【題目】
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On the Importance of a Name. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.
1. 有人說名字或名稱很重要
2. 也有人覺得名字或名稱無關(guān)緊要
3. 我認(rèn)為…
On the Importance of a Name
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【點(diǎn)評(píng)】
看到題目，根本沒有辦法從點(diǎn)評(píng)的角度去分析。因?yàn)檫@次題目的特點(diǎn)如下：
一、 簡(jiǎn)單（標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的議論文，而且不需要自行整理結(jié)構(gòu)的那種）
二、 傳統(tǒng)（沒有任何標(biāo)新立意，甚至有一種想法認(rèn)為，這個(gè)題目出的事不是沒有辦法的辦法，當(dāng)然是玩笑）
三、 標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（符合六級(jí)作文的重點(diǎn)考察文體）
對(duì)于這次的作文，要完成一篇高質(zhì)量的文章其實(shí)根本就不難。根據(jù)作文寫作要求文章的結(jié)構(gòu)可以清晰地闡述如下：
第一段：關(guān)于名字這個(gè)現(xiàn)象的引入+提出欲論證的語(yǔ)言；
第二段：結(jié)合題目要求，進(jìn)行兩項(xiàng)觀點(diǎn)的論證（注意稍微有些原因闡述，不宜過多，否則字?jǐn)?shù)上不好掌握）
第三段：承接上文，提出自己的觀點(diǎn)并論證（同樣注意理由的闡述要控制，否則同樣會(huì)被認(rèn)為寫文章沒有控制力）
下面，就給出我自己寫的一篇范文。大家千萬注意，沒有所謂真正的范文。任何人寫出來的文章其實(shí)都可以得滿分。我的這篇文章其實(shí)某種意義上來說，就是為了印證課堂上反復(fù)強(qiáng)調(diào)的關(guān)于寫作能力的展示。
On the importance of a name
A name is the representation of a person's identification and, to some extent, can demonstrate his character. In current days, however, whether a name plays a significant role has been in hot discussion.
Some argue that it exerts a subtle but indispensable influence on our lives. To start with, no matter where they go and what they do, they more often than not fail to live without identification. Besides, a name perhaps can assist them to be recognized remembered by others relatively with ease. While the rest hold the other side of the picture that a name fundamentally has no effect on their lives, for they state they are still able to make friends or cooperate with others without a name, a simply name.
As far as I am concerned, so crucial is the name a man possesses that everyone can not desert it. First, it is the name that stands for the symbol of our individuals. Furthermore, common as the name perhaps is, it really assists us to live, work, communicate and cooperate with others. It is extremely hard for us to imagine we even live without knowing the names of the people we were, are and will be with. Only when we remember, or know at least, the names of the people can we establish reasonable and pleasant relations with them, which will surely do more good than harm to our present world.
寫有不對(duì)之處，還請(qǐng)同學(xué)們多多指教！
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On the Importance of a Name. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.
1. 有人說名字或名稱很重要
2. 也有人覺得名字或名稱無關(guān)緊要
3. 我認(rèn)為…
On the Importance of a Name
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
【點(diǎn)評(píng)】
看到題目，根本沒有辦法從點(diǎn)評(píng)的角度去分析。因?yàn)檫@次題目的特點(diǎn)如下：
一、 簡(jiǎn)單（標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的議論文，而且不需要自行整理結(jié)構(gòu)的那種）
二、 傳統(tǒng)（沒有任何標(biāo)新立意，甚至有一種想法認(rèn)為，這個(gè)題目出的事不是沒有辦法的辦法，當(dāng)然是玩笑）
三、 標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（符合六級(jí)作文的重點(diǎn)考察文體）
對(duì)于這次的作文，要完成一篇高質(zhì)量的文章其實(shí)根本就不難。根據(jù)作文寫作要求文章的結(jié)構(gòu)可以清晰地闡述如下：
第一段：關(guān)于名字這個(gè)現(xiàn)象的引入+提出欲論證的語(yǔ)言；
第二段：結(jié)合題目要求，進(jìn)行兩項(xiàng)觀點(diǎn)的論證（注意稍微有些原因闡述，不宜過多，否則字?jǐn)?shù)上不好掌握）
第三段：承接上文，提出自己的觀點(diǎn)并論證（同樣注意理由的闡述要控制，否則同樣會(huì)被認(rèn)為寫文章沒有控制力）
下面，就給出我自己寫的一篇范文。大家千萬注意，沒有所謂真正的范文。任何人寫出來的文章其實(shí)都可以得滿分。我的這篇文章其實(shí)某種意義上來說，就是為了印證課堂上反復(fù)強(qiáng)調(diào)的關(guān)于寫作能力的展示。
On the importance of a name
A name is the representation of a person's identification and, to some extent, can demonstrate his character. In current days, however, whether a name plays a significant role has been in hot discussion.
Some argue that it exerts a subtle but indispensable influence on our lives. To start with, no matter where they go and what they do, they more often than not fail to live without identification. Besides, a name perhaps can assist them to be recognized remembered by others relatively with ease. While the rest hold the other side of the picture that a name fundamentally has no effect on their lives, for they state they are still able to make friends or cooperate with others without a name, a simply name.
As far as I am concerned, so crucial is the name a man possesses that everyone can not desert it. First, it is the name that stands for the symbol of our individuals. Furthermore, common as the name perhaps is, it really assists us to live, work, communicate and cooperate with others. It is extremely hard for us to imagine we even live without knowing the names of the people we were, are and will be with. Only when we remember, or know at least, the names of the people can we establish reasonable and pleasant relations with them, which will surely do more good than harm to our present world.
寫有不對(duì)之處，還請(qǐng)同學(xué)們多多指教！