法則五:避免使用俚語
SAT的寫作考試,要求的是一篇有專業(yè)性的寫作,而不是一篇日記或隨筆。所以使用俚語不應該在SAT的考試中出現(xiàn)。例如,在高考的時候,考生把“我要去…”寫成“俺要去…”加有地方方言的語言方式。下面讓我們通過英文的例子來說明;
例1 Brian’s mother reprimanded him for blowing his physic test.
Improved: Brian’s mother reprimanded him for failing his physic test.
同樣的,考生在寫作的時候,也應該盡量避免太多學術性強的語言。批卷的老師很有可能并不想你一樣是個電腦高手。他或她可能只明白一些初級的電腦詞匯,對于那些技術性強的詞匯,可以一竅不通。 下面讓我們通過英文的例子來說明;
例2 Close-support, transport, and reconnaissance assistance is provided by the S-3X helicopter, which is the most cost effective in a crane configuration.
Improved: The S-3X helicopter provides support, transportation, and reconnaissance. However, the helicopter is most cost effective when it works as a crane.
下面讓我們來做一些練習題;把下面句中的俚語和專業(yè)詞匯更換成簡單易懂的詞匯
1. Ian raced ahead of the curl and carved a bottom turn that would do credit to a butcher
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2. The police collared the man and woman as they ran from the store that they had ripped off.
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3. Sergio thought that pearl was awesome because of the way that she protected the goal.
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參考答案
Ian rode down the wave and made an excellent turn.
The police apprehended the man and woman as they ran from the store that they had robbed.
Sergio thought that pearl was a great goalkeeper because of the many saves she made.
SAT的寫作考試,要求的是一篇有專業(yè)性的寫作,而不是一篇日記或隨筆。所以使用俚語不應該在SAT的考試中出現(xiàn)。例如,在高考的時候,考生把“我要去…”寫成“俺要去…”加有地方方言的語言方式。下面讓我們通過英文的例子來說明;
例1 Brian’s mother reprimanded him for blowing his physic test.
Improved: Brian’s mother reprimanded him for failing his physic test.
同樣的,考生在寫作的時候,也應該盡量避免太多學術性強的語言。批卷的老師很有可能并不想你一樣是個電腦高手。他或她可能只明白一些初級的電腦詞匯,對于那些技術性強的詞匯,可以一竅不通。 下面讓我們通過英文的例子來說明;
例2 Close-support, transport, and reconnaissance assistance is provided by the S-3X helicopter, which is the most cost effective in a crane configuration.
Improved: The S-3X helicopter provides support, transportation, and reconnaissance. However, the helicopter is most cost effective when it works as a crane.
下面讓我們來做一些練習題;把下面句中的俚語和專業(yè)詞匯更換成簡單易懂的詞匯
1. Ian raced ahead of the curl and carved a bottom turn that would do credit to a butcher
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2. The police collared the man and woman as they ran from the store that they had ripped off.
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3. Sergio thought that pearl was awesome because of the way that she protected the goal.
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參考答案
Ian rode down the wave and made an excellent turn.
The police apprehended the man and woman as they ran from the store that they had robbed.
Sergio thought that pearl was a great goalkeeper because of the many saves she made.