本文所闡述的幾個原則是 SAT 寫作時應(yīng)當遵循的基本原則。但是同學們在練習或考試的時候,不要受此困擾,而要把它們當成提示要點,掌握這些要點,從而不斷地鞏固寫作技能。在此過程中,切忌急躁,注意吸收所述原則的內(nèi)容。其次要注意多做練習,把你的答案與正確表達進行對比,確保能理解每句話中的錯誤,這樣才能在實際考試的時候避免犯同樣的錯誤。
一、 避免使用俚語和口語
盡量避免在正式的寫作中使用俚語和口語,因為它們使用并不普遍,所以極易使讀者誤解作者要表達的意思。例如:
錯誤: She plays a wicked game of tennis.
正確: She excels in tennis.
錯誤: John has been doing a science for years.
正確: John has been a scientist for years.
錯誤: The blackened salmon’s been one of the restaurant’s most popular entrees.
正確: The blackened salmon has been one of the restaurant’s most popular entrees.
稍作思考,你就會選擇正確的用法。注意要堅持使用標準用法,拋棄非正式場合用語以及表述不清晰的縮寫等用法。
二、 避免使用不完整或冗長的句式
不完整的句式?jīng)]有獨立的從句;而冗長的句式則有兩個以上的從句,而這若干從句之間并沒有恰當?shù)劂暯?。這兩種錯誤都是我們應(yīng)該努力避免的,具體做法如下。
不完整的句式
正式寫作中的每句話都必須有獨立從句。所謂獨立從句,就是包含主語、謂語,并且不以下述連詞作為句子開頭:
After if than whenever although in order that though where as provided that unless whether because since until while before so that
錯誤: Global warming. This is what the scientists and journalists are worried about.
正確: Global warming is the cause of concern for scientists and journalists.
注意,以并列連詞 ——and 、 but 、 or 、 nor 和 for 作為單句的開頭,則是可以接受的。例如:
正確: Most people would agree that indigent patients should receive wonderful health care. But every treatment has its price.
冗長的句式
在時間緊張的情況下,不少學生寫出來的句子沒有標點連接,或者只有逗號。例如:
Current insurance practices are unfair they discriminate against the people who need insurance most.
我們有三種修改方法:
1) 標注句號: Current insurance practices are unfair. They discriminate against the people who need insurance most.
這樣,一個獨立的句子就變成幾個獨立的從句。
2) 標注分號: Current insurance practices are unfair; they discriminate against the people who need insurance most. 利用分號把具有獨立意義的句式分開,但同時向讀者表明句子表示的含義之間存在一定聯(lián)系。
3) 利用連詞: Current insurance practices are unfair in that they discriminate against the people who need insurance most. 這也是的修改方法,從句仍然是獨立的,同時也表明了從句之間的聯(lián)系。
出現(xiàn)冗長句式還有一個原因,就是誤用 however 、 nevertheless 、 furthermore 、 likewise 、 therefore 等副詞。例如:
錯誤: Current insurance practices are discriminatory, furthermore they make insurance too expensive for the poor.
正確: Current insurance practices are discriminatory. Furthermore, they make insurance too expensive for the poor.
三、 正確使用標點符號
1 .逗號
請遵循以下 4 大規(guī)則:
1. 用逗號分開系列成分。如果有 2 個以上相同成分,則應(yīng)用逗號分開;例如:
My recipe for buttermilk biscuits contains flour, soda and buttermilk.
2. 使用逗號來分開插入從句和短語;例如:
Gordon, who is a writer by profession, bakes an excellent cheesecake.
3. 在引導性分詞或介詞短語后使用逗號;例如:
After the banquet, Harold and Martha went dancing.
4. 利用逗號來分開連詞連接的獨立從句。例如:
Susan’s old car has been belching blue smoke from the tailpipe for two weeks, but it has not broken down yet.
2 .分號
請遵循以下 2 大規(guī)則:
1. 使用分號而不是并列連詞來連接兩個含義緊密的獨立從句;例如:
Whooping cranes are an endangered species; they are unlikely to survive if we continue to pollute.
2. therefore 、 nevertheless 和 moreover 等詞連接的獨立從句可用分號隔開。例如:
The staff meeting has been postponed until next Thursday; therefore, I will be unable to get approval for my project until then.
3 .冒號
請遵循以下 3 大規(guī)則:
1. 在正式的寫作中,冒號的作用僅在于表明其后是對前面所述內(nèi)容的詳細說明、定義、解釋或過去發(fā)生事情的概述。冒號之前一般是獨立從句,并且通常情況下有 as follows 、 the following 、 namely 或 like 等提示短語。例如:
正確: Your instructions are as follows: read the passage carefully, answer the questions on the last page, and turn over your answer sheet.
2. 動詞和直接賓語間不要放冒號。例如:
錯誤: I want: a slice of pizza and a small green salad.
正確: This is what I want: A slice of pizza and a small green salad.
3. 如果前后兩句話有如上所述的緊密關(guān)系,即使沒有上述表示這層關(guān)系的短語,也可使用冒號,并且在這種情況下,句號也可用。例如:
正確: We were aghast: The “charming country inn” that had been advertised in such glowing terms proved to be a leaking cabin full of mosquitoes.
4 .連字符號和破折號
請遵循以下 7 大規(guī)則:
1. 行末單詞分開時使用連字符號。例如:
正確: In this incredible canvas, the artist used only monochromatic ele-
ments.
2. 表示 21-99 這些數(shù)字和用作形容詞的分數(shù)時,使用連字符號。
錯誤: A two thirds vote was necessary to carry the measure.
正確: A two-thirds vote was necessary to carry the measure.
3. 由前綴 ex 、 all 、 self 、 semi 或后綴 elect 構(gòu)成的詞語,前綴或后綴和主體之間應(yīng)有連字符號。
錯誤: The president elect was invited to chair the meeting.
正確: The president-elect was invited to chair the meeting.
4. 如果把復合形容詞放在所修飾詞語的前面,則該形容詞各部分應(yīng)由連字符號分開。
正確: The no-holds-barred argument continued into the night.
5. 專有名詞或形容詞前添加前綴,兩部分應(yīng)由連字符號隔開。例如:
錯誤: His pro African sentiments were heartily applauded.
正確: His pro-African sentiments were heartily applauded.
6. 如果復合構(gòu)詞法構(gòu)成的詞語容易與其他詞語混淆,或者導致元音字母相鄰,則應(yīng)用連字符號隔開。例如:
錯誤: Most buildings in the ghost town are recreations of the original structures.
正確: Most buildings in the ghost town are re-creations of the original structures.
錯誤: She took an antiinflammatory drug for her sports injury.
正確: She took an anti-inflammatory drug for her sports injury.
7. 用破折號表明思路的突然變化。
正確: To get a high score—and who doesn’t want to get a high score—you need to devote yourself to prolonged and concentrated study.
5 .撇號
請遵循以下 3 大規(guī)則:
1. 表明動詞縮寫,但是在作文開始中應(yīng)盡量避免縮寫。
2. 表明名詞所有格。
3. 代詞都另有單詞表示其所有格,比較特殊的是中性詞 one ,其所有格為 one 加上撇號和 s 。
四、 正確使用修飾語
單詞在句中的位置往往決定該單詞與句中其他單詞的關(guān)系,對修飾語而言尤其如此。修飾語和被修飾成分應(yīng)在所有格和數(shù)上保持一致。如果修飾語和被修飾成分隔開太遠,則容易導致語意模糊,所以應(yīng)盡量避免出現(xiàn)這種情況。例如:
錯誤: Cheung and Martha sat talking about the movie in the office.
正確: Cheung and Martha sat in the office talking about the movie.
五、 正確使用代詞
使用代詞的時候,應(yīng)明確其所指稱或代表的先行詞。如果容易引起歧義,應(yīng)明確寫明先行詞,不用擔心重復。例如:
錯誤: The teacher told the student he was lazy.
正確: The student was lazy, and the teacher told him so.
避免用 this 、 that 、 it 或 which 來指代整個短語或句子,即使這些代詞與其指代的先行詞很近,你可以用這些詞再加上一個名詞來指代。例如:
錯誤: The salesman spoke loudly, swayed back and forth, and tapped the table nervously, which made his customers extremely nervous.
正確: The salesman spoke loudly, swayed back and forth, and tapped the table nervously, mannerisms which made his customers extremely nervous.
除非指代天氣,否則句子開頭不要用 it 指代。
錯誤: It is difficult to distinguish between the scent of roses and that of tulips.
正確: T o distinguish between the scent of roses and that of tulips is difficult.
少數(shù)不定代詞( some 、 all 、 most 、 any 、 none )既可以指代單數(shù)名詞,也可以指代復數(shù)名詞。當這些代詞做主語時,必須明白其先行詞是單數(shù)還是復數(shù)。
錯誤: His superiors have been following his progress. Some are more impressed than others. None are overwhelmed.
記?。阂?-body 、 -one 、和 -thing 結(jié)尾的代詞在數(shù)上始終是單數(shù)含義; both 、 few 、 many 、 several 等代詞在數(shù)上始終是復數(shù)含義。
一、 避免使用俚語和口語
盡量避免在正式的寫作中使用俚語和口語,因為它們使用并不普遍,所以極易使讀者誤解作者要表達的意思。例如:
錯誤: She plays a wicked game of tennis.
正確: She excels in tennis.
錯誤: John has been doing a science for years.
正確: John has been a scientist for years.
錯誤: The blackened salmon’s been one of the restaurant’s most popular entrees.
正確: The blackened salmon has been one of the restaurant’s most popular entrees.
稍作思考,你就會選擇正確的用法。注意要堅持使用標準用法,拋棄非正式場合用語以及表述不清晰的縮寫等用法。
二、 避免使用不完整或冗長的句式
不完整的句式?jīng)]有獨立的從句;而冗長的句式則有兩個以上的從句,而這若干從句之間并沒有恰當?shù)劂暯?。這兩種錯誤都是我們應(yīng)該努力避免的,具體做法如下。
不完整的句式
正式寫作中的每句話都必須有獨立從句。所謂獨立從句,就是包含主語、謂語,并且不以下述連詞作為句子開頭:
After if than whenever although in order that though where as provided that unless whether because since until while before so that
錯誤: Global warming. This is what the scientists and journalists are worried about.
正確: Global warming is the cause of concern for scientists and journalists.
注意,以并列連詞 ——and 、 but 、 or 、 nor 和 for 作為單句的開頭,則是可以接受的。例如:
正確: Most people would agree that indigent patients should receive wonderful health care. But every treatment has its price.
冗長的句式
在時間緊張的情況下,不少學生寫出來的句子沒有標點連接,或者只有逗號。例如:
Current insurance practices are unfair they discriminate against the people who need insurance most.
我們有三種修改方法:
1) 標注句號: Current insurance practices are unfair. They discriminate against the people who need insurance most.
這樣,一個獨立的句子就變成幾個獨立的從句。
2) 標注分號: Current insurance practices are unfair; they discriminate against the people who need insurance most. 利用分號把具有獨立意義的句式分開,但同時向讀者表明句子表示的含義之間存在一定聯(lián)系。
3) 利用連詞: Current insurance practices are unfair in that they discriminate against the people who need insurance most. 這也是的修改方法,從句仍然是獨立的,同時也表明了從句之間的聯(lián)系。
出現(xiàn)冗長句式還有一個原因,就是誤用 however 、 nevertheless 、 furthermore 、 likewise 、 therefore 等副詞。例如:
錯誤: Current insurance practices are discriminatory, furthermore they make insurance too expensive for the poor.
正確: Current insurance practices are discriminatory. Furthermore, they make insurance too expensive for the poor.
三、 正確使用標點符號
1 .逗號
請遵循以下 4 大規(guī)則:
1. 用逗號分開系列成分。如果有 2 個以上相同成分,則應(yīng)用逗號分開;例如:
My recipe for buttermilk biscuits contains flour, soda and buttermilk.
2. 使用逗號來分開插入從句和短語;例如:
Gordon, who is a writer by profession, bakes an excellent cheesecake.
3. 在引導性分詞或介詞短語后使用逗號;例如:
After the banquet, Harold and Martha went dancing.
4. 利用逗號來分開連詞連接的獨立從句。例如:
Susan’s old car has been belching blue smoke from the tailpipe for two weeks, but it has not broken down yet.
2 .分號
請遵循以下 2 大規(guī)則:
1. 使用分號而不是并列連詞來連接兩個含義緊密的獨立從句;例如:
Whooping cranes are an endangered species; they are unlikely to survive if we continue to pollute.
2. therefore 、 nevertheless 和 moreover 等詞連接的獨立從句可用分號隔開。例如:
The staff meeting has been postponed until next Thursday; therefore, I will be unable to get approval for my project until then.
3 .冒號
請遵循以下 3 大規(guī)則:
1. 在正式的寫作中,冒號的作用僅在于表明其后是對前面所述內(nèi)容的詳細說明、定義、解釋或過去發(fā)生事情的概述。冒號之前一般是獨立從句,并且通常情況下有 as follows 、 the following 、 namely 或 like 等提示短語。例如:
正確: Your instructions are as follows: read the passage carefully, answer the questions on the last page, and turn over your answer sheet.
2. 動詞和直接賓語間不要放冒號。例如:
錯誤: I want: a slice of pizza and a small green salad.
正確: This is what I want: A slice of pizza and a small green salad.
3. 如果前后兩句話有如上所述的緊密關(guān)系,即使沒有上述表示這層關(guān)系的短語,也可使用冒號,并且在這種情況下,句號也可用。例如:
正確: We were aghast: The “charming country inn” that had been advertised in such glowing terms proved to be a leaking cabin full of mosquitoes.
4 .連字符號和破折號
請遵循以下 7 大規(guī)則:
1. 行末單詞分開時使用連字符號。例如:
正確: In this incredible canvas, the artist used only monochromatic ele-
ments.
2. 表示 21-99 這些數(shù)字和用作形容詞的分數(shù)時,使用連字符號。
錯誤: A two thirds vote was necessary to carry the measure.
正確: A two-thirds vote was necessary to carry the measure.
3. 由前綴 ex 、 all 、 self 、 semi 或后綴 elect 構(gòu)成的詞語,前綴或后綴和主體之間應(yīng)有連字符號。
錯誤: The president elect was invited to chair the meeting.
正確: The president-elect was invited to chair the meeting.
4. 如果把復合形容詞放在所修飾詞語的前面,則該形容詞各部分應(yīng)由連字符號分開。
正確: The no-holds-barred argument continued into the night.
5. 專有名詞或形容詞前添加前綴,兩部分應(yīng)由連字符號隔開。例如:
錯誤: His pro African sentiments were heartily applauded.
正確: His pro-African sentiments were heartily applauded.
6. 如果復合構(gòu)詞法構(gòu)成的詞語容易與其他詞語混淆,或者導致元音字母相鄰,則應(yīng)用連字符號隔開。例如:
錯誤: Most buildings in the ghost town are recreations of the original structures.
正確: Most buildings in the ghost town are re-creations of the original structures.
錯誤: She took an antiinflammatory drug for her sports injury.
正確: She took an anti-inflammatory drug for her sports injury.
7. 用破折號表明思路的突然變化。
正確: To get a high score—and who doesn’t want to get a high score—you need to devote yourself to prolonged and concentrated study.
5 .撇號
請遵循以下 3 大規(guī)則:
1. 表明動詞縮寫,但是在作文開始中應(yīng)盡量避免縮寫。
2. 表明名詞所有格。
3. 代詞都另有單詞表示其所有格,比較特殊的是中性詞 one ,其所有格為 one 加上撇號和 s 。
四、 正確使用修飾語
單詞在句中的位置往往決定該單詞與句中其他單詞的關(guān)系,對修飾語而言尤其如此。修飾語和被修飾成分應(yīng)在所有格和數(shù)上保持一致。如果修飾語和被修飾成分隔開太遠,則容易導致語意模糊,所以應(yīng)盡量避免出現(xiàn)這種情況。例如:
錯誤: Cheung and Martha sat talking about the movie in the office.
正確: Cheung and Martha sat in the office talking about the movie.
五、 正確使用代詞
使用代詞的時候,應(yīng)明確其所指稱或代表的先行詞。如果容易引起歧義,應(yīng)明確寫明先行詞,不用擔心重復。例如:
錯誤: The teacher told the student he was lazy.
正確: The student was lazy, and the teacher told him so.
避免用 this 、 that 、 it 或 which 來指代整個短語或句子,即使這些代詞與其指代的先行詞很近,你可以用這些詞再加上一個名詞來指代。例如:
錯誤: The salesman spoke loudly, swayed back and forth, and tapped the table nervously, which made his customers extremely nervous.
正確: The salesman spoke loudly, swayed back and forth, and tapped the table nervously, mannerisms which made his customers extremely nervous.
除非指代天氣,否則句子開頭不要用 it 指代。
錯誤: It is difficult to distinguish between the scent of roses and that of tulips.
正確: T o distinguish between the scent of roses and that of tulips is difficult.
少數(shù)不定代詞( some 、 all 、 most 、 any 、 none )既可以指代單數(shù)名詞,也可以指代復數(shù)名詞。當這些代詞做主語時,必須明白其先行詞是單數(shù)還是復數(shù)。
錯誤: His superiors have been following his progress. Some are more impressed than others. None are overwhelmed.
記?。阂?-body 、 -one 、和 -thing 結(jié)尾的代詞在數(shù)上始終是單數(shù)含義; both 、 few 、 many 、 several 等代詞在數(shù)上始終是復數(shù)含義。