（四）動詞形式不正確
考生容易犯的錯誤還有對動詞在不同地方使用的形式把握不清，有的應(yīng)該使用動名詞的，卻直接用了動詞原形，有的應(yīng)該使用過去分詞的，卻是用了動名詞?？忌枳⒁庖韵聨c(diǎn)：固定搭配中的動詞形式；動名詞或動詞不定式可以作主語；不同時態(tài)、語態(tài)中的動詞形式。虛擬語氣也是寫作中容易出錯的地方，主要是由于考生在寫作中沒有使用虛擬語氣的意識。所以，在平時考生應(yīng)該加強(qiáng)對虛擬語氣的了解，注意虛擬語氣中動詞的使用。
1、Original: So take all the above factors into account，I may not quite agree with the opinion that parents are our best teaches.
Revised：So，taking all of the above factors into account，I do not agree with the opinion that parents are our best teachers.
本段開頭的so take all… 本應(yīng)該是伴隨狀語成分，但作者直接用了動詞原形，這是錯誤的，應(yīng)該和主句的主語I保持邏輯一致，是作者把以上的因素考慮在內(nèi)的。除此以外，原句中作者為能明確表明自己的立場，把may not quite agree改為do not agree。
2、Original：We can enjoy the art of cuisine in cooking rather than tolerating the time-consuming preparation.
Revised: We can enjoy the art of cooking rather than simply tolerate the time-consuming preparation.
rather than的前后用此應(yīng)保持一致，此處rather than后的用詞要與其前面的動詞原形enjoy保持一致，故將tolerating改為tolerate。原句中還有一個用此問題，cuisine本意為“烹飪”，與in cooking沖突，故只保留一個cooking即可。
3、Original：Drink water with hygiene will certainly benefit the local folks a lot.
Revised：Drinking clean water will certainly benefit the local population.
原句動名詞作主語，將drink該為drinking。原句中還有詞匯表達(dá)問題：干凈的水用clean water表達(dá)恰當(dāng)，不用water with hygiene。
4、Original：The rapid development of science and technology has lead to an increasing need for more relaxation in off-work time.
Revised：The rapid development of modern economies has led to an increasing need for more relaxation in off-work time.
原句中l(wèi)ead在現(xiàn)在完成時中應(yīng)該用過去分詞，應(yīng)該為led。
5、Original：CCTV 10 is such a channel intended to teach people...
Revised：CCTV 10 is a channe that teaches people...
原句中的intend不應(yīng)用過去分詞的形式。
6、Original：They keep focused on money while friends and families slip away.
Revised：They keep focusing on money while friends and families slip away.
focus（聚焦、集中于）此處應(yīng)該用動名詞形式，keep doing“一直做某事”，keep focusing on。
（五）名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)、冠詞的使用
1、Original：a even brighter future
Revised：an even brighter future
even是以元音因素開頭的，所以用不定冠詞an。
2、Original：I often watch TV with my father when there is a NBA game.
Revised：I often watch TV with my father when there is an NBA game.
字母N是以元音因素（e）開頭的，故用不定冠詞an。
3、Original：Additionally getting a job will enrich their experience and build up their resume，better preparing them for the future career.
Revised：Additionally getting a job will enrich their experience and build up their resume，better preparing them for future careers.
原句中是指“他們（年輕人）未來的事業(yè)”，這些人將來會有所不同的事業(yè)，故career要變復(fù)數(shù)；將來的事業(yè)此處不是特指，不需要加定冠詞the。
（六）用詞與文章風(fēng)格不符
在托福作為寫作中，應(yīng)避免使用口語化的詞或表達(dá)，如俚語、省略表達(dá)（can't）；也應(yīng)該避免使用概念較大或者學(xué)術(shù)性的詞或表達(dá)。
1、Original：It is in intelligence that makes people successful and earn large sum of bucks and gain great reputation！
Revised：So，I believe it is intelligence that leads to success in terms of financial wealth and reputation.
buck有“美元”的意思，但這是一種非常不正式的說法。在寫作中所使用的語言要注意整體的風(fēng)格，如果在正式的寫作中出現(xiàn)及其口語化或俚語化的詞語，會讓閱卷者感到很突兀。
2、Original：The international banks are cognizant of the new law's significance.
Revised：The international banks are aware of the new law'significance.
cognizant是十分正式的詞（屬于jargon），此處用aware即可，在托福寫作中，要避免使用屬于性質(zhì)的詞。
考生容易犯的錯誤還有對動詞在不同地方使用的形式把握不清，有的應(yīng)該使用動名詞的，卻直接用了動詞原形，有的應(yīng)該使用過去分詞的，卻是用了動名詞?？忌枳⒁庖韵聨c(diǎn)：固定搭配中的動詞形式；動名詞或動詞不定式可以作主語；不同時態(tài)、語態(tài)中的動詞形式。虛擬語氣也是寫作中容易出錯的地方，主要是由于考生在寫作中沒有使用虛擬語氣的意識。所以，在平時考生應(yīng)該加強(qiáng)對虛擬語氣的了解，注意虛擬語氣中動詞的使用。
1、Original: So take all the above factors into account，I may not quite agree with the opinion that parents are our best teaches.
Revised：So，taking all of the above factors into account，I do not agree with the opinion that parents are our best teachers.
本段開頭的so take all… 本應(yīng)該是伴隨狀語成分，但作者直接用了動詞原形，這是錯誤的，應(yīng)該和主句的主語I保持邏輯一致，是作者把以上的因素考慮在內(nèi)的。除此以外，原句中作者為能明確表明自己的立場，把may not quite agree改為do not agree。
2、Original：We can enjoy the art of cuisine in cooking rather than tolerating the time-consuming preparation.
Revised: We can enjoy the art of cooking rather than simply tolerate the time-consuming preparation.
rather than的前后用此應(yīng)保持一致，此處rather than后的用詞要與其前面的動詞原形enjoy保持一致，故將tolerating改為tolerate。原句中還有一個用此問題，cuisine本意為“烹飪”，與in cooking沖突，故只保留一個cooking即可。
3、Original：Drink water with hygiene will certainly benefit the local folks a lot.
Revised：Drinking clean water will certainly benefit the local population.
原句動名詞作主語，將drink該為drinking。原句中還有詞匯表達(dá)問題：干凈的水用clean water表達(dá)恰當(dāng)，不用water with hygiene。
4、Original：The rapid development of science and technology has lead to an increasing need for more relaxation in off-work time.
Revised：The rapid development of modern economies has led to an increasing need for more relaxation in off-work time.
原句中l(wèi)ead在現(xiàn)在完成時中應(yīng)該用過去分詞，應(yīng)該為led。
5、Original：CCTV 10 is such a channel intended to teach people...
Revised：CCTV 10 is a channe that teaches people...
原句中的intend不應(yīng)用過去分詞的形式。
6、Original：They keep focused on money while friends and families slip away.
Revised：They keep focusing on money while friends and families slip away.
focus（聚焦、集中于）此處應(yīng)該用動名詞形式，keep doing“一直做某事”，keep focusing on。
（五）名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)、冠詞的使用
1、Original：a even brighter future
Revised：an even brighter future
even是以元音因素開頭的，所以用不定冠詞an。
2、Original：I often watch TV with my father when there is a NBA game.
Revised：I often watch TV with my father when there is an NBA game.
字母N是以元音因素（e）開頭的，故用不定冠詞an。
3、Original：Additionally getting a job will enrich their experience and build up their resume，better preparing them for the future career.
Revised：Additionally getting a job will enrich their experience and build up their resume，better preparing them for future careers.
原句中是指“他們（年輕人）未來的事業(yè)”，這些人將來會有所不同的事業(yè)，故career要變復(fù)數(shù)；將來的事業(yè)此處不是特指，不需要加定冠詞the。
（六）用詞與文章風(fēng)格不符
在托福作為寫作中，應(yīng)避免使用口語化的詞或表達(dá)，如俚語、省略表達(dá)（can't）；也應(yīng)該避免使用概念較大或者學(xué)術(shù)性的詞或表達(dá)。
1、Original：It is in intelligence that makes people successful and earn large sum of bucks and gain great reputation！
Revised：So，I believe it is intelligence that leads to success in terms of financial wealth and reputation.
buck有“美元”的意思，但這是一種非常不正式的說法。在寫作中所使用的語言要注意整體的風(fēng)格，如果在正式的寫作中出現(xiàn)及其口語化或俚語化的詞語，會讓閱卷者感到很突兀。
2、Original：The international banks are cognizant of the new law's significance.
Revised：The international banks are aware of the new law'significance.
cognizant是十分正式的詞（屬于jargon），此處用aware即可，在托福寫作中，要避免使用屬于性質(zhì)的詞。