從而發(fā)現(xiàn)并改正錯誤。
除此之外,每年都還有不少同學(xué)大小寫意識淡薄,書寫單詞不規(guī)范,造成不必要失分。解題時應(yīng)注意大小寫,答好后應(yīng)復(fù)查大小寫,這樣才能保住解題成果,避免意外失分。
金題精練
一
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we had in 1. _________
the afternoon of last Friday about the good and bad side2. _______
of setting firecrackers during the Spring Festival. 50 boy and 3. _________
40 girl students attended to the discussion. As a result, 30% of 4. ____________
them believe that setting off firecrackers certainly add pleasure 5. _______________
and joy to the festival, therefore, it was a wonderful tradition.6. ________________
But another 50% of students think that setting off firecrackers7. ________________
causes air or noise pollution, and what’s worse, it sometimes 8. __________________
causes terribly accidents to us and to our property. The other 20% 9. ___________
has never thought about it or don’t care. 10. ____________
二
Nowadays, some students would not like to live in a dorm(宿舍).1. _______
Instead, they rented houses outside the school. There are 2. ____________
advantages for all. Living in a dorm can increase friendship and 3. _______
cooperation among classmates, but of course it is safer. A dorm 4. ________
is more like a society, where enables students to learn to get along with 5. __________
the each other, thus preparing for the social life later. As for renting 6. ____________
houses to live alone, it’s better for study as you can feel freely in7. _____________
your own room without interrupted by others. As a result, you 8. ____________
can have more time and devote yourself to study wholeheartedly. 9. ___________
But there may appear a few safety problem as you live outside the school.10. ___________
Anyhow as a student, I prefer living in a dorm.
三
Mr. Huang is sixty years old. He has retired. He taught our 1. _________
Chemistry when we were in Senior Grade One. He was old, and2. _____________
he taught very well. He tried his best to make his classes live. Mr. 3. ________
Huang usually made good preparation for the lessons and was 4. __________
strict with us too. Each time we made mistakes in our homework, 5. __________
he would ask us to correct them. At time, I was rather poor in 6. _________
chemistry. Mr. Huang often helps me with my study very 7. __________
Patiently. As his help, I made great progress and caught 8. _______________
up with the class. He wasn’t always very kind to every student. As 9. ____________
an experiencing teacher, he was respected and loved by all 10. ___________
the students.
參考答案
(一)
1. in改為on;2. side改為sides;3. setting之后加off;
4. 去掉to;5. add改為adds;6. was改為is;
7. 正確;8. or改為and;9. terribly改為terrible;
10. has改為have
(二)
1. 正確;2. rented改為rent;3. all改為both;
4. but改為and;5. where改為which;6. 去掉each other前面的the;
7. freely改為free;8. without后加being;9. study改為studying;
10. problem改為problems;
(三)
1. our改為us;2. and改為but;3. live改為lively;
4. preparation改為preparations;5. 正確;6. At 后加one;
7. helps改為helped;8. As改為With;9. wasn’t改為was;
10. experiencing改為experienced
短文改錯是英語高考中主觀性試題的重要組成部分和必考題型,同時也是同學(xué)們感到困難、得分較低的一種綜合性題型。短文改錯對同學(xué)們的要求較高,是對語言知識綜合運(yùn)用能力的考查,因此同學(xué)們在該項(xiàng)上往往失分較多。
1. 語法知識掌握不牢固。改錯題的大部分知識點(diǎn)都在語法上,如果語法知識掌握不牢固,改錯題想得高分基本不容易。
2. 不了解設(shè)題原則。改錯題的設(shè)置和解答都是必須遵循一定原則的,有的同學(xué)由于對這些原則了解不是很清楚,從而在改錯時出現(xiàn)一個詞改成了兩個詞,把名詞改成了介詞或者改變了句子原意等錯誤。
3. 脫離語境,沒有聯(lián)系上下文。由于短文改錯一般是以“行”為單位而設(shè)置錯誤,因此有的同學(xué)常常只顧“行”,而忽略了對整句的理解。這就使得一些基礎(chǔ)不扎實(shí)、英語能力不強(qiáng)的同學(xué)受到分行的影響,而不能將上下文聯(lián)系起來看問題,從而闖不過人為設(shè)置的解題障礙。
4. 忽視了行文邏輯。有些同學(xué)由于基礎(chǔ)不扎實(shí)或粗心大意,忽視對句意的理解,或者對句意模棱兩可,從而導(dǎo)致前后邏輯混亂而失分。
應(yīng)對策略
1. 了解設(shè)錯規(guī)律,熟悉語法答題。從歷年短文改錯試題來看,對詞類的錯誤考查是一個重點(diǎn)。所以同學(xué)們要特別注意短文改錯題錯誤設(shè)置的隱性規(guī)律,那就是虛詞以設(shè)置增減詞試題居多;實(shí)詞以設(shè)置改變形式的試題居多。對句子結(jié)構(gòu)的考查,是短文改錯中的另外一個重點(diǎn)。每年的短文改錯試題都會涉及句子,特別是句型的考查。所以在平時,同學(xué)們要分清主語、謂語、賓語、補(bǔ)語、定語和狀語等6種基本句子成分及其用法。
2. 遵循改錯原則,牢記解題規(guī)范。根據(jù)高考英語考試說明,高考英語短文改錯題錯誤的改正必須遵循兩個原則:①盡可能少改動,即改正錯誤時只能在一行中增加一詞、減少一詞或改動一詞。如果不了解或不重視這一原則,必然會造成改對但不得分的遺憾現(xiàn)象。②盡可能維持原意。一些短文改錯的試題乍一看好像不止一種改法,實(shí)際上根據(jù)“限度維持原意”的原則卻只有一種正確改法。
3. 把握分行技巧,提高語境得分。為檢測根據(jù)語境邏輯發(fā)現(xiàn)并改正錯誤的能力,短文改錯題常設(shè)置有語境題。對這樣的命題特點(diǎn),同學(xué)們要引起特別的重視,在平時練習(xí)時學(xué)會不要以“行”為單位,而要以句,有時候甚至以段為單位通讀、分析上下文,從而在語境中發(fā)現(xiàn)錯誤并改正錯誤。
4. 利用母語翻譯,巧解語義試題。短文改錯是考查同學(xué)們根據(jù)語境、邏輯改正語言錯誤的試題,因此同學(xué)們必須有較強(qiáng)的語境分析能力,然而絕大多數(shù)同學(xué)都沒有用英語進(jìn)行思維的習(xí)慣。因此他們不把目光放在理解語境上,而放在試題文字上,試圖找到明顯的語言錯誤。不否認(rèn)這么做也能解出部分試題,但卻無法解出語境試題。針對這種情況,同學(xué)們應(yīng)學(xué)會用母語翻譯法分析語境從而發(fā)現(xiàn)并改正錯誤。
除此之外,每年都還有不少同學(xué)大小寫意識淡薄,書寫單詞不規(guī)范,造成不必要失分。解題時應(yīng)注意大小寫,答好后應(yīng)復(fù)查大小寫,這樣才能保住解題成果,避免意外失分。
金題精練
一
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we had in 1. _________
the afternoon of last Friday about the good and bad side2. _______
of setting firecrackers during the Spring Festival. 50 boy and 3. _________
40 girl students attended to the discussion. As a result, 30% of 4. ____________
them believe that setting off firecrackers certainly add pleasure 5. _______________
and joy to the festival, therefore, it was a wonderful tradition.6. ________________
But another 50% of students think that setting off firecrackers7. ________________
causes air or noise pollution, and what’s worse, it sometimes 8. __________________
causes terribly accidents to us and to our property. The other 20% 9. ___________
has never thought about it or don’t care. 10. ____________
二
Nowadays, some students would not like to live in a dorm(宿舍).1. _______
Instead, they rented houses outside the school. There are 2. ____________
advantages for all. Living in a dorm can increase friendship and 3. _______
cooperation among classmates, but of course it is safer. A dorm 4. ________
is more like a society, where enables students to learn to get along with 5. __________
the each other, thus preparing for the social life later. As for renting 6. ____________
houses to live alone, it’s better for study as you can feel freely in7. _____________
your own room without interrupted by others. As a result, you 8. ____________
can have more time and devote yourself to study wholeheartedly. 9. ___________
But there may appear a few safety problem as you live outside the school.10. ___________
Anyhow as a student, I prefer living in a dorm.
三
Mr. Huang is sixty years old. He has retired. He taught our 1. _________
Chemistry when we were in Senior Grade One. He was old, and2. _____________
he taught very well. He tried his best to make his classes live. Mr. 3. ________
Huang usually made good preparation for the lessons and was 4. __________
strict with us too. Each time we made mistakes in our homework, 5. __________
he would ask us to correct them. At time, I was rather poor in 6. _________
chemistry. Mr. Huang often helps me with my study very 7. __________
Patiently. As his help, I made great progress and caught 8. _______________
up with the class. He wasn’t always very kind to every student. As 9. ____________
an experiencing teacher, he was respected and loved by all 10. ___________
the students.
參考答案
(一)
1. in改為on;2. side改為sides;3. setting之后加off;
4. 去掉to;5. add改為adds;6. was改為is;
7. 正確;8. or改為and;9. terribly改為terrible;
10. has改為have
(二)
1. 正確;2. rented改為rent;3. all改為both;
4. but改為and;5. where改為which;6. 去掉each other前面的the;
7. freely改為free;8. without后加being;9. study改為studying;
10. problem改為problems;
(三)
1. our改為us;2. and改為but;3. live改為lively;
4. preparation改為preparations;5. 正確;6. At 后加one;
7. helps改為helped;8. As改為With;9. wasn’t改為was;
10. experiencing改為experienced