Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Does a Student Need Private Tutoring? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline （given in Chinese） below:
1）根據(jù)調(diào)查，目前在全國(guó)的大城市中有大約80%的中學(xué)生都有私人家教
2）分析中學(xué)生請(qǐng)家教的利弊
3）你的看法
Does a Student Need Private Tutoring?
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行文思路
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析這種現(xiàn)象的利弊，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)劇拔摇钡目捶ǎ纱丝膳袛啾疚膽?yīng)為對(duì)比選擇型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：描述中學(xué)生請(qǐng)家教的現(xiàn)狀;分析中學(xué)生請(qǐng)家教的利弊;談?wù)劇拔摇睂?duì)中學(xué)生請(qǐng)家教現(xiàn)象的看法。
高分范文
Does a Student Need Private Tutoring?
A recent investigation shows that about 70 percent of middle school students in cities have private tutors. Such a popular practice indicates that people are [1]attaching greater importance to education. [2]However, private tutoring [3]has both advantages and disadvantages.
Many parents have no enough ability or time to help their children in study. Private tutoring is a good solution to this problem. [2]In addition, private tutoring is usually one-to-one, so the teacher can know [4]the weak points as well as [4]the strong points of the pupil, and thus teaching is, [5]in most cases, directly to the point. [2]On the other hand, private tutoring has its own disadvantages.
[2]For one thing, it takes up so much of the pupil's time that he can hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment. [2]For another, some tutors, [5]busy “shuttling” from one family to another, [6]tend to neglect their teaching duties as tutors.
[7]Considering the above-mentioned, I think [3]the disadvantages of private tutoring outweigh its advantages.
In my opinion, greater emphasis should be laid [8]on classroom teaching and practice, [8]on the improvement of teaching quality [8]and on the tapping of the pupil's potential. [9]Only in this way can a new generation be healthily brought up.
亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)
[1]“非常關(guān)注”。
[2]過(guò)渡銜接詞語(yǔ)，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。
[3]“有利有弊”?！氨状笥诶薄?BR> [4]“弱點(diǎn)”。“優(yōu)點(diǎn)”。
[5]插入語(yǔ)。
[6]“傾向于，往往”。
[7]用于得出結(jié)論。considering用作介詞，意為“考慮到，鑒于”。
[8]and連接的平行結(jié)構(gòu)。
[9]“only+狀語(yǔ)”位于句首，引起句子部分倒裝。
佳句臨摩
1.佳句：Teaching is, in most cases, directly to the point.
臨摩：無(wú)論多么困難的一項(xiàng)任務(wù)，只要有決心都能夠完成。
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2.佳句：It takes up so much of the pupil's time that they can har
hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment.
臨摩：社會(huì)上有如此多的誘惑以至于稍一疏忽就可能誤入歧途。
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3.佳句：Some tutors tend to neglect their regular teaching duties.
臨摩： 傳統(tǒng)食物的烹飪往往很耗時(shí)，而且需要花費(fèi)很多時(shí)間和精力去學(xué)習(xí)。
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KEY:
1. A task, no matter how difficult it is, can be accomplished, provided that one makes up his mind to do it.
2. There are so many temptations in the society that with a little carelessness we may go astray.
3. The cooking of traditional food tends to be time-consuming and takes much time and energy to learn.
1）根據(jù)調(diào)查，目前在全國(guó)的大城市中有大約80%的中學(xué)生都有私人家教
2）分析中學(xué)生請(qǐng)家教的利弊
3）你的看法
Does a Student Need Private Tutoring?
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
行文思路
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析這種現(xiàn)象的利弊，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)劇拔摇钡目捶ǎ纱丝膳袛啾疚膽?yīng)為對(duì)比選擇型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：描述中學(xué)生請(qǐng)家教的現(xiàn)狀;分析中學(xué)生請(qǐng)家教的利弊;談?wù)劇拔摇睂?duì)中學(xué)生請(qǐng)家教現(xiàn)象的看法。
高分范文
Does a Student Need Private Tutoring?
A recent investigation shows that about 70 percent of middle school students in cities have private tutors. Such a popular practice indicates that people are [1]attaching greater importance to education. [2]However, private tutoring [3]has both advantages and disadvantages.
Many parents have no enough ability or time to help their children in study. Private tutoring is a good solution to this problem. [2]In addition, private tutoring is usually one-to-one, so the teacher can know [4]the weak points as well as [4]the strong points of the pupil, and thus teaching is, [5]in most cases, directly to the point. [2]On the other hand, private tutoring has its own disadvantages.
[2]For one thing, it takes up so much of the pupil's time that he can hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment. [2]For another, some tutors, [5]busy “shuttling” from one family to another, [6]tend to neglect their teaching duties as tutors.
[7]Considering the above-mentioned, I think [3]the disadvantages of private tutoring outweigh its advantages.
In my opinion, greater emphasis should be laid [8]on classroom teaching and practice, [8]on the improvement of teaching quality [8]and on the tapping of the pupil's potential. [9]Only in this way can a new generation be healthily brought up.
亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)
[1]“非常關(guān)注”。
[2]過(guò)渡銜接詞語(yǔ)，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。
[3]“有利有弊”?！氨状笥诶薄?BR> [4]“弱點(diǎn)”。“優(yōu)點(diǎn)”。
[5]插入語(yǔ)。
[6]“傾向于，往往”。
[7]用于得出結(jié)論。considering用作介詞，意為“考慮到，鑒于”。
[8]and連接的平行結(jié)構(gòu)。
[9]“only+狀語(yǔ)”位于句首，引起句子部分倒裝。
佳句臨摩
1.佳句：Teaching is, in most cases, directly to the point.
臨摩：無(wú)論多么困難的一項(xiàng)任務(wù)，只要有決心都能夠完成。
___________________________________________________________________________.
2.佳句：It takes up so much of the pupil's time that they can har
hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment.
臨摩：社會(huì)上有如此多的誘惑以至于稍一疏忽就可能誤入歧途。
___________________________________________________________________________.
3.佳句：Some tutors tend to neglect their regular teaching duties.
臨摩： 傳統(tǒng)食物的烹飪往往很耗時(shí)，而且需要花費(fèi)很多時(shí)間和精力去學(xué)習(xí)。
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KEY:
1. A task, no matter how difficult it is, can be accomplished, provided that one makes up his mind to do it.
2. There are so many temptations in the society that with a little carelessness we may go astray.
3. The cooking of traditional food tends to be time-consuming and takes much time and energy to learn.